Time for me to reread MFR again :)) I am really really hoping for a special chapter even just fluff or random things about them :) I miss kung pao and the mobster's woman dara and the jerkiness/sweetness of g-dragon. Please please huntress unni!! How about you make a special chapter for them in May to celebrate the anniversary of MFR :) thank youuuu First love never dies and since this is the first daragon fanfic I've read and the one I got hooke into the most I will always keep on rereading this :))
Chapter 5: new reader hereeeeeeee! hehehehe! :"> omygoooood! i was squealing and laughing and giggling at this chapter! hahaha! =))) i'm so lucky i found your story! so funny!!!! i feel like the Dara here represents all the kpop fans! haha!
I think you're the best writer here as far as I know, I found other stories boring, no matter how many people have read them.
I just love this story and you of course
Chapter 41: oh my god!!! I can't believe I just read this fic now!! someone in aff already reccommended ur fic. but I'm not that fond of bout daragon shipping. In fact I don't like the idea of GD with dara at all.. *runaway from applers!!!! wow, but thankfully you portray them into another world here hehe.. *still hiding from applers.. It's really addicted in every chap.. the right amount of drama and fluff.. and you didn't torture us with boring drama instead you rewarded every chap with the right amount of fluffiness moment kyaaa nor you put too much heheh.. and I really appreciate this one, since look like I read too much it become senseless lol *shameless I think that's what make people hooked to your story. And I really like smart dara here!! Waa I really really love this!! I spend my whole weekend reading MFR now I really tempted to read MCR too but sunday getting over!!! ottokae!!! love you authornim!!!
The part of Jiyong tying her shoelaces here totally fitted his recent remark on the program Incarnation. How could you have known, unnie? Can you see the future or have mind reading powers, unnie? Kidding. ;)
This never fails to make me laugh and giddy. And I'm sure, when I read the other chapters, I'd be crying over them again. Won't ever get tired reading this <3 Definitely one of the best :)
Chapter 41: I spent my Maundy Thursday reading the last chapters of MFR. It was worthy re-reading each and every moments of this story. MFR was beautifully written because Huntress put her whole heart in writing this that it felt so real. My imagination runs wild while reading that I can't help but be carried away by the twist of emotions. Yes, it is a rom-com but it has a lot of lessons. I love the fact that every chapter is very significant. And every character here has a significant role to make this story meaningful. I bet all the readers have this feeling of attachment for this story that we don't want it to end. But we felt satisfied and we all read the ending with smiles on our faces. I've said it many times already but I just wanna say this again: I've read so many fanfictions already but I still end up reliving the moments of MFR. It just touches my heart. Mobster for Rent is one of a kind. With that, I commend you, authornim, Huntress. <3 *standing ovation* *teary-eyed*
I won't be surprised if someday, MFR will become a real drama on TV. :)
Chapter 34: The thrill. The excitement. The pain. The suspense. Revelations. Love. All the emotions. These are the reasons why this is one of my favorite chapters. :) Author-nim, you are really the best. I won't get tired reading MFR again and again. <3
ONE OF THE VERY BEST!!!!! I keep on reading this again, and again and again.. I really love the story. ^_^ My type of guy is a bad boy but madly in love hihi.. super duper cute. It really matched Jiyong and Dara's characters hihi.
Chapter 41: ☆*:.｡. o(≧▽≦)o .｡.:*☆
。・゜・(ノД`)・゜・。
These are exactly how I feel.
First off lemme just say, this story... Just I can't even put it into words. I was hooked. I've been staying up all night reading this story and when I had to stop, I thought I was going to die. I love there relationship. I love how they just bicker bicker bicker. It was to kyute! This story... Lemme just say, there was times where I wanted to pull my hair out, cry when they almost lost each other. I legit thought my heart was going to jump out of my chest and run away cause of all ma feels! I would legit let out these awkward whale noises from all my happiness >.< . OKAY THAT SCENE WAS WELL WORTH THE WAIT! I thought it was never going to happen to be quite honest but as soon as I was reading whatever that chapter was and I saw the link I was like OMO! I MUST READ NOW! Haha anyways enough about that. Just this whole story, I felt a connection with each of the characters in a different way. I could feel the , the love, the "hate" between Jiyong and Dara. The childress of TOP. The attitude of Bom. There secrete liking for each other (I was really hoping that they end up together). All the fear and love. This story was just to great and I wish there was more! I don't know if it's just me or not but I think it would be cool if there was a part two of this where Jiyong and Dara get married and have babies and some big gang goes after them and their babies and all this other stuff. Plus I think it would be cute if TOP and Bom got together ^^ . But I guess every great story has to end. I will go now.
Bye!! ~ (^-^)/
*･゜ﾟ･*:.｡..｡.:*･'(*ﾟ▽ﾟ*)'･*:.｡. .｡.:*･゜ﾟ･*
^ma feels kekekekeke
Chapter 35: OMO I ALMOST DIED!!!!! I was so focused on this chapter that I freaked out on my brother for trying to talk to me! This story! My heart! *dies*
Chapter 23: There and there ability not to realize that they are in love with each other I just wanna die from all the feels! My tombstone will read 'Here lies Kjoe. Passed away from the uncontrolable feels from the story Mobster for rent.'
Chapter 41: Its been days when i read this.. before sleeping and after i woke up and during vacant time and while riding going somewhere.. this is all i read (pls dont misinterpret. i did not copy it. i used AFF's feature the save offline thing xD).
and now, when i woke up i was thinking of continuing to read this.. but remembered ive done reading it.. waaaaaah!!
Ok. just wanna share. xD
Its just one of my best story ive ever read :") and i miss it already TaT
i should read other authornim's story. i know its daebak too. :"3
Chapter 41: Thank you for posting this wonderful fanfic! Love love LOVE it until the end! It has all the cute fluffy stuff I needed for a rom-com fix. And I'm glad at the way you incorporated all the scenes into the story development, loved the characterization of GD & Dara. Now that's a heroine I'd root for any given day. The side characters are funny as hell, especially TOP. I'd love for him to end up with Bommie. Not a huge fan of DaraGon (I'm more of a DaraHae shipper) but you seriously converted me with this fic! And now, I can't think of the word "DESTRUCTION" in the same way ever again. In a good way, of course. :)
Chapter 40: . . . *siiiiggggh*
--> im just too speechless authornim.. this is just too daebak.. im actually sad bcos its ending now.. and guess what, im in the midst of crying at this moment.. im really sad .. but most of all im really happy that this story is so so daebak!! :""")
Chapter 35: Wait. before i finish this chapter. i have to comment first XDXD
afraid to ruin my crying moment here.. XD
FAFFAGAJAKAKKAHAGJAJSG!!
AUTHORNIN!!!! THIS IS SO HEARTBREAKINGGGG!!!!!
I SO WANNNA HUG YOU BECAUSE U'RE SO DAEBAAAAK!!!! TTTTTATTTTT *crying for real*
fagshsjshgshjsjsgsjshsysjjwhwjuwygwjeiehhkdjufgjsutgk x((((((((((
Anw,, em so.stupid! XD didnt realize in the previous chapter why the programs were named as s.exe.. g.exe.. and b.exe.. lol its named after sulli, gd, building(?).. hahahhaha kbye! XD
kamsahamnida for reading! ^_^ i'm looking at the comments and i'm really touched T_T i'm gald you guys appreciate the effort i put to complete this fic *ugly sobs*
Authornim,, whyyyyy????????????? TTTTTTTATTTTTTT
THIS CHAPTER BREAKS MY HEARRT FOR REALS!!! X((((((((((
just when i prayed that make Dara the new descendant.. TTTT.TTTT i know its so stupid and so unreal to be Dara the new descendant.. but hey! Thats possible right??? *Siiiigh*
Double trouble.. il woo abd now sulli..
i just wanna fly... with kung pao!!! <////////////3
Chapter 30: Dara's for sure a burden to Jiyong. but i dont want them to separate either...
BUT AUTHORNIM.. I KNOW THIS IS COMPLETED STORY.. BUT IM REALLY WISHHING THAT THEYLL DO "IT" SOMEHOW.. ITS OK IF U WONT WRITE THE DETAILS. JUST LET US KNOW THEYVE DONE "IT",,
HAHAHHAA HYTRUCTION!! XDXD
but yea
srsly.. cos its frustrating knowing they're self controlling XDXD. i really hope theres that sacred part somewhere in the end.. :"33
Chapter 24: SAY WUT HAE???? SHOULD U WAIT??? LIKE HELL DUDE!!! SHUT.THE.FVKC.UP!!!
DARA WAITED FOR U FOR 3 DAMN YEARS!!!!! AND U'RE ASKING IF U SHOULD WAIT??? ARE U ON DRUGS!!!?????
AND U DEAR DARA,, U'RE GUILTY??? U DIDNT EVEN THINK OF URSELF?? UGH!! =____='
Still the best fanfic i've ever read. Read it for the nth time and i still cry. I know i've thanked you a million times already but thank you again for this perfect fanfic!
Thank you very very much for this lovely fic. This is my super duper fave out of all of fanfics. Fell in love with each chapters..
Will continue reading all your stories. Keep on writing.. Please always include "Jaejong" in your love triangle stories. I believe he will be the best for that role.. threat to our OTP (DARAGON)!!! Fighting author!
Chapter 41: Oh my gawd! I finished it on 5 days~ that was great! One of my favourite fanfiction~ I will look for other fanfiction from you, since I am sure that the other FF are amazing just like this FF /throw confetti/ xoxo
Chapter 21: i can't with this story. im crying in every chapter.. im really really crying. my heart hurts bc i feel so sad for them bc they can't tell about how they really feel yet, not just dara and ji but also donghae. im so sad for him bc he seems to like her, but dude u had her for 3years, u did nothing and now u are losing her. its too late bc her heart is changing. dara's place is so difficult, her feelings are complicated, poor unnie i can't imagine her being sad and hurt from all this situation. and there it goes ji oppa. i cry rivers everytime he is in pain bc he has to see the one he loves with someone else, she has to help her win someone's else heart. his heart is breaking and i feel like screaming..
i hate u huntress unnie for writing such a touching fanfic. have u any idea how much in pain is my heart? i can't stop crying.. i can't stand another chapter of daragon being so close to each other but still not being able to really being together..
i hope in the next chapters ji oppa is gonna have some naughty moments with dara.. im bleeding everytime i imagine ji taking of his clothes and being in bed with dara, hugging her from behind, kissing her KKYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA >\\\<
your fanfic is like heaven.. i have no words to explain u how an amazing job u have done.. im gonna love u forever even though your fanfic makes me cry and scream..
i love the trailers i can watch them all day. i really LOL with top he is acting so childish and gay(in a cute way) i can't---
i send u many kisses and hugs /FIGHTING/ <3 <3 TT____TT <3 <3
Chapter 42: Omg, I love this story! I subscribed quite a while ago, but I finally finished it. I stay up late, because its so addicting! Hopefully, I will catch up to your other stories. Thanks for writing/sharing this! Daragon was so sweet, cute, funny, and romantic! I love their characters in this.
BTW Im not a new reader but I have read MFR twice already..kkk
I just want to comment because I realized I haven't done it and I feel bad..lol (as if my comment is that important hahaha)
I want you to know how this fic of yours is very important to most of us. It's THE DARAGONFIC.. I dont remember the first fic that I read but Im pretty sure MFR made me open an account and discover a lot of good stuff that AFF world has to offer. You remind me of Sophie Kinsella at her funniest...Nay, you're way funnier.. I sarang your brain. Injecting rated scenes in a romcom is soo hard and Im just so proud of you..
Aigoo authornim Im taking so much of your space.. meep meep miu miu..
Live long and prosper:) Ciao.
Chapter 23: Oh my god !!!! Im crazy !!! Omg! Omg! Omg! Goodddd , help me why the hell this story turn to thos situation? Omg , thank Huntress!! Waaaaaa , helppppppppp
took me four freaking days to finish reading your long ___ chapters.
with school, homework, and all those normal human beings do in between.
i have FINALLY finished reading it.
and wow.
i am speechless.
I only have one thing to say and that is.
MY FAVOURITE PART IS WHEN DARA WAS MAKING THAT SO AWESOME AND COOL PLAN WITH ALL THE MORF....
I forgot how that's spelt.
Damnit.
Mor-something codes.
those virus signals and all.
That was so cool.
Soooo coool.
And i love those epic comments time.
Your readers are hilarious.
I read a few when i was near the end of the fic
I mean. I laughed when your readers were like plotting a plan to kill jung il woo from the moment he made his appearance in china.
I laughed so hard when they found out that it was jung il woo and they're all like
"ABORT MISSION. ABORT MISSION."
when i first found out it was jung il woo.
I was like "OMFG. IT'S JUNG IL WOO" then spazzed for like a few seconds but then stopped when i realized i forgot who jung il woo was.
el oh el. me: who's jung il woo again?
I've heard of that name before, and i am pretty sure i've spazzed about him too.
But i have forgotten what he looked like xD
But i started spazzing again when i found out that he was the scheduler i liked in the drama called 49 days. And it was him that made me continue watching it.
and also kinda the IU lookalike main character.
ASKFHKJDJFKDFLGFKLGJKLFGJLFJGLFMLGMFLDMBKDFLMVLKDSMVLCKDMCLKDMVKLDVMDFLVMLFDKMBVLFDMBVLDFMLBDFMBLFDMLBMDLMBKBDNLMBLDMLBMDFLBMDKLMBDLBMDLMBLDBMKLDMBLDMBLMDLBMLDMBLMDLBMLD!!!!!!!!!!! I FINISHED THIS LAST NIGHT!! BUTTT GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! ILOVETHIS!!!<33 SUPER SUPER!! AND I'M CURRENTLY HAVING A HANGOVER! <33333333
I SHALL READ YOUR OTHER FANFICS HUNTRESS UNNIE :DDD
Chapter 24: The part when Jiyong put on her but never removed his eyes on her face. IS. JUST. THE. SWEETEST. THING. EVERRR. Gahh! :"> still not finnished reading this story. HAHA
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