Chapter 1: iest shishnitts i have ever read...omg i love ert hyukjae!!!

Chapter 1: ert thought that come to an end with a Hyukkie,

Chapter 1: woooaaahhh, your words is sooooo deeppp... I love it.... It feels like read a real novel...

Chapter 1: My god you have a way with words. You didn't miss a beat. I loved it all the way through. It was never boring or repetitive. I think you have a gift writing these types of stories. ^^

Chapter 1: OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!,.,. That was ____ing hot!!., go hyuk tell to hae what were you thinking ^^ ,., i'm sure he would love to know too.,.,

Chapter 1: WHOAH...HYUKJAE YOU DIRTY MONKEY...^^

Chapter 1: That was hot!

Chapter 1: wow!!! just wow!! can we have a sequel

Chapter 1: Whoa Hyukjae you have a great mind! How do you describe your imagination like that it's so hot O.O

Chapter 1: all i can say is .. WHAT A NICE IMAGINATION YOU HAVE .. HYUKKIE XD

Chapter 1: MUST HAVE SEQUEL!!!! I DEMAND A SEQUEL!! >.<"!!!
...please...? *puppy eyes*

Chapter 1: Sequel. o_o

Chapter 1: Needs. A. sequel O_O

Words than render me hot and _____. Damn!

Ahhhh, is it bad that I can see Hyukkie really thinking this?? Then again, who DOESN'T want Donghae to them up? xD I think I blushed really hard while reading this, but if Donghae or Hyukkie could read it at least their blushes might lead to a reenactment?...lol.

well written. so well written. one can simply e to these kind of thoughts. its amazing how he didnt. lol

WhiteGalaxy pretty much said it all.

I can't even tell if this could be classified as or not.

Like...this was incredibly hot and raw but still...poetic?

As I said, you have this amazing writing style even when describing carnal, instinctual . So this is both hot and poetic.

...mmm. Ignore me, I'm daft.

Hey, what's the word in the title supposed to be?

Huhuhuhu...hae ur gonna get the shock of ur life...