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exowufs #1
I really love this stories
exowufs #2
COuld you invite me to my girl pretty pleaseee><
cherbon #3
Chapter 47: i love love loveeeee this story! Pls invite me
EXOticLOVE88 #4
Chapter 45: OMG i read this in 4 hours <3 sooo gud, u should become a real author ^.^ i absolutely loved it , aishhh Sehun my bias wrecker haha , awesome job Author-nim
DeeDimond #5
Read this in two days. I can't focus on my assignment if I don't finished it. Hehee. It's too addicting. Goodjob! And the sequel? I want to read the story. Preety please? ^^
krystalkim #6
I can't read your sequel , could you invite me peleasee?? :^
whatever_19
#7
It's a daebak story and I want to read the sequel, can you invite me please??
alize_sakura #8
Could you please invite me to read the sequel? I really want to read it... *bow*
samantha_yunmin #9
Author, can I continue to read the sequel? Why dI'd you private it? Please let me read it? (*^*)
xiuminbaek
#10
I want your sequel!!
user_hyun
#11
Chapter 49: Did you delete 'my girl'? Why? :/
fionaa_lee #12
Chapter 47: I CAN'T READ YOUR SEQUELLLLL!! \(T~T)/
abethoi #13
Chapter 47: What a great great great love story ever. :) I really lv ur story authornim.
ChanyeolSp1127 #14
Chapter 41: UGH EHAT TJE AHN SOO JIN
ChanyeolSp1127 #15
Chapter 39: i love jae hyun i love him omg im crying what the hell
hellokity26 #16
Chapter 45: Oww so sweet love sehunand soojin couple so much! I love this story♡♡
good job authornim^^
khaleedapark61 #17
Chapter 47: You story were so good I love it so much!!! I want more Sehun POV
khaleedapark61 #18
Chapter 47: Authornim, Why I can't read your sequel?
gbast26
#19
Chapter 46: Yes okay first of all i want to thank you for being sooo good making this fanfic. Youve made ups and downs really interesting&beside every turned tables are always catchy for me to read. Goodjob authornim!:D
gbast26
#20
Chapter 16: This is really heartbreaking..
Samuraimama
#21
Chapter 49: Sweet story.... Great work!
chazzsm
#22
Chapter 6: I love that you're always looking for straw when you're getting embarrased :P
chazzsm
#23
Chapter 5: This is gettin' interesting! Yada yada~~~
chazzsm
#24
Chapter 4: For once, I really thought she dugged her own grave. Thank god you twisted the plot XD
Boring_Aegyo #25
Chapter 47: Omg, this took F O R E V E R to read... Glad I took the time, though.
When I first started this, I thought the whole plot seemed kind of cliché. The way you were writing it was in fact cliché to the point of me cringing, but I'm actually happy that I didn't quit on this fanfic. As I continued reading, slowly and slowly the story and writing got better, and I have to say this might be one of my favorite... Sehun fanfics. Sorry to say, but I've been reading fanfics for quite a while lololol.
I wouldn't rate this the best fanfic out there, sorry to be harsh. But by the end I loved it. It had such a happy ending and I don't feel that it was rushed at all. In no way do I regret reading this fanfic. Thank you~
yeollshin
#26
Chapter 46: yeay finally i finished it. I read this but i didn't commenting because i just too curious with the sequel hehe
the first thing that bring me to this story is... yeah, our gangster sehunieee :3 i love him so bad and you create his character so cool and i can't stop love him <3
i like soojin but i don't know why, actually, i ship soojin and jaehyun haha
but what i love the most is your writing. I like the way you describe the story. I have the favourite fanfiction author and your writing almost like her and it's really good!! of course you two are different. I still love it. Good job authornim~~
haneul1510_ #27
I love the description already lol.
sone-army #28
this was really really good and sehun was so cute being all uninterested in her haaha
yunasbowtie
#29
Chapter 1: You know, I could have sworn I commented on this story o.O AHHH
But anyways I'm happy that I can reread again :D
P. S. I'm so glad that I haven't had an alarm to wake me up nowadays! And that luxury is only going to last for a couple of more days :(
everykpoplover #30
Chapter 45: Wow that was the best
Keep up the good work
I loved your story it was amzing
Kimraeha
#31
Chapter 8: Oh my Prada~se Hun is just a cool & cute mob gangster anyway~*pleasa stabs me with a straw please xD*
miildBreeze_
#32
Chapter 45: IT'S JUST.. OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD!!! THE STORY IT'S SO GOOD, THE PLOT IS SO GREAT AND AND AND... okay, maybe i just blabbering right now!! Anyway, GOOD JOB AUTHORNIM!! LOVE YA!!!!
abotitaehyung #33
Chapter 45: Wow...at last happy ending....:)
THANKYOU authornim for such an amazing story...;)
abotitaehyung #34
Chapter 44: This chapter is so touching......:)
abotitaehyung #35
Chapter 20: OMG...sehun even reach reach soojin's house so...sweet.....:p
Yuki2591 #36
Chapter 6: I like this more than the sequel tbh
abotitaehyung #37
Chapter 14: Chapter14 was so emotional that made me burst into tears......hmmph
abotitaehyung #38
Chapter 13: Chapter 12 and 13 was soooo good... It makes my heart bounce...heee
abotitaehyung #39
Thank you author....I'm in chapter 8 but so far I enjoyed reading it....
missgalaxxy99 #40
Chapter 24: Bleed .. crying .. sehun ... this is the summary of the story
missgalaxxy99 #41
Chapter 21: ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥.
DanielleBacon
#42
Chapter 45: I finished it IN ONE GO~ jinjja!!! I haven't done my homework yet aigoo
oOhsenshine #43
Chapter 49: Ok, I know the last three comments are all gonna be from me and I should really just get to the point with my comments and not ramble- but I will write a new comment anyways (sorry) Author-nim I loved the ending, Jaehyun's character turned out to be great and your plot fitted his developement perfectly (You slayed it!) Soo jin kind of turned out to be really complicated for sehun, and I was first gonna be disappointed about her not being to explain, why she had so many doubts ( because of Yoo ra ) but then when Sehun said he didn't care just showed so much beauty in his character <3 btw I couldn't stop fangirling then !! I really really loved reading this story and I will probably reread it over and over again, so no, I am not going to unsubscribe. Tomorrow I'll start reading the sequel, I cant wait !!! Good job and keep it up.. Sorry, but you might see my comments more often cause the next thing that's gonna happen, is that I'm gonna read all your stories!! Author-nim Fighting! : D
oOhsenshine #44
Chapter 46: Oh my god author-nim I really was shocked at first cause I thaught Soo jin was breaking up with Sehun. That was just too much, DON'T DO THAT- Sorry I'm getting too emotional here. That's just me getting overly attached to my fav characters... And then that it's Sehun... The feels >_< I can't even... But other that feeling totally butthurt bc I thaugt Sehun was gonna get hurt by Soo jin, I really liked this Special! I could connect with sehun soo much more. BTW YOU KNOW HOW MANY THEORIES ( don't even ask-They were plain stupid) I WAS MAKING UP ABOUT HARABEOJI ACTUALLY BEING ALIVE IN THE END CAUSE THEY WENT TO VISIT HIM LOL... Anyway it was nice to have him appear for the readers again! Gosh I hte it when people pass away in books, in movies you can be like: " Oh the actor is still alive, bla bla bla ", but in books the character just leaves as if it was just an illusion of your mind that the character was part of the book :(... Sorry I got kinda carried away: )
oOhsenshine #45
Chapter 30: This is just great, I can't believe it's your first story Author-nim. I started reading this morning and I love it! There are many storys like this with the school genre and a bet etc etc but what stuck out to me is that sehun knows about the bet! You have a talent for keeping things interesting and I admire your creative plot, which seems simple but it just all fits together really really well. I love sehun being Soo jin's saviour and soo jins character is also done very nicely-I can connect with her various character traits ( exept being exeptionally beautiful lol (*~*) I'm too blown away by this story at chapter 30. I can't wait to reach the ending. ^_^
ka_elfworld #46
Chapter 49: author-nim,,,, thank you for reupload this story,, I just love to re-read this story all over again..
hoping for good sequel too :))
Vanlalhmangaihi #47
Chapter 46: Yes I read this story....again haha! Authornim i really really love this story and i can't get over it.It seems so real.I don't know how you are even able to do this,you're so amazing! It may seem like i'm overpraising but you really are amazing.This fic and the sequel will always be my no. 1 and nothing else will overcome it.. Itstill seems so real even if i read it for a million times! You really are the best Authornim... And please write more special chapters if you feel like writing it! And again thank you so much for putting up this fic again...
Un1c0rns
#48
Chapter 49: Wow I didn't expect there to be a sequel haha. I'm hoping it won't ruin the happy image I have in my mind of all the characters right now. Btw your story was amazing! At first it seemed a little cliche, but I kept reading. Eventually I found myself so immersed in the story that I couldn't stop reading. I had so many theories in my mind and I'm glad some of them proved to be true! (Achem Jaehyun and his reason for the bet.)
rardheani #49
Chapter 49: authornim, thank u very much and i love you .. :***
Nata-Mang #50
Chapter 47: wow just wow!!! I'm so in love with this story *___* I knew it that I won't regret to read this story from the beginning :D I will definitely going to read the sequel
Hwaiting!!!
Chamyungna
#51
Chapter 45: I still amaze after reread this story, your story is amazing author!
loveroflove #52
Chapter 46: OMG, I LOVE THE SPECIAL CHAPTER!!!! You put in everything else that I actually wanted to know from the story! YOU ROCK! THX ♡♥♡♥
loveroflove #53
Chapter 45: I finally got to reading this story to the end... at least the ending made up for the angst. Im glad they made up quite easily, so easily that I think Sehun is too soft on her, haha. Overall, I liked all the characters, they played their role well. I especially liked how Sehun's friends would give her advice and I especially loved how Jaehyun became a close friend to her in the end. Thank you for the story:)

P.s. You were right, I got seriously pissed at Soojin towards the end (but that's bcos she's being such an annoying confused brat!) Surprisingly, the one I like the most now is not Soojin, not even Sehun, but Jaehyun. Mayb bcos he was considerably less complicated and I just really liked his and Soojin's interactions once they became friends.
smilehaha
#54
Chapter 45: I'm in love with sehun
shierliho29 #55
Chapter 27: THIS CHAPTER JUST MAKES ME ASDFGHJKL OMG
Lila-Lovves
#56
Chapter 45: So where do I start? Okay, first off, I want to say that I liked this story. Really, even. I don't usually read just any story but I like stories like this..not too happy but not so tragic that it would be too unrealistic; I liked that there was an obstacle toward the end for their relationship and can I just mention how I like the way you portray Soo Jin's feelings? It's like the mind of a really fun person and I don't get bored from reading her thoughts . Overall I really enjoyed this. But can I just mention that she got traumatized a lot ? Wow I mean the girl got harassed so many times. I just want to hug her subconscious ( if that makes sense ). Good job !
BOICE-EXOTIC
#57
Chapter 23: OMGGGGGGGGGGG
I HAVEN'T EVEN FINISHED IT BUT IT'S AMAZING BALLS!!!!!!!!!!!
GODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE REST OF THE CHAPTERS :DDDDDDDDDDDDD
NanaNono #58
Chapter 47: Thanks, authornim, for the great story.. Keep writing :)
iLovExo12 #59
Chapter 45: This is great. Thank you for this story.
Teen2000
#60
Chapter 1: Thank you author :*
Teen2000
#61
Chapter 1: Cant wait to reread this story!!!
iLovExo12 #62
Chapter 8: I love you Sehunnie.
pinkfluffytissuebox #63
Chapter 14: ahhh this chapter made me cry ;-; so many feels <3
maiquie24 #64
Chapter 1: Lol! This is probably going to be my third time reading this! I just wanted to read it first again before reading the sequel xD
elcise #65
Chapter 47: Sehun's POV!! Ah, I love this story, well done :-)
xxkyungraxx #66
Great work!
shierliho29 #67
Chapter 14: What do you mean with "i'm really terrible with "sad" scene.."?
Here iam crying a han river ㅠㅠ
shierliho29 #68
Chapter 13: MY HEART OHMYGOD MY HEART JUST FREAKING DUGEUN DUGEUN
SEHUN KISSSSSED SOOJIN FINALLY OHGOD
/okay i need to calm down/
BUT STILLLLLLLL ><
Rosalieames #69
Chapter 9: Enjoying the story so far :) it's fun. Can't wait to see what the surprise is :) thank you for writing Author :) xoxo
Aqua_pastel #70
Chapter 45: awww I love that ending! I want him to protect me too T^T
xoxo24 #71
Chapter 45: I absolutely, positively LOVED this story. It was so great. It made me laugh and despair and honestly gave me so much anxiety because of their relationship. But, I was never really frustrated at the characters and their actions because they seemed realistic to some extent and they didn't make me cringe like I know some characters can do. I really enjoyed the story itself and it was just an added bonus that the "stupid gangster kid" happened to be the protagonist. Love, love, love it. Keep up the good work!
livelifesmilebig
#72
Chapter 44: JFC FINALLY THEY SOLVED THEIR . wait.. I need a moment I'm sort of tearing up from happiness. *ugly sobbing sounds* okay I'M GOOD. FREAKING HELL YES MY FEELS ARE OVERFLOWING AND THAT SCENE AND EVERYTHING IS JUST RIGHT WITH THE WORLD :DDDDDD
shierliho29 #73
Chapter 10: I want to continue reading this istg but its alr 2am and i need to sleep!
Btw i love how sehun taking good care of soojin asdfghjkl ><
shierliho29 #74
Chapter 4: When i read the 'it was fake check' part that SooJin talking about, i thought that she's lying searching for an alibi. But at the end my mouth just dropped too istg xD
shierliho29 #75
Chapter 3: Oh no! I just starting read this. Am i too late? ;_;
sharonsky #76
Chapter 47: KYaa finally..im up for the sequel
alysiaRB #77
Chapter 41: I like this story but I keep getting upset with the main character I don't know if I can keep reading ( I will though I couldn't stop myself even If tried) I just needed to vent thanks or the story :)
infinitelysoshi
#78
Chapter 46: cries cries cries hhehehehehe im glad i reread, im meemory is fresh now, cause i was pretty lost in the sequel heheheh love love love this so much
Kat2601 #79
Chapter 49: THANK YOU FOR EVERYTHING AUTHOR NIM!!! I loved reading your story and will carry onto the sequel:)))
vthan908 #80
Chapter 47: I'm on my trip now to somewhere. And I was going to check your story and them it is completed!!! SCREAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!! Thank you so much authornim. And I'm waiting for your updates for the sequel
kaaatienguyen #81
I'm so glad this was finished updating. This has been my third time reading and I still feel as if I'm reading from my first time. I just love Soojin and Sehun so much. Thank you so much for writing such a fantastic story. I'm really enjoying the sequel as well!
yayforbels #82
Chapter 47: Will you be updating the sequel?
whoissherin #83
Chapter 49: Yeaay finally they ended up together! Happy ending~ :3
I loved this story! You've work hard authornim! Thanks for your hardwork! >_<
I'll going off to the sequel kekeke
Rebel_Rose
#84
Chapter 46: i love this story - i'm really curious and interested in my girl now after this story! thank you for updating!
Thatgirl115 #85
Chapter 49: Loved every single part, I'm kinda curious about the plot line in my girl now because I thought a lot of it would be explained on here but It hasn't oh well, just means I don't have to leave these two for a little while more! Loving everything, thank you for the amazing updates
Lins718 #86
Chapter 46: wow finally it's done!! T.T
I love it so much Author-nim^^~~
owh and i love this part too, haha I thought you'll make it all along..
it's nice to know from Sehun's pov too.. hehe
infinitelysoshi
#87
Chapter 19: UUUUU MY HEART EXPLODED OMG I AHTE YOU IM DYING FROM THE FEELS
infinitelysoshi
#88
Chapter 14: How are you terrible at sad scenes?!?!?? Im crying buckets i hate you omg