oh my godnesss..SEQUELLL!!! :D

This wasn't even really , but it's the best one I've ever read I think.

"Fill me to the brim with your seed the color of holiness but made of jet black sin."
Favorite line <3

Hahaha.
ert hyuk!but i love da way he think!kyahahaha >.<
soo0o0oo0o delici0us!hahaha
and HAE~!be ready!earn ol of ur strength to satisfy hyuk's desires!0^^v kekeke

love it!m0re ff!hihihi :*

I demand a sequel xD
Anyways... Well now that was quite graphic... I LOVED IT SO MUCH HOW IN THE ING WORLD DO YOU COME UP WITH THESE WORKS OF ART??? HOW???
*speechless and drooling*

i kinda feel hot here even i my air - cond . . hahahaha

everything after the sentence
" me with that steel rod of yours, Lee Donghae."
BECAME ING HOT AS HELL ITSELF
OR EVEN HOTTER!!!

GOD this was just....just ing...I cant even...*fans self*
and it doesnt help that im listenint to
i want your bite by chris crocker >< not even a little
i need to cool down for a while...

HAHAHA. This is amusing! Good job! :D This is well written..

written in truly artistic, poetic, beautifully descriptive, form. How so you do it? People say I can write well, screw them and their bull. I write like a ing kindergardner compared to most authors, and compared to you...Damn. You are one of the most amazing authors that it's ever been my complete honour and pleasure to read.

OH YEAH<br />
THIS IS VERY HOT <br />
I LIKE YOUR STYLE HERE :d

THIS IS JUST THE BEST THING I EVER HAD THE HONOUR TO READ. XDD OTL I LOOOOOOVE IT. IT'S SOOOOOOOO GOOD WRITTEN AND I WANNA KNOW TOOOO~~~!! ^^ keep up this kind of writing, fighting~ lol <3

y as hell. :D

“Are you sure you want to know?"<br />
<br />
YES .... I WANNA KNOW!!!!<br />
<br />
Are u planning to make a sequel?? *anchovynemoeyes*<br />
<br />
As always .. Love ur work!! ♥͡.̮♥͡

lol idk why but it's so funny!

innocent hae is curious...<br />
<br />
:B

OMG SO HOT!!!<br />
So, so, so, so, so... WOW! :D

NOSEBLEED!!<br />
Love/hate the cliffhanger. . . :)