Chapter 9: YOU'RE WELCOOOMMEE!!! I know I've taken absolutely forever to read this and I didn't think much of it during the first and second chapter, but I was so wrong! Yes this taught me so much, and I'm so glad to say that I'm a Christian too! I take it you are as well? >.< Um, I hope you reply to at least one of my comments because you're such an amazing person for writing all this, being such an amazing writer (A ROOKIE?!? SERIOUSLY???? THIS IS TOO GOOD TO BE WRITTEN BY JUST A BEGINNER, WUT-- HOW OLD ARE YOU TnT I'M SORT OF JELLY HAHA) and being able to give such a strong, impacting, life-changing message through a fanfiction, that I would feel so thoroughly honored if you actually noticed and talked to me! :D I am definitely going to live my life gratefully from now on, and I'm gonna subscribe to you so I don't miss a single story! You are amazing! This is by far THE best story I've ever read! Not only is it amazingly-written and verbally drawn in such a way that I feel I am one with the character(s), it portrays such simple beauty and gentle rays of life and just an outstanding message that should be spread to more and more people! I've never felt so strongly about a story before, especially because it clearly shows that Seo Eun is a Christian, and her prayers came true. I've never come across a story where one of the characters are actually "religious" like this, haha. You are amazing. Just amazing. I can't form any more words. I am just speechless after saying all this. I just love you. YAH, AFF HELPER!! LET ME UPVOTE THIS 100 MORE TIMES!!! IT'S NOT FAIR THAT I'M LIMITED TO ONLY 1! >.< I just love you! And I'm so glad I can easily "read between the lines" so I could understand what you were trying to tell your readers. GAH! THIS IS TOO AMAZING!! I LOVE YOU! You are my new favorite author and role model! ^~^ <<333333
Chapter 8: Oh my gosh, first paragraph, tears started spilling out. I'm still sniffling. This is too sad. Never before have I cried this much over a fanfiction without the accompany of a sorrow tune. Baekhyun is just too much. Life just isn't fair enough to keep the two together. So unfair. So bittersweet. So black and white.
I'm sorry, this is just making me emotional. Really emotional and dramatic. But this is so sad and I can't help it...
Chapter 7: Oh... my... gosh... She died?!? Noo! Seo Eun!! I'm not crying physical tears. I rarely do while reading fanfictions. But I'm bawling inside and I just wanna scream. SHE DIED!!! This is so sad. Danggit, I'm starting to tear up. So her prayers were answered. Baekhyun woke up and she died. Wonderful. I'm so glad to see that Jae Yi is nice though. And the scrapbook is so sweet and nostalgic. After all their memories of fooling around and falling in love and their first kiss... I can't handle this. I'm becoming so emotional. TT-TT
Chapter 6: Omg......... They shared their first kiss with each other?!? AND THEY FINALLY KNOW WHO THEY WERE TALKING TO THE ENTIRE TIME ON THE WEB!! /le dies
I don't know how you do it. Words just cannot explain how I feel about this chapter right now. The perfect details, and sparking events, and "reading between the lines" moments. I'm not sure how many there are in this chapter but I think I've spotted all of them, haha. I especially love the one about the old lady. I hope she remembered why she was at the food market in the first place >.<
But Baekhyun sitting next to Seo Eun FINALLY and then their first kiss!! I know I already said that but haha, my feelz are just everywhere right now /spazzes and squeals to no end
Chapter 5: Aww! OMG, I just can't stop spazzing and squealing! Jaeyi though -_- She acts like such a brat. I probably shouldn't hate her, but I do. Because I'm so on Seoeun's side ^u^ And now I know fire sure that Baekhyun is quietguy1234! That. Is. DAEBAK. SERIOUSLY. Haha
Don't worry about the chapters being too long or detailed! I don't know about other readers, but I absolutely love it! I love descriptive writing and yours is truly beautiful, making me feel like I'm really there and experiencing and witnessing all the events and emotions :DD Yes there are a few grammatical/spelling errors, but those are minor and really, I barely notice ^^
Chapter 4: KYAAA THEY'RE PERFECT FOR EACH OTHER!! I'm starting to think that Jiyin doesn't really like Baekhyun. He's just cute. Haha. That's the only reason they're even dating, maybe XD
Whoah! Baekhyun likes photography?? And Seoeun likes art! KYAAA!! /spazzes and squeals /dies
Chapter 9: You are an exceptional writer. & I loved the amount of details you put into this. This is seriously a really well written fic. Your word choices and omg the prologue with the alphabet and four words, I thought that was really neat. Great job!
Chapter 1: Your story is beautiful. It moved me to tears. I love how you portrayed everyone, and your words are like art. I hope you write more beautiful stories.
Chapter 9: its a tragedy...i dont know why u so cruel to make me feel this way...irony..i hate angst but craving for more after reading one...eeeeuuuh....i admit this is well written... i enjoy it...but its still tragedy afterall....
Chapter 9: One word: Beautiful
I was basically crying my heart out, in a good way.
Its tragic but touching.
One of the most amazing fics I've read.
Keep up the good work <3
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