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dockie8ph #1
Chapter 30: Yah, scheduler, you're 49 days are up! And dara, you should accept everything about jiyong, may that be good or bad!
dockie8ph #2
Chapter 29: Dara, prove to yg that his wrong, about you, that you will stay wih jiyong no matter what! And sulli, keep your hands off jiyong, biyotch!
dockie8ph #3
Chapter 28: You are a tease dara and you really want to meet destrucion huh?!
dockie8ph #4
Chapter 27: Yes dara, he is a mobster! And jiyong, you can't easily get away from her, she's a geek, remember?
dockie8ph #5
Chapter 26: Omg! Its so early in the morning and i'm crying!
dockie8ph #6
Chapter 25: Wow, that was so bold and brave of you dara. Grabbing jiyong's destruction, that was epic!
dockie8ph #7
Chapter 24: Awww.. i love the scheduler!
And bom, please execute your plan now, top is there to help you! And donghae, you are such a gentleman!
dockie8ph #8
Chapter 23: That was really hot and y! Jiyong putting dara's undies on her!
Iamljay #9
Chapter 23: Seriously this is by far the best fanfic I have read so far. It's like being catapulted inside the story making you see what is happening right in front of you, making me feel all the damn emotions the characters are feeling. I find myself giddy with their silly love story, frustrated with Jiyong and Dara's mildang, laughing all over the place at how hilarious they are acting with each other and sad with their impending separation.

I hope you ma'am will not stop making stories. You are, in GD's words, one of a kind. I love all your works of art and I am a fan.
dockie8ph #10
Chapter 22: I'm scared for dara, who gave her that rose? And can the both of you, be together now?!
tililingkerbell #11
YIEEEEEEEE <3 FIRST BOOK THAT I HAVE READ HERE <3 YAAAAAAAAAAH <3
stitchwithaglitch #12
Chapter 40: Can this ff have a sequel????juseyo.pretty please.
dockie8ph #13
Chapter 21: This is so frustrating! Be together now, please!
dockie8ph #14
Chapter 20: Arrgh! That was so sad, at least try to fight for her jiyong! And dara, you love jiyong not donghae!
dockie8ph #15
Chapter 19: That's a million pogi (handsome) points jiyong! And i love their moments together!
dockie8ph #16
Chapter 18: Both of you, can you just be honest for once?
dockie8ph #17
Chapter 17: I so love the banner on this chapter!
And way to go jiyong, you beat dara at her own game!
dockie8ph #18
Chapter 16: The name is so cute, kung pao chicken!

And dara, that was a very compromising position!
dockie8ph #19
Chapter 15: I feel sorry for donghae, but, next time time donghae, for now leave dara and jiyong alone! Jiyong's enemies would use dara against him!
dockie8ph #20
Chapter 14: Can't control yourself dara? Your jealous dara?
dockie8ph #21
Chapter 13: Hahahaha... your timing couldn't be more perfect jiyong! And by the way, you love dara!
dockie8ph #22
Chapter 12: I just want them to kiss, please!
dockie8ph #23
Chapter 11: Omg, i love jiyong on this part! And dara, you really are a ert, hahaha...
dockie8ph #24
Chapter 10: Oh, please let him stay, just for a night!
dockie8ph #25
Chapter 9: Jiyong to the rescue! But why do you have to scare her?
dockie8ph #26
Chapter 8: I'm laughing all by myself, i'm like a crazy person! I like the name fried chicken, that was daebak!
dockie8ph #27
Chapter 7: Wow, you really are a jerk jiyong!
dockie8ph #28
Chapter 6: Dara, the forever optimist!
maeann0816 #29
Chapter 34: Teary eyed! :'(

--huntress unnie You're the best! <3
Alexandria017 #30
Chapter 35: Oh my god... it makes me almost dying if dara dead. Good feel author!
dockie8ph #31
Chapter 5: Hahaha... good job bom!
dockie8ph #32
Chapter 4: Awww.. that was really sweet! Jiyong is just protecting himself, from falling in love..
dockie8ph #33
Chapter 3: Hmmmm... not bad jiyong, not bad at all!
dockie8ph #34
Chapter 2: Oh, you will definitely lose jiyong, you will fall in love!
dockie8ph #35
Chapter 1: that was mean - flat chested girls! i wonder why jiyong agreed with dara's proposal!
jibeib #36
Chapter 40: reread this story...
unni,, pleaseeee make a new stories... love ur writing skill...
maeann0816 #37
Chapter 13: I feel so much inlove ! :)
bhabychic #38
Chapter 41: MFR end of reading...but start of new beginning..thank you so much @huntress unnie ,, you made me feel so AKSHDNBSFYWEPFKNFASFO...... ^_^ i really adore you... thank you your such a great person..
bhabychic #39
Chapter 27: CHAPTER 28: if my stuff toys are Real....DAMN!!!!!!!!..... THEY ARE ALL IN HEAVEN RIGHT NOW...... poor them...^_^ so sorry...... but this Fic is getting me out of my insanity....
cookiemonster21 #40
Chapter 10: Your story is killing me with LOVE :) i really really LOVE DARAGON sooooooooooooo much :) Thanks for this super duper fanfic :) This is my favorite now and forever :)
bhabychic #41
Chapter 16: CHAPTER 17 ........
the very first fanfic that i"m reading right now...and all i can say is...... I'M DEAD....... ^_^.................
DARAGON KILL ME WITH YOUR LOVE.. <3 <3 <3 90 degrees bow to you @huntress
syauqiah_ayya #42
Chapter 35: i love DARAGON so much :*
readz101 #43
This is my favorite DARAGON fanfic so far <3 <3 <3
Lalhruaitluangi #44
this is the fanfic of my life...im here to read it again for the nTh time! ~Daragon <3 ~
Wonapham #45
OHMAHGO-OOOOOOOOOOOOD what just...AFSGVSBVSKJJXKH:LJSHHJHJSNK TT^TT
_Aecha #46
yeah, it's sooo good
CINDY_OKTAVIANI #47
your so the besttt
ylruceiram
#48
Chapter 41: OMG. THIS IS A ONE OF A KIND FIC. OMG. I LOVE HOW IT ENDS IN THE EVENT PLACE THAT STARTED EVERYTHING. OMG. HANDS DOWN TO YOU UNNIE. I REALLY CAN'T. HUEHUEHUE YOU KEPT MY APPLER HEART BEATING~ HAUSGFVSDFHN OKAY. THIS GAVE ME GOOSEBUMPS. REALLY
mhycoo #49
Chapter 41: DAEBAK!! *speechless* loveeee it!!!!
ylruceiram
#50
OMG OMG. I READ THIS FANFIC AGAIN BECAUSE I DIDN'T GET THE CHANCE TO FINISH IT BECAUSE MY PHONE GOT STOLEN AND NOW. SKLDHFNJKSDBHSG. I
VanishInSec #51
Chapter 19: tbh, I read this fanfic already on 2012 but but I cant stop reading it. such a lovely one!!!!
Cindy_krungy #52
Chapter 35: love it....
jleechandler3 #53
Love Love LOVE THIS! I just reread it for the bizillionth time. Thanks for writing it and sharing this with us! Congrats on your successes!
VanishInSec #54
Chapter 14: Breath taking fanfic!!! love it.
dara-unnie #55
i want to read this offline! huhuhuhu
hellobabygirl21 #56
Chapter 41: GREAT GREAT STORY!!! This is my nth time reading this fic. This is one of my favorite DARAGON story together with "Knot this Guy". Both stories are AMAZING!!! I love the flow of the story. Keep writing Daragon fanfics, authornim. I love this COUPLE so damn much but I have to admit that this past few days my Appler heart is hurting---courtesy of Jiyong and Kiko.....
inthebox00 #57
Still my favourite fanfic!! I love how you tell this story beautifully
Fluffysan #58
Chapter 1: re-reading this for the nth time!!! i soooo love this story!!! :)
seoulsearcher #59
Unnie, just wanna say that you're the b-e-s-t!!!!!!!! Huntress unnie, jjang!!! Much love <3
adhita88 #60
Chapter 41: I loved this story and I'm sad it ended; I liked how you left us on purpose with a blurry ending because life is not black or white, and life goes on with its ups and downs.
Great story, and thank you for sharing it with us!
ZZZzzZ08 #61
One of my fav. Daragon fic .. Thank you :D
meryblack #62
Chapter 41: thank you, you made a very happy person:
1- hymem met destruction at last
2- the caracters are just hilarious an captivating and i just love every one of them even the scyco one Il Woo and TOP *wow i LOVE him*,
3-the childesness the UPs and DOWNs the happy and sad parts(the story made me Laugh my out and cry it out also)
4- you made me question my sanity(crying and laughing at the same time)
5-my hole family thinks that i am an official crazy person laughing in front of a comp
6- and the daragon moments are just .... WOWWWWWWWWWW
7- and kangpao i love the freaking chicken chicken chicken
and now after two freaking days reading this , i need to get a life and stop fantasizing kekekekeke
THANKS AGAIN it was pure hapiness
adhita88 #63
Chapter 36: Ugh! You're such a tease!! How come Ji Yong and Dara haven't had yet?! The story is almost over and... "¡nada de nada!" Nothing at all!!!
adhita88 #64
Chapter 34: Great chapter, I kept biting my nails the whole time!!
adhita88 #65
Chapter 33: What the freaking hell??!! Between the witch and the psycho our two lovebirds seem doomed, I tell you, doomed!!!!
adhita88 #66
Chapter 32: Crap! The Dragon Head is a @#$%@#, and Sulli is not far behind; what will our poor Ji Yong do now??
Kung Pao, where are you, your appa needs you!
meryblack #67
Chapter 28: YEYYYYY!! there you go dara girl , you 're in control, show him whos the boss now, fight for ure lobeee kekeke!! DARA you better f***** canoudle him OR let me do it for you ,aahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
meryblack #68
Chapter 12: just hilarious! when G is teasing her with his...you know!!! i just cant stop laughing my a*** out
OH MIGOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDD!! this is pure dilight
adhita88 #69
Chapter 31: Sandara is so trusting, I just wanna kill her!! If a guy seems to be stalking you or following you around, you run for your life NOT go out to dinner with him!!! Aaaaggghhh!!!
adhita88 #70
Chapter 30: Dara is stronger than Jiyong gives her credit for, but I think she hasn't fully comprehended the extent of having a double and dangerous life.
I'm loving this story so far and I thank my good luck that it's already finished so I don't have to wait for the next chapter!
adhita88 #71
Chapter 29: Oh, where's Kung Pao when you need him??!!
There's a that needs her eyes scratched out!
adhita88 #72
Chapter 27: You're a freaking sadist!! Why did you end the chapter there??!!
I can just picture you in your lair, in front of your computer laughing at our misery! Lol
adhita88 #73
Chapter 26: The ending of this chapter was truly harsh... I feel bad for both of them... :-(
Diehardfor #74
Chapter 25: Oh my god!! I should skip the rated chapter ! I can't take it *cover my eyes* nyahahahaha!!!
adhita88 #75
Chapter 23: Finally!! At least Sandara has seen the light! I could almost see the lightbulb going on above her head! One down, one to go...
adhita88 #76
Chapter 22: This is bad... it really seems like the beginning of the end... but I'm betting the leader of the Alliance will make Jiyong think twice about letting Sandara walk out of his life...
adhita88 #77
Chapter 20: Oh, Jiyong's killing me with his chivalrous behavior and his denial that he's in love!!! This is the time he has to act like a ruthless mobster and steal the girl he wants from under Donghae's nose!! Agghh!!
saranghasan #78
Chapter 41: Seriously one of the best fanfics out there! I thought it was too technical at first with all the explaining of the mobs and stuff but I stuck it out and IT WAS TOTALLY WORTH IT! The plot was genious and it was so well written I can't even. Kudos to you! Looking forward to more of your works!
ladycat30 #79
Chapter 1: This is my second time reading this...all of authornim's stories are the bestest!!!!
MzKingzly #80
Chapter 41: You are seriously gifted with a talent for writing c': I hope to read more of your fanfics in the future too. And GAWD can I just say this is THE BEST BY FAR the best fanfiction that I have ever read. The way that you didn't leave any plot holes. The way you described and made such a beautiful character. Also, how in this chapter you didn't write about them dealing with Dara's parents and lying to Bom and Donghae. It makes it very realistic that you did that. The black society can never have a happily ever after fairy tale story. You can never be too sure that Jiyong and Dara's relationship will end happily. Huntress unnie hwaiting for more beautiful fics like this one cx
MzKingzly #81
Chapter 35: I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOUU IM STILL CRYING OVER HERE AND YOU.... God my tears are making a puddle TT.TT Why you gotta do this to meeee!! I can't believe you had to trick me like that!! Guuuuhhhhhhsjsskxmxmxm I'm so done now . (But I still love you)
blackpotato #82
Chapter 35: unbelievable, this is... the great story I've ever read...^^
you make me smile, laughing, anger, jealous, and waw..
alot of emotions... really..really.. awesome.. \^o^/
Oh and I always hope that TOP and Bom will be the real couple.. ahahhahahha
Chibisakura #83
Chapter 41: Thank you so much for such an AMAZING story. Love your writing! I totally became a HUGE fan!
Fluffysan #84
Chapter 42: Mobster for rent got me into ffs... Thank you authornim!!! more stories pls!!!
aryhelle #85
Chapter 41: I really love the story I hope it will have a sequel!
ChoRaeHee
#86
Chapter 41: I really love this story. I don't how many time already I finished reading this story.
kiseonnie11
#87
oh my gee! is so love this story. it's one of the best story i've ever read in my whole life >.< i would just like to ask if the book is available in bookstores here in the philippines? i really really wanted to have a copy :))
adhita88 #88
Chapter 17: This was sooo funny, it had me spitting the water I was drinking at the time!!
adhita88 #89
Chapter 14: You're really mean!! Why did you end the chapter just when things started to heat up?!
adhita88 #90
Chapter 13: Yey, Ji Yong to the rescue!! Thank God he showed up, Donghae is an idiot because he has been acting ambivalent towards Dara all this time so it's his loss now that Dara is falling in love with someone else, even if she hasn't realized it yet.
adhita88 #91
Chapter 12: I sometimes wish Sandara had a bit more of a backbone, she's such a pushover...
KPVIP26
#92
Chapter 33: Uh-OH,, here comes trouble! will jiyong get to dara on time? will they be alright? will green applers kill choi sulli (umm please don't cuz then Jiyong will have to die too, i mean u can throw her from a cliff but dont kill her ok?)
KPVIP26
#93
Chapter 32: *Spazzes then falls to the floor and has a fit* SULLI!!???? FCKING SULLI???!!!!Writer nim, u are so evil!! (sicks Kung Pao on you)
KPVIP26
#94
Chapter 29: Unnie-yah, u WILLeventually HAVE TO write a rated chap.... OR U WILL FACE PUNISHMENT.... you have been warned....

Now write us a rated chap pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaassssseeeeee?????? (gets down on knees) OmO!! daragon, scene daragon scene (repeats 100 times). <Bingu top voice>
goldenbanana #95
Chapter 12: I like the comment about buying your book and getting it sign bcoz i feel the same too! Your style is really funny and amusing! Wish i could write like you....
adhita88 #96
Chapter 11: They are both really into each other but are too stuborn to admit it... which lands them in hilarious situations, I love it!
adhita88 #97
Chapter 9: A mad Ji Yong is a very y Ji Yong, wow!T.O.P is going to win that bet sooner than even he thought.
adhita88 #98
Chapter 7: Oh my God, the chicken part was hilarious!!! Poor Sandara has the patience of a saint because I would have already killed Ji Yong, specially after he left her alone with the kids!
KPVIP26
#99
Chapter 21: a really amazing plot twist for this is if we find out Dara has mob connections, or a brother in the mob (cheongdongie *hint hint writernim*)