Alright, I'm just going to write it out here.   This is my first fan-fiction, posted online here that is.  As English isn't my first language, I would be very thankful if you would point out any mistakes I will make or made. Having that said, it is a fan-fiction that I AM writing, I will consider suggestions, but I won't change the story because someone tells me to.. Also, I will read tips, feedback and even criticism, but only if it is formulated in a