Chapter 1: Well, every wish has been granted many times in many of the fanfics so.....kkkkk

Chapter 1: Uhm. . what makes you so Hyukkie? XD

Chapter 1: This is so good! That was some real XD

Chapter 1: This was both funny and really well written, wow. I wish I had this kind of imagination honestly.

Chapter 1: Dbfjdks ! Gold! This was gold!!
<3

Chapter 1: Hyuk, you have hotter imagination than tape !!!

Chapter 1: At first it looked like Hyukhae but then it was like Haehyuk? Which is it?

Chapter 1: Omg that !

Chapter 1: I'll tell you one thing, all that day dream will make EXCELLENT ING when both their clothes finally come off *faints*

Chapter 1: OMG so hoooot

Chapter 1: Omg.. I love this.. so many dirty thoughts.. hot.
I can just hope Hae will grant all Hyuk wishes! xD

Chapter 1: you stopped in the right moment or else i've got nosebleed ;; i'm cracking!! loooool i suspected it's only an imagination but the turns out you made is hilarious with innocent-looking donghae we have there hahaha thankyouthakyou your description is hot! details and ..if i were a boy i'd get right away. oh i'm hopeless like that

Chapter 1: Oh damn... Why it must be daydream then....

Chapter 1: aaakkhhh first chap ohh hyuk hot
naughty hyukkie

Chapter 1: mhuhahaha and after all of your bottom obsession , lee donghae will be still writhing underneath you, isn't it hyuk bb :P << hyukhae obsessed

Chapter 1: This is HOT!

Chapter 1: Oh gawd ...... Save us !!! Tis is hot hot thoughts indeed !!

Chapter 1: oh my gahd >.< they're gonna have one day for sure :)

Chapter 1: Oh damn! It was all a daydream :/

Chapter 1: This. Was. Just. Amazing.
Ok.... lol.
But still, the way it's written it took my breath away. And I pretty much lost air. Can't breathe.
This is way too hot.
And, it's beautiful. You have a way with words that makes this one shot amazing.