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criszee
#1
Chapter 3: playfull GD but sweet
criszee
#2
Chapter 2: send flowers on the wrong floor? new tactics
criszee
#3
Chapter 1: dara dara dara . so cute
mslittleoc #4
Chapter 42: I don't know how you did it, but making readers feel all the emotions in this story even after so many times of reading this is a gift. Good luck on your future stories, I hope you will have all the inspirations you need to keep on writing..
silvernightt
#5
Chapter 7: this story is just soo well written!
lemonfresh #6
Chapter 23: always...this chapter, so...amazing...!
mslittleoc #7
Chapter 3: Re reading this again :)
shawolmungkey #8
Chapter 41: SO CHEESY CAN BOTH OF THEM I CAN'T WITH THE THREE STUPID WORDS LOLOL CNANCNSNNCNZNNCN AWWWWW please just make it a drama I supok! *grin* I love you huntress unnie and the RATED chapter me likey very likey lastly detruction met hymen
shawolmungkey #9
Chapter 35: i think im gonna cry my whole body juices out lol author-nim you're really something. how can you write until I cried like someone really passed away? I salute lol
shawolmungkey #10
Chapter 20: ㅠㅠ why why why why why
shawolmungkey #11
Chapter 19: wow top and bom
shawolmungkey #12
Chapter 17: TOP WHY YOU SO ADORABLE OMG ㅠㅠ and that two I really can't so done with them
shawolmungkey #13
Chapter 12: giddy-ing and laughing my off. KWONJIYOUNG's DESTRUTION *criessss*
shawolmungkey #14
Chapter 11: I died I died died I died. How I love her pretend KYAAAAAAAA-ying and take advantage of him. kwonjiyoungpleasejustkillmwyoutooy ㅠㅠ
shawolmungkey #15
Chapter 10: cnajcjjsncjsvjs can I die
shawolmungkey #16
Chapter 9: Il totally love it *fangirl mode on*
shawolmungkey #17
Chapter 5: jcjsncjjsjd goodnight babe kill
misshyori
#18
Chapter 41: What a cute and satisfying ending for the couple (:
edel16 #19
Chapter 31: DAEBAK.!!!! It's great!!!! It's awsome!!!!! Napakagaling!!!!!! Napakahusay!!!!!
edel16 #20
Chapter 31: Huntress your the best!!!!!i like it very much!!!.
laizamae #21
Chapter 1: supah like...!!!!
safiahazmi #22
Chapter 1: rereading this for the umpteenth time
gahoboss #23
Please check my daragon story~~
monicainggraeni
#24
Chapter 41: This is amazing story!!!
This is the MOST AMAZING story I ever read.
DAEBAKK!!
Sequel ?
applelee21 #25
Chapter 35: Yah!huntress~unni . .you made breathless upon reading this chap.!it drags meunt down counting d remaining scrolling sec. Upon scrolling down my screen. .medics! Pleaz!(where s dat f**king antiodiate)o_O ??s d speling right??breath apple breath. !garsh my mind s blowing u scared me dara-noona. . My brain s shouting. -no!no-good thing huntress unni theres anoderz chap. .it would b big strez 4 me. .good thing i re-read it again maybe after a year,i tot it end up on annual party. .kyah! !i miss distruction. .mfr~syndrome. .
MissIndie
#26
Chapter 41: one of the best fanfics I've read. I seriously love this, especially TOP!! His demeanor and childish behavior just cracked me up! Aish, I miss daddy young bae! ~ DARAGON is really so adorkable! And also, last but not the least the chicken incident / scenes are always epic!! ~ <3
corea18
#27
Chapter 40: you just complete me....i depressed and preoccupied from work but just like a pill this story is amazing...bravo authornim... excellent....to all greetings to all Arab/Filipino(fraternal side)and Chinese/ Indian (maternal side)...
ambonesevip
#28
Chapter 35: Read it for the fourth time! I'm falling in love with your masterpiece, author-nim!
:') Love the way you give us cliffhanger and unexpected twist! Can't wait for your another masterpiece!
ShowolELF97
#29
Chapter 42: OH MY GOSH!
This story officially Killed me!
I swear I was laughing, crying and feeling embarrassed as the whole story unfolded, this story has officially become my favourite and I am sad to have to part with it.
PLEAAASSSSEEEEEEE CAN YOU MAKE A SEQUEL???????? >.<
pinaywriter
#30
Chapter 29: Officially Together, every green appler and Appler's dream. Spot on! I love how you make cliffhangers. And in the future when I tell my writers how a cliffhanger is done I would make them read this fanfic. <3
pinaywriter
#31
Chapter 24: hehehe placing my comments here and in the fanpage. <3

The reverse scene killed. You guys have no idea just how loved and hot you would feel in real life when a man dresses you instead of undresses you. I am glad that I experienced that already. Grabe pramis. And the that great love of mine was a deputy grand treskilion (second in command in his chapter and was the former Master of Initiation) so MFR and gangsters remind me of how cool they can be but when they feel like their girl is in danger they're rampaging bulls. And so possessive...it melts you. He could fight 7 guys and still back to me *kinda sweaty* but intact.
Ah...BAD BOYS why you so loving.

I love MFR so muchee. Daebak!!!
ibgdta #32
Chapter 42: DAEBAK!!!how I wish to have a boyfriend like jiyong (lucky dara)..well you're really something authornim..thank you for this awesome fic..:)
Arem2013
#33
Chapter 42: yah !~ huntres congats you finished your story !
ehryllchica #34
Chapter 41: when they marry she'll be the descendant.. and one of the Black Flowers Triumvirate... which is super effin' cool :)))) myyy gadddd loved the gentle and sweet hytruction moment by the way ^^
nicoii
#35
Chapter 42: For the nth time.....done rereading :) this never fails to entertain me.
pinkyjhayzie #36
Chapter 41: ur so amazing huntress!!!U thank us, but WE thank U sooooo much for this fic.Done reading MFR,now im devoting my time for KTG, but that doesn't mean i wont re-read this amazing great story again..and im actually starting again..lol
santarrapark
#37
Chapter 41: Never getting tired reread this story. One of best daragon story I ever read. I adore you with all of my hearts sunbaenim *deepbows*
peppiwelsh1 #38
I've read more than 10 daragon fanfics and this is my favorite!!!
ehryllchica #39
Chapter 20: THIS IS MY FAVE CHAPTER SO FAR !!! HUNTRESS-NIM !!! I'M BLAMING YOU FOR MAKING ME CRY THIS HARD .. I'M TOTALLY CRYING MY OUT RIGHT NOW .. GAAADDD I DUNNO Y... MY HEART FEELS SUPER HEAVY AND I FEEL JI'S PAIN.. I PROLLY RELEASED A BUCKET OF TEARS BECAUSE OF THIS :'((( AND THE VIDEO !!!! GAAHHHH :'(((( I FEEL LIKE MY HEART SRSLY CRUSHED INTO PIECES.... </3
EvilAlpha1607
#40
I love this story so much never get tired of reading it ... i shall buy the book when i have the money xD ....
GanisVIP #41
i never get bored read this fanfic, over over and over
odiia1 #42
Chapter 41: This is the first fanfic I've ever read and it was amazingg! Gahhh, gave me butterflies :') thank you, and I wish I found out about this way earlier. Anyways, keep writing, you're a genius <3
allorysayshi
#43
Chapter 42: I have FINALLY finished! Phewf~

ERMAHGERD, I actually really loved this story :D.

Amazing<3
_gdragonnnnn #44
Chapter 20: This chapter is so sad :"( I cried </3
chacaprimalia #45
Chapter 5: i just started reading this fanfic! omo! where have I been.... this fanfics is sooo great <3
redmoonrising #46
Chapter 1: Definitely one of my favorite fanfics. Good Job!
peppiwelsh1 #47
Chapter 1: the best so far! keep it up huntress!
yangyoo #48
Chapter 1: kkk i like it, different with other story
deaprilly #49
Chapter 34: again.. I'm crying when Jiyong read the funeral invitation..... Il Woo is so freakin psycho..... but.... Ican't kill him.. because.... he's sooooo freakin handsome as well... *sigh* blame him and his beautiful face..
cindyGD
#50
Chapter 42: read this for 4th time already and will read it again (soon)
GREATEST STORY EVER <3
peppiwelsh1 #51
Chapter 7: I'm seriously LMFAOing since chapter 1... and there's still more to come! There goes my beauty sleep!
OliZsUmmErZ
#52
Chapter 41: 3rd time.
Wow!
It still effin blows my mind.
I already know each and every scene but i can't help but still be surprised, sad, happy, angry, frustrated all the way.. hehehe~~
Unnie, you make my gloomy days shine brighter ^-^
<jiyoung's cheesiness is a communicable disease i tell you...but a good one> :)
beelogkasiako #53
Chapter 41: woot woot!!! First i would like to thank Huntress for doing such an incredible job,,kinda feel bad that i didn't experience the agony of waiting with the updates with this fanfic..when i knew about this MFR it is already complete,nevertheless i still subscribed in your story :)

I am barely knew in this site, before i just check it out to kill time but because of this i religiously visit the site..and i will take the opportunity to leave a long comment since i missed out the fun before :) please bare with me, cause i just cant contain my feelings after reading this T_T and that is tear of joy

This fanfic is highly reccommended!!! it is MIND BLOWING, i learn a lot of things and new vocabulary,, CANOODLE,, that is so sick effin like it much :) and of course OVERIES EXPLODINGGGGG!!!!! loving the ..omo,,you turned me into Green Appler..and i am a new appler i only read daragon fanfic..but turning me into green appler,,huwaaaahhhh authornim its ur fault..hahahaha... i was like kyaaahhh....epistaxis all the way..

ILY huntress,,tell me how to buy publish MFR :) im a FAN!!!!!!!!!!
GanisVIP #54
Chapter 41: :(( the best fanfic evaaaa !!!!!
clearlee
#55
your trailer was really really good!! im gonna read this to the end. and it will be the first that i will finish XD
GanisVIP #56
read this for the 3rd time

eonnniee... I love u
rhodzgo #57
Chapter 3: Im now on my 7th time reading this.. nothing compares to this story.. I am really dying to have my own copy of the MFR book.. Soon I will have it! Thank you Huntress unnie..for making me happy thru your stories.. <3
syciliane
#58
Chapter 10: UNNIE!~ KNOW THE WORD, KILIG? I HAVE IT ALL OVER ME!! ^________^
rr_0519 #59
It was so good that i've already read it five times!!
deaprilly #60
Chapter 1: gonn read this for the second time.... aaakkkkk... sooooo exciteeedddd......
leggo!!! U.u
p0tchi #61
this is the first fanfic i've read for daragon. and it's good!
jiyungs_wife
#62
Chapter 42: Perfect endindg!!!!!!! But I kinda was disappointed that jiyung did not propose to dara ! I was so looking forward to that ! And I absolutely love top he is so funny !! And I hoped he would be with bom ! But sadly you didnt say anything about them so I will continue their fanfic from my own imagination! Favourite fanfic ever ! KAMSAHAMNIDA AUTHER-NIM:)
ant12345 #63
i want Gdragon to wear tight leather pants more often...so that i can see destruction..*kidding...or not..
pammies21 #64
The trailer was so funny =))) i cant stop my self from laughing! nice edit! now i'm gonna read it so excited. thanks for your 100% effort keep it up!
syciliane
#65
Chapter 4: LOVE IT! <3
nappeungizibe #66
i finished this story hours ago x__________x
so awesome
Ryoaboo
#67
This is probably the best fanfic I've read! I love it so much <3
I'd really love to buy the book!! Seriously the ending is just perfect omg
paula30 #68
heyy author , i just finished reading this story and omygod this story is seriously DAEBAKKK . anyways :) im new here and this is the first story i that i read , and i definitely dont regret reading it. GREATTT JOB!! im from hawaii btw . i hope bigbang and 2ne1 will have a concert here. im dying to see them! K BYE XDDD
missheart #69
love this story soooo much,,,,,,need a sequel please...
Pearlharbor073 #70
Chapter 30: Huntress unnie this is probably my nth time reading this..
Gaaaaahhhh it's so good..I really want a book of this ...kyaaaa love ya...knot this guy is definitely becoming my fav tooYOURE JJANG
flyingbearcookies
#71
Chapter 41: im back! to annoy the outta you. i read this again andddd.

GIVE ME ANOTHER FEW BONUS CHAPTERS BEFORE I TRACK YOU DOWN AND MURDER YOU SERIOUSLY YOU CANT JUST END IT LIKE THIS KRYSTAL AND WHATS-HER-FACESULLI HAVE TO GET PISSED THE FCK OUT OF YOU STUPID AUTHOR. HATE YOU WAIT I DONT MEAN IT UPDATE KNOW THIS GUY ARASSO? ?DONT BLOCK ME FOR SAYING THAT I WILL DIE IF I CANT ACESS YOUR LOVELY STORIES AND READ THEM A FEW BILLION MORE TIMES!!
joOstiA #72
Chapter 41: Watta complicated , lovely , beautiful story ... I REALLY REALLY LOVE IT ..
loveisnoteverything
#73
Chapter 41: OH PLUS GEEK AND JERK SOBS HAPPILY
loveisnoteverything
#74
Chapter 41: IS THERe A PERSON LIKE THIS JIYONG OUT THERE? /Dies/ GAAAAAAH I FINISHED IT I FInISHED IT OHMYGAAAHD THANK YOU FOR WRITING AND SHARING THIS ASDFGHJKL DARAGON FANFIC I SWEAR I FEEL INLOVE WITH THIS FIC. ITS ONE OF A KIND I MEAN ITS MY FIRST TIME READING A STORY WITH CHICKEN AS A PET LIKE WHETTFCK CHICKEN CHICKEN ID PROBABLY RUN FOR MY LIFE IF EVER I SEE SOMEONE CRADLING AND PETTIBG A CHICKEN. BUT OMYFOOOORK BEST STORY. EVERYTHINGS IN IT! IT MADE ME CRACK UP LIKE HELL PLUS #DARATRUCTION SCENES FOR THE WIN!! GAAAAAAAAAAH I NEED MORE!!!! SOBS. IS THIS GOODBYE? MEEEH ILL RE READ WHEN I HAVE THE TIME. I DONT HAVE THE TIME AS FOR NOW BECAUSE... OFF TO YOUR OTHER DARAGON FIC. = ̄ω ̄=
loveisnoteverything
#75
Chapter 39: Sprechless gaahd
loveisnoteverything
#76
Chapter 36: OMG FILIPINO READERS E U E
loveisnoteverything
#77
Chapter 35: THIS IS JUST PERFECTY WELL WRITTEN!!!
loveisnoteverything
#78
Chapter 34: Dara's so nice she actually is planning to risk her life just to save the others omfg asdfghjkl
loveisnoteverything
#79
Chapter 33: Dugeun dugeun dugeun dugeun gaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!
loveisnoteverything
#80
Chapter 32: FIGGITITOOOOOOO OF ALL WOMEN OUT THERE WHY SULLI SOBS SOBS IT COULD HAVE BEEN ME EUE
loveisnoteverything
#81
Chapter 31: π_π can I just have Il Woo I promise to take a good care of him 0/
loveisnoteverything
#82
Chapter 30: OMFG JUNG IL WOO YOU! DONT DARE TOUCH THOSE TWO OR YOU'LL BE SEEING HEAVEN /WINK WINK; SLAPPED/
loveisnoteverything
#83
Chapter 29: SULLIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
loveisnoteverything
#84
Chapter 28: DIES. okay I just had to. Spazzes e u e
loveisnoteverything
#85
Chapter 27: He cant breathe his heart his geek his dara omfg I CANT BREATHE LETS SHARE AIR SUPPLY JIYONG I DONT MIND I REALLY DONT /SHAKES HEAD ViGOROuSLY/
loveisnoteverything
#86
Chapter 26: GHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHD. OMFG JIYONG IMMA MURDER YOU (- -メ)
loveisnoteverything
#87
Chapter 25: Dies. I feel embarass for dara OTL but wait BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA x'D
loveisnoteverything
#88
Chapter 24: OMFG DID I JUST SEE JUNG IL WOO'S MOTHER EFFING NAME GASSSSSSSSSP! THIS REMINDS ME OF DARA AND IL WOOS TWITTER CONVO OMG OMG PERFECTOOO
joOstiA #89
Chapter 24: Sorry donghae !! You don't have any place in sandaras heart ..... GD HWAITING !!!!!!
Hahahhaahahahahaha
loveisnoteverything
#90
Chapter 23: Perfect bromance perfect sismance perfect couple gaaaaah what else could I ask for. I AM WHOLE HEARTEDLY INLOVE WITH YOUR WRITING SKILLS AUTHOR NIM ♥0♥
loveisnoteverything
#91
Chapter 22: I'm tempted to scroll down the contents and simply click at the epilogue chapter omg, Im excited to know how this is going to end ⊙▽⊙
loveisnoteverything
#92
Chapter 21: I am seriously addicted to this. sobs. π_π
loveisnoteverything
#93
Chapter 19: OMG Filipino readers FIGHTING! (*¯︶¯*)
loveisnoteverything
#94
Chapter 16: OMFG THS CRACKED ME UP! BEST FANFIC I READ SO FAR!!! X'D ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥= ̄ω ̄=
Daragon22 #95
Authornim! I'm really sorry if I'm only commenting now -.- I read your story loads of times but I don't think I've commented yet.. I tend to be a silent reader when I read completed stories..
I feel like I need to comment on your story to thank you and praise you so here it is! :D

First of all, I want to thank you for writing this amazing story. When I read your story I felt my like was squeezed painfully while I read the chapter where dara gave the white envelopes and when GD was helplessly looking for her. Your story was like a rollercoaster ride! I was so into it that I felt the feelings of the characters throughout the story...

Your fic is funny, heartwarming, exciting! There are a lot of words I can describe it but there is too many that it will probably take me a long time. I love how you mentioned your subscribers! You really are a great writer :) And I'm so lucky to be able to read your story :')

I hope you'll be able to finish talking about the overseas shipping soon cuz I'd love to have a copy of the story :) thank you for writing Mobster for rent! Thank you thank you!

Huntress (unnie? Am I allowed to call you unnie?) you are a talented author and you are definitely one of a kind! Thank you so much for sharing your talent to us! :D I love huntress!!!!!!

Sorry if the comment is to long ~.~ ^.^
cookiezncream07 #96
Chapter 41: WAAAAH. I LOVE IT!!! SO MUCH! <3 worth it. I can't believe it's the end. Waaaaah I want more.. XD Thank you for creating such a great story! ^^
ConnieOng #97
Chapter 10: Oh I juz cnt get tired of reading this fic!!! Love IT!!!!
joOstiA #98
Chapter 10: Kyaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!! Daragon makes me crazy ...
joOstiA #99
Chapter 5: Cheesy endearment .. :-)