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Nnnn_Exo
#1
thank god channie found bacon!!!!!!!go save him chanchan!!NOW!!!!!!!!!

Kris too save tao NOW!!!
ninaz7 #2
Update soon Author-Nim!! I'm a new subscriber and loving your story!!! Hahaha And YES D.O's English pronunciation is AMAZING!! Kekeke
meomeo #3
yayy an update!! This is one of the few fics that I look forward to each week :)
Nnnn_Exo
#4
omooo this is getting good ^^
thank you so much for update :D
AlteaAuroraRia
#5
Homin! Annyeong! What the, Chanyeol! You are super funny. >< And the dragon is forever cute! *hugs* I love you Krunchy!

Where is my Tao author-nim? What have you done to him!?

Update soon!
Kironstree #6
So many Krisyeol moments!!! If lukai doesn't work out are Krisyeol going to??
bluegroove10 #7
i'm really worried with this story having a sad ending... i miss hunhan so much.. i want baekyeol to reunite please!!! and i hope kai will stop ing everyone else..
nicute24
#8
Part 2!

P.F.o.C.a.k.a.E.Y.a.n.k.a.U.C.D.R. teaching his son how to breathe fire, eh? KRUNCHY, HOW OLD ARE YUU? HOW LONG DID YUU STAY AT THAT FREAKING LIBRARY(with endless shelves) HIBERNATING AND YOU DON'T KNOW HOW TO BREATHE FIREEEE? sigh.
So yunho's a Pyro too,huh. Hmm, he can be the Pyrokinetic Man in the Military Suit with a Dead Ferret on his shoulder and his hair up. (P.M.i.t.M.S.w.a.D.F.o.h.s.a.h.h.u. -.-)
Yeol, you refrain from using fire and you can't control fire much, eh?

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But you can burn books and Libraries just like no other. Stupid P.F.o.C.a.k.a.E.Y.a.n.k.a.U.C.D.R.
Yeol, it's like this. You control the flame, but keep loose and BE COMFORTABLE. That's actually how I put it.
Yay my comment's finally over. Now for the post script and the post post script or post script script whatchamacallit whatever.
P.s.
Found some typos, but whatever.
P.p.s.
What the plurking vomiting rainbows is a hooha?
P.s.s.
What's your tumblr? Lol totally oot.
P.p.s.s.
You just ruined P.F.o.C.a.k.a.E.Y.a.n.k.a.U.C.'s dream of burning libraries with Krunchy the Moody, Lazy Dragon who hates fire and can't breathe it.(K.t.M.L.D.w.h.f.a.c.b.i.)
P.p.p.s.s.
Give us updates on Jino, please.
(Too many P's and S's. I'm ending it here now.)
nicute24
#9
I haven't been able to comment on the last chap since I was busy pondering on my non existent social life xD
Here goes:
From chapter 17 to 18
So tae did look like kai, but he only realized it one chapter later? When Taemin was older? Huh.
Hanburger. Luhan , honey, that's you and it should only be exclusively served to Sehunnie.
Soo.. kai. You're an ahjusshi now because of the way you walk,huh? If only you listened and actually stayed with the leadernim medics... your injury might've been better.
So Kris was overwhelmed by our Pyromaniatic Fairy on Crack also known as Egg Yeol and now known as Unbelievably Crazy Dragon Rider. He was the one with the crazed look and not even the ladies were complaining..(and Kris, isn't your power FLYING? You'd be flying even faster than Krunchy's wings could! Why are you overwhelmed by this incomparable speed? Are you scared?)
Lol
And P.F.o.C.a.k.a.E.Y.a.n.k.a.U.C.D.R.(wow it has evolved on so many levels-er, letters) just had to ask about the dead ferret.

Xiumin and Suho's argument was amusing and their lack of reasoning. Just trying to... reason. Yeah, reasoning without really reasoning. Hmm.
Sehun, where did you pick up that horrible impulsiveness? And on Yixing, too. If Luhan was there....(I'll leave it hanging)

Thank goodishnezz that Yunho and Changmin were humorous. If not,....  ̄ˍ ̄
Why did none go to their town to transport them? Hmm..
And true, what would happen to Exoplanet afterwards?
@changmin understanding Chanyeol's talk: one sign of a true choikang. Understanding Choikang language.

Our chemically modified glow in the dark not so pulsating red Bacon, what hash haffened right yuu! YU EVIL EVIL MEEENIONNNSSS! WHAT DID TIME DU TO BACON! HDY EXTRACT HIS POWER'S POTENTIAL! GRRR..
Bacon, yu don't know who ryeowook is? Somebody hasn't been reading their history or listening to P.F.o.C.a.k.a.E.Y.a.n.k.a.U.C.D.
Hmm.
Part 2
OccasionalMuse
#10
HAHAH! YES! i read your A/N! (i have no life T__T)
its fun actually! especially all the relevant and (sometimes) irrelevant gifs are really entertaining! :)

andddddd~~ i love you forever for placing Changmin and Yunho here! <3

and i wonder why Chanyeol is afraid of his powers. is it the normal kind of fear? or something happened to him before?:)

i shall wait for your update~! youre awesome! did i ever tell you that? :)
Xcutionist
#11
It's okay~
make sure to read it after ur exam, 'kay~!
good luck w/ ur exam~!!!!
Nnnn_Exo
#12
omo sehun-ah,,,our cutie maknae turn into evil maknae,,scratch that,,evil cute maknae kekekekeke

and goooooosh channie,,,he's JJANG!!!LOLOLOLOL
Baengsin #13
Wait a second.. The b124etc thingy is from Ta-dah it's b.a.p right? And I feel like the one chanyeol and kris are talking to is yong guk.. Am I right :d?
OccasionalMuse
#14
BSKDHGSKJFHDAKSJHD

If i could just help you in your exams so that you can finish it asap and write more gorgeous chapters, ill DO IT!

OMG. Chanyeol always cracks me up. i love that derpguy to the MAX!

hehehe, and OMG! Taemin! can i have him?? ill put him in my pocket and carry him with me forever. sdfbakjhsdf HES SO CUTE HERE!

and dsfhkajfk! LUKAI! HFKJAHSDFLHASDJKFAHLS!!

btw. lol, is it wrong for me to look forward to your authors notes in the end?? ehhehe, they are as much of a treat as the story!

LOL, im totally with you on Chanyeol-on-specs. <3 i lost a piece of my heart to that guy~

anyways. goodluck on your exams! -hands you a rolling buffalo!
AlteaAuroraRia
#15
LOL Chanyeol what is wrong with you? >.< And Sehun! I know you miss Lulu but theres no need to punch poor Lay. >w<

Pics: DO! Why the f are you cheating on Kai? MY BAEKYEOL HEART IS BROKEN! TwT
Kay, jk.

Update soon!
meomeo #16
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!! Thank god luhan is ok, I don't know what I'll do if he was captured ;A; but then again kai and sehun will probably put their life on the line to save him so maybe it'll be cool if the Evil caught him :P (i feel like a horrible fan)
I'm a huge hunhan shipper but this story makes me want to ship lukai...omggg what are you doing to my feelings.