Chapter 9: OMG FINALLY ;_________;
you don't know how long i've been waiting for this, i always check on my subscriptions every time just to check if you've updated your story or not. And now, voila! I saw your update last night and read it today.
Seriously, this is getting more interesting!!! Uhhh i love you and your writing T____T
Chapter 9: Oh no poor taemin , I hope a miracle will happen & he can be well again :( I miss the LuYoon moments badly.... Luhan should talk to Yoona & explain everything to her bcoz she already forgave him in the first place, & the twins need both of them together & it's sad that they didn't even know they have a twin brother somewhere....
Chapter 9: I don't know why I got frusted sometimes with Luhan's character . I knew he did everything for the sake of everyone. (In his opinion I think) I just wanted him to contract Yoona and let her know where they were.
If Taemin was going to died at least let her see her son. I was sad for both Kai and Taemin.
Chapter 9: OMFG OMFG OMFG ROCHELLE YOU UPDATED! I SCANNED THROUGH THE WHOLE THING OMG AND I FEEL LIKE CREYING BECOZ THERE'S NO LUYOON GETTING BACK TOGETHER BUT SO MUCH YOONHUN AND I FEEL SO CONFLICTED RIGHT NOW I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO FEEL BUT YOU'RE SUCH A GENIUS OH GOD MY HEART IS QUAKING OH GOD WHAT WILL I DO WITH MY LYFE WHY AM I SO INCOHERENT
I HEART YOU AND I HEART THIS FIC AND I OWE YOU SO MANY COMMENT SPAMS BUT IT WILL COME, I PROMISE.
did i mention that your language has improved so much?
Finally caught up to date with chapter 8. I read this through two weeks or so so I might miss some details...i remember laughing at the bit where jaejoong said that he hates the zoo and luhan replies, 'you suggested we go to the zoo' and then when jaejoong explains why he hates the zoo i felt really guilty for laughing. Sehun is really sweet by spending time with Yoona.
The tangerine express!! omg I had no idea that an ACTUAL train would be the reason behind the title of the story. I was so busy assuming it was due to the toy trains...and it was pretty freaking awesome to read that Luhan finally can get a job by riding a train around a zoo. it makes me wonder if somehow Yoona would find out about the tangerine express. oh how i hope they will reunite.
i know you said that there is a ton of angst to come still and when you mentioned that jongin will also suffer, i read the bit where jongin keeps going 'ow, ow' and i got worried, like why was he just repeating himself?? i don't know if that's a clue or just my own weird interpretation.
damn, you see i have this really happy canon ending in my head where yoona and luhan reunite with their babies and they all live happily ever after. not at all realistic i know but i just love this cute little family so much that it breaks my heart knowing it's going to end all horribly.
not sure if i missed anything else out but thanks for the update and i look forward to chapter 9 (it's only chapter nine? gosh, it feels like i've read 20 chapters haha). life goal: reading tangerine express to the end.
Chapter 8: I love this story!
It was such a twist when Luhan left!
I adore your writing skills and I think it has inspired me.(:
Thank you for being such a skilled writer and keep up the good work!♥
Chapter 8: I love this story so much! c:
It's a fanfic that I've rarely found but I love it.
I like your writing skills and the words you used are just fantastic.
I wish more people will make story like this , not fluffy or fantasy type.
seriously , I love this story . ^^
Chapter 8: This chapter really alot of emotion... I'm a bit crying in here and there scene ;(
I really adore you writing skill and it's so beautiful...
my heart flutter when luhan and yoona felt so happy to be able to see their sons milestones... and felt so sad~ when I know their missing saw the other son milestones...
so glad luhan found a job and found a kind of bestfriend like jaejoong, , same goes to yoona.. I just hope sehun always there for cheer up yoona...
aaaaaaahhh my heart breaking T.T
thanks for the update~
Chapter 8: Is it possible to love and hate someone at the same time?Coz I do love you and hate you author-nim..
I love you for make my heart flutters with LuYoon's happines to be able to see their sons' first step,first word,first laugh.
I hate you coz you make my heart breaks with the fact that LuYoon watch their sons' milestones,separately.
(ʃƪ´▽`)♥ (ʃ˘̩̩̩^˘̩̩̩ƪ)
Btw,I like Jaejoong's character here.Thanks for make him as my Lulu's (kind of) best friend,at least Luhan and Taemin are not alone in Japan :)
Well,thanks for the update!^^
Chapter 7: Why do I have the feeling that Taemin couldn't make it to present day?That would be sooooo heart-breaking,and to me,your story is already angsty enough..I'm not the teary type,but I sniffed a lot while reading your recent updates (not bcuz of my chronic respratory tract infection,it got better)
God blesses you with amazing gift,author-nim.I'm really looking forward to your future updates!!
Chapter 8: It was worth the wait, extremely worth the wait 'chelle. I tried so hard not to cry-- why did nobody warn me not to listen to Baby Don't Cry and Don't Go while reading- I couldn't even reach out for paper napkins to dry the tears, I could only keep reading. I swear my emotions were riding a roller coaster, one moment I was grinning at Jongin's first steps and the next moment I was tearing up because Luhan miss it; I smiled again when Taemin laughed, then became a sobbing mess thinking about luyoon separated and missing their other son's first moments. I don't know if I should hate you or love you ;_;
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