Chapter 9: Oh my god I just
Wow
Such a well written angst ;_;
I like how you write it! Your choice of words is just beautiful :3
The flow is a little bit too fast imo and I can somehow guess what will happen in each chapter lol /guess I've read too much fanfic orz/
But I think it's still okay.
I like the characters too
Baek being gentle and perfect
Seo eun being kind nerdy independent
I like how she choose the bus over baek's car! :3
aw. what an ending :( you don't mean to make seo eun a little selfish right? its evitable knowing you'll about to go and doesn't to put too much pain on the one you'll left behind. as much as i want seo eun to stay with baekhyun i can't. haha. nwei thank you for sharing this story on us :) so don't worry i know this has been completed long time ago and i know nothing will change but i just want to say that you made a good one story here.
anyway i was itsy bitsy bothered about your A/N if you will ask me longer and detailed chapters are better. well you don't have to worry too much about being too detailed in your story. just go with what you want and hmm just like you i like detailed fics the most and long chapters are good :) well i know many readers out there are up to detailed and longer fics rather than shorter ones. liked the story very much man you really made me tear up in 'h&p' /thumbs up/
Chapter 9: I just can't- i didn't cry, but i felt as if my heart was poked by a million needles and it hurts as fck. A Beautiful story that deserves to be featured. You can never deny this. I really can relate to this ;) Thank you for reviving some memories in me, love you author-nim!
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Chapter 9: OH MY GOODNESS! Do you understand what I'm feeling right now?! Do you realize how many times I cried?! It wasn't just once, twice but what... 100 time or something! Like seriously, I'm sitting in the living room and I start crying, my sister asks what happen but she ends up face palming at me after I told her it was a fanfic! The plot! The story! GAHH I'm going crazy over this! Did I mention that I cried already? Oh, I did? Well for the last time... I FREAKING CRIED!!!
Chapter 9: Never in my life i thought that a normal angst story would make me cry this hard.Ur lines,the way u potrait the characters are like damn good,love ur work !!!!
Bows *
Chapter 9: I am having goosebumps because of this story! It's really beautiful and touching and has a lot of hidden meanings behind simple words and I hope I had grasped them all. .. I really am speechless plus I am not good at expressing my feelings a lot but this story touched me in a way no other story did! I am really grateful I found this gem :-D this was perfect ♥
Chapter 9: I have never read something in my existence that has made me cry as much as this work of literature has. I am genuinely thankful that you wrote this. It is absolutely beautiful, and a true work of art. I can't even imagine how hard you worked on this, or how you can even write something so moving, but I am glad for it all. Thank you, sincerely. <3
Chapter 9: Wow, you written it so beautifully... But the first time I read it I'm a bit confused, the deeper you read it, the more it revealed and thanks to you, you did a good job for the new writer
I FINISHED IT WITHIN ONE HOUR AND NOW I AM A CRYING MESS. GOD HOW FATE PLAYING WITH THEM. I COULDNT- THIS IS SO BEAITIFUL YET SO HEART-WRECKING. HIKSSS *pulling out tissues* I HOPE YOU WRITE MORE I'LL READ YOUR OTHER STORIES!
I FINISHED IT WITHIN ONE HOUR AND NOW I AM A CRYING MESS. GOD HOW FATE PLAYING WITH THEM. I COULDNT- THIS IS SO BEAITIFUL YET SO HEART-WRECKING. HIKSSS *pulling out tissues* I HOPE YOU WRITE MORE I'LL READ YOUR OTHER STORIES!
Chapter 9: The story is so well written!!!! I'm crying I the middle of the night right now!!!!! This is a really good story!!!! Can't believe I just found it today...
Chapter 9: Can I tell you a secret?
your story touch me in everyway possible than the other story I had read so far.. :)
when I read your story,it flow right and smooth and I love how detailed you are and the quotes you give because it is true.
I love you for writing this.thank you..
I hope to read your next story and to be true,I would like to be your friend.
Thank you.. :)
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