Chapter 16: Interesting pairings in this story - it is a mystery though what the rogues are up to and if Paragon is truly involved or being set up to take the blame??

Chapter 13: Are we meeting Kyungsoo??

Chapter 10: Sweet Suho knows how to edge??

Chapter 8: Of course Baek would tell Chan something like that!

Chapter 6: Thoughtful decisions are the hardest to make because you take into account all the pro's and con's, while not deluding yourself - I can appreciate how hard this is for Tao - his inner monologue is well written.

Chapter 1: I started reading so that I could get to the sequel - very interesting wolf dynamics and customs - I'm looking forward to this journey!

Chapter 13: Poor Sehunnie! Maybe there was something that drove Zelo mad? ??
I know who the person with wide eyes is.

Chapter 12: Chanyeol surprised me. He took thing too well.

Chapter 9: Hahahahaha Chanyeol was too much hahaha and Sehun is a little s*#t! Hahaah. This chapter was really funny. Hope Chanyeol enjoys his night todo haha.

Chapter 8: Tao and Kris obviously have a deep conection, for Tao to know before hand what Kris is going to ask hahaha.

Chapter 7: I share Yixing's thoughts. I like that he wants Sehun to be only his. The pack having those is rare haha. So I like his feelings for Sehun, to be the only one able to kiss, touch and be more intimate with him.

Chapter 6: Oww this chapter was cute. Luhan was cute. I laughed a lot when Tao delivered the messages wrong hahaha.

Chapter 5: The pack is going to get bigger! Tao is so infatuated with Kris right now that he can't stay away from him.

Chapter 4: I will say it again, SEHUN IS SO DAMN CUUUTE!!! Hahahaha I laugh with the bet.

Chapter 3: Sehun is a cuttie pie! Another thing that was tender was Kris, counting the days since Tao left him and have stopped calling or sending messages to him. He is truly repented for what I can see and tired, maybe because it makes him feel bad being away from his mate. He picked up the phone very quick, so he was surprised when he saw the caller ID. Poor thing but he didn't act well towards Tao. If he transformed Tao without talking to him about the true, then I see it hard for him to be forgiven.

Chapter 1: Oowww!!!Sehun's message was so cute! He is the only one that I like at the moment. In all those hands and tongues over Tao he was the only one that made that uncomfortable moment cute.

Suho's the other one that seems less bad for me. In his message he was so caring, asking Tao to eat well because he losed weight.

One thing I don't like and don't understand is why Yifan/ Kris let the others "have" Tao ? Here he was the one who truly had with Tao but why let the pack touch him in that way? Isn't he supposed to protect and be jealous of his mate or was it some kind of punishment for him for leaving the pack? I don't understand the way he acts. Wasn't he jealous that someone else was touching his mate so intimately? I was kind of expecting him to be more possessive. I really like the story so far.

The plot did catch my attention.

Chapter 23: Wooooh it’s indeed a rollar coaster ride.I'm so pleased that I 've find it though too late.I don’t know if you write taoris fic anymore.But I'll be glad if you still are here.I just can't describe how much I love this fic.I've read every sentence for almost 3 time so that any word or meaning wouldn’t be missed.You can feel me right?I salute you!Salute!

Chapter 24: Back again. Once again in tears over this damn emotionally wrecking last chapter. God that tears me up every time. But it’s so good

Chapter 24: Sis I tell you what. I do love this fic. Like. A lot. But this chapter NEVER fails to make me SOB my whole heart out. It doesn’t matter what time of day or what mood I’m in, I always bawl my heart out. It’s so painfully detailed and it’s everything I hate to read. It’s good, don’t get me wrong. But it HURTTTSSS