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double-s #1
Chapter 1: it's freaking 4 in the morning and here i'm. oh god this one is just terribly sad. i can't....
vothan30597
#2
Chapter 1: This oneshot ... It was ... Emotional, beautiful and amazing. Your writing is so amazing. I was moved. I love this so much
69ingchanyeol
#3
Chapter 1: at first i thought i wasn't gonna like it...BUT LOOK AT ME CRYING SO HARD. I LOST MY WHEN THEY EXECUTED LUHAN. GODDAMNIT.
Meli99_ #4
Chapter 1: This. Is. The. Most. Beautiful. Story. I. Have. Read. In. My. Entire. Life.
It's so... AWESOME and... wow.
I don't know if a word can describe a fantastic story like yours.
I love it.
I've read a lot of fanfiction, but THIS IS A MASTERPIECE.
I was wondering if I could translate it in Italian, which is my first language, and post it on a site (a bit like asianfanfics). Of course I'll say that you are the real autor~ and I'll put the link of the original work.
I think that Italian fans should read this amazing story.
Tell me~
bye ♡
daexnight
#5
Chapter 1: why does it feel like my heart was just ripped out of my chest, and tears flow down even though i tried my best? like, a part of me died when kai lit the camp. it feels like a goodbye kiss that never came.


[apologies for this poem but i felt like i had to write this in thanks of you for writing this fanfic. it's beautiful in every way. thank you! ♡ ]
MissAngel
#6
Chapter 1: This was so.. ohmyy. ㅠㅠ. i always like angst genre but not this.. not not.. wait a sec //cries a river// you're awesome authornim!
kaitamanik #7
Chapter 1:
And..I know you already had a trailer but, idea of a trailer popped up in my mind :) Hope you like it.. *ps; sorry for doing it without your permission*

https://youtu.be/6Ad4SRtHDSg
kaitamanik #8
Chapter 1: I read your story when I'm sobbing, seriously. Thank you so much for that beautiful story. I really touched and cried a lot especially at Luhan died and when he couldn't find her at her room. Even it's one shot you satisfied us a lot with your writing skills. I loved your style and wish to read more stories of yours in the future. Thank you once more~
leila_BDr
#9
Chapter 1: Author niiim .. congrats .. u made me cry .. i swear i cried a river here
trololol0
#10
Chapter 1: This was so beautiful and sad and ... ;-; whyyy?
HaneyLuhan #11
Chapter 1: omg kim jongin ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ made me cry so bad;;;;;;;; jongin is such a beautiful person<3 its three in the morning but its so worth the read:"") thank you so much for the amazing story<3<3<3
baekmedo #12
Chapter 1: Lol i just scrolled down to see the important scene but it ended up, i'm crying again remembers all those moments they had aaahㅜㅜㅜㅜㅜㅜ why they had to die:(
yuganda
#13
Chapter 1: Oh god... My vision is all blurry now. I seriously should stop reading sad stories. T - T
ellecoj_arevir #14
Chapter 1: gonna read it again, this is seriously the best story ive read, thanks for this :)
m1chelle #15
Chapter 1: i could read this over and over again. it's so beautiful
sunshine2309 #16
Chapter 1: u made me cry....... i couldnt stop my tears from falling...i loved it....... feeling depressed...y they had to die...must say one of d best fic i hv read till now
Girlspretty #17
Chapter 1: i'm crying oh gosh, this is so good. here, have my upvote
Beauty_xoxo #18
Chapter 1: What the.......Im speechless,but I loveeee it