Chapter 1: oh my.... icantevenwriteproperlyrightmojwandihdontevenknowkhthowhtatimwriting
okay. I'm calm.
I absolutely love this story! I love how you portrayed the reality of this dark part of history. Good job~ And though I knew this would end up a tragedy, I still had that small hope that everything would work out and it would be a happy ending~~
......I was too naive ;(
Chapter 1: This story is really beautifully written!! I like it alot.. I shed alot of tears T_T That was an awesome job.. Thank you author so much I've never read a beautiful story like this in a while !! Jongin and Haiwen broke my heart, this is what I tragedy ;;
oh god. i- i- i loved this. you truly deserved to be featured bc aggggh how beautiful it is ; - ; too bad he died in the end- i hopes sehun will survive in the end. ugh. i have a thing for this kind of fic so thank you, for writing this. ; - ; oh btw i came back here in the foreword page to give you upvote o u o
Chapter 1: This is so beautiful! I cant breathe properly because of my cries ohmygod this is just o perfect I CANT EVEN <3 I dont read short stories but this, so far, is the first one I've read and im glad that I saw this in someone's listography. ;;AAAAAAA;;
Chapter 1: i'm a bloody mess right now...its a good thing that no one's with me right now \\_\\
this story is sooo good...i dont usually read kai's fics but i'm happy that i gave this a chance <3 <3
i love this fic andall ur other fics :D :D
keep up the good work...hwaiting ^_^
Chapter 1: I teared up like fou times reading this oneshot. It was hard for Kai and anyone that was involved in the war. Sometimes the world forces you to do one thing but your heart doesn't allow it and consequences come with it. Kai's kindness did get himself killed but it was for the better good, I admire him. Your oneshot tells the people not born during war that they should be thankful. There are so many things that you have to choose from and it is heartbreaking. This oneshot showed us the humanity that we should all have. If you ever write a sequel, you should write about what happens to Sehun after he ran away. Good luck!
Chapter 1: I knew I shouldn't have read it, I just ing knew and I still did. DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMIT *cry*
When I saw the cover of the chapter, I just knew that this one-shot will break my heart and just like always I was right.
But nevertheless it was amazing and so so beautiful! It's a sad story but I'm pretty stories like that happened at the time of war and it's heartbreaking ;_;
I felt so bad for Luhan, for Kai, for the girl, for Sehun, they all deserved a better life ;_;
I love you for writing such a beautiful story *go crying in a corner*
thank you ♥♥
Chapter 1: omg this story........ this this so beautiful. i hate reading sad ones because i don't like crying but this.... this story was just so amazingly well written with so much details that i loved. and that poem, oh my it was so beautiful too. overall, this story was so beautiful. if i could give you i would give you 1000000000000000 gold stars. god job and thank you.
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