Chapter 25: I love Tao and stuff, but him wanting to stay, but "needing time and space" after just forgiving them and realizing they were a family and that he loved them all, really! Make up your mind, Tao! You stay or don't stay
Chapter 25: I just wanted to let you know how freaking dang perfect this story was. I've read it twice and am now reading it a third time. I love the dynamics and wih them being wolves, you wrote it so well that it adds more to the story than taking away like others do.
I'm stoked for your sequel!
Chapter 18: Tao sometimes pisses me off. Always "I want to stay" but "I can't" even though it's the most logical choice to do so. As the chapters progress on, I'm starting to feel no pity for Kris laying to Tao, as I think Tao's reaction is way too deep for it. I understand the hurt and pain, and the scars, but I think his actions are now coming off as selfish.
But, I still think there's a lot to develop for him :) And this story is one of the best I've read! Really exciting to read it.
Chapter 23: Ok, again, 2-3 times after reading this AL over again, i still want to cry at these last 2 chapters T^T my heart breaks again and again for Taemin :( You totally conveyed these emotions so well, i need to read this constantly. i don't think i'll ever get tired of this fanfic. I want a PDF or something for this, so i could print it or something, and make a book of it..... and carry it around with me and read it everywhere and comment constantly after every read XDDD
Chapter 9: My 2nd-3rd time reading this and this chapter ALWAYS makes me laugh XD i snorted so many times and i couldn't breathe!! XDD I'm laughing about it right now, just THINKING about it XDD
Chapter 26: HAY! i would like that~
I actually can do a layout for you if you want
I have more than 100 characters in RPR and a lot of roleplays if you needed help i can!
and this is just an amazing idea!
i bet it will be awesome
can i be kris?
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