Chapter 4: This was a really beautiful fan fic! I liked how you put a quote at the beginning of each chapter. The plot was really good and interesting too. I didn't even realize how long I was reading this as the chapters went by xD It was easy to read and everything flowed perfectly. Great work!
Chapter 9: this was jus too......out of d world...... it really touched my heart....u r a gr8 writer....hehehe...from 2day onwards consider me ur fan kekeke
Chapter 9: OHMYBEEJEEZUSBUM. THAT WAS SO GOOD, SO GOOD. LIKE SO GOOD. IT WAS SO GOOD. FANTASTIC. AMAZING. FABULOUS. BEAUTIFUL. OH GEEZ. THAT. WAS. SUCH A BEAUTIFUL STORY. OH MAN. SOMEONE HOLD ME. HONESTLY. THAT WAS SO GOOD. I LOVED IT SO MUCH. MADE ME SMILE AND CRY LIKE A MAD PERSON. THIS WAS PERFECT. FLAWLESS. UGH. UGH. UGH. UGH. I love your style of writing, and THE AMOUNT OF ANGST THAT YOU PUT INTO THIS OHGOODNESSME. I love this so much, I HATE THAT IT WAS SO SHORT THO OHGEEZ._. It was honestly so good. Thank you for this. Please keep writing until the day you die, or if possible, don't die and keep writing. I love you. And this story. And I love you.
Chapter 9: Hi there :) I just finished your story. Amazing work. I really like your writing; fluid narration with deep set words that was enough to strike through my little heart. <3 great job, dear! This was really good..sad but good, nonetheless :))
Chapter 9: I love the quotes. How you wrote them so beautifully. When I read your story, I can play the scenes clearly in my head and I love stories that can make me do that haha ^^ author-nim fighting! :)
The foreword alone made me cry, u can imagine how hard I cried after reading the last chapter right? Lol I feel like I'm somehow spamming the comments but asdfghjkl I can't !! >.<
Chapter 9: To be honest, I've subscribed to this fanfic for quite a while I suppose. I didn't really bother to read this initially. But after reading the intriguing prologue, I decided to read this. You know, I actually thought that a story with such a length wouldn't be that interesting and detailed. But in contrary to my prediction, this story is actually extremely well-written and detailed. I can see the efforts put into writing this fanfic. Your description was simply perfect. I love this fanfic profoundly and have already recommended this fanfic to few of my friends who loves exo :D three comments in a row, I'm certainly insane !!
Chapter 9: And dearest authornim, please continue to write stories like this one! It's really beautifully written<3 moreover, this taught me quite a lot things which I hadn't thought of before. Once again, I love this story dearly !!!! I hope you'll write even more amazing stories in the future :) a million thanks for providing is with such a so wonderful story :)
Chapter 9: This story is one of the best story I've ever read. Besides the fact that it is very nicely written (both in language and content) , this is also one inspiring and motivating story :) I simply love it! Now that I've read this wonderful work of yours, I've finally learnt that , as you said, we really have to cherish things we have. It is suprising that a relatively short story managed to make my cry!!! It was really touching...... Seeing how much she loves him but couldn't stay by his side......
Chapter 9: i cant tell you how much i really love this story, it feels like my heart shattering into pieces :"))) the fact that they cant end up happily ever after is the most heartbreaking momment, omggggggggg i cant even describe my own feeling right now!><
Chapter 9: I've been crying waterfalls for quite a long time since reading your story. I think it is perfect, as your writing style is very simple and easy to understand. You perfectly put into words whatever any character must be feeling, thus breaking our hearts more. I honestly thought that this story was a story like any other, cliche and boring, but really it was the exact opposite. The quotes were amazing and each held a deeper meaning within. I want you to write more stories, Author-nim :-) this was great, and I hope your future stories will be just as amazing - or more. Thank you for bittersweet adventure.
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