Chapter 1: Okay woooow. This was amazing. The best one-shot I've ever read, I think. First of all, really well researched!! You clearly know a lot of about the history about the Japanese invasion and the comfort women and everything. Not many do, so good job on that part. Second of all, this was just really well written. The idea of the title, Eternity, and how it comes back at the end? That's really good. The character development, too. How Sehun used to despise Jongin, and how that changes at the end. And you're not one of those authors who just randomly kill people off. This is the reality of what it was like back then, and you wrote that well. Your OC's are also really strong, they have a lot of character. Really well written!
what the did i just read that was mind blowing goddamit u should have ran away with sehun omg what the is a sakamoto he should ing die ew i hate him go die u
AMAZING STORY BTW IT WAS HELLA
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