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Pollution
#1
Oh wait, so a person that Luhan knows turned in to a product of the evil?
bubbleees
#2
LOOOOOOL YES I LOVE YOU FOR ALL THE KAIHAN HAHAHAHA

and kai went back to luhan even though he's still hurt aww i hope nothig happened to him while kai was gonee

thanks for updating !
chippawabrike
#3
100th comment? That shows how boss I am :3
Haha x'D Kai is so sweet to LuHan, I hope they can be together ;~;
Fighting!
ForeverCellist
#4
Augh, I haven't had a chance to comment!!! DX I just caught up on my reading. Darn busy school life!
So your 15? :D *reading replies* Me too! When's your birthday? Are you 96 or 97?
Kironstree #5
I'm guessing the survivor is Lay, because he can heal!
Nnnn_Exo
#6
YOU'RE GOOOOOOOOOD ^^
Gaaahh i love this story too much,,Chanyeol cracks me up everytime!!!
oh and my bias in exo iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiisssssssssss *drumroll*

Baby LuLu ^^

Luhan is too cute to be true..
whats yours??
chippawabrike
#7
LuKai is so cute ^^ so much more original than hunhan -_- more LuKai please author! :)
Please let my gorgeous Kai be safe <3
karumen
#8
brb, while I scream in joy at the lukainess and cry in sorrow at the fact that luhan is still smitten with sehun. WAE, YOU DO THIS TO ME, AUTHOR-NIM?!
aiden-sneezes #9
8D MORE?
SadisticReborn #10
I need to express how much I ADORE Krunchy and his fake death xDDD he's soooo cute xDD I hope he will be of better use later on :p

OOOH I wonder what's gonna happen to Kai... Awww poor Kai... It's always Sehun's favourites that Luhan rmbs... As much as I like LuKai, I still ship HunHan... Coz they are just perfect :p
AlteaAuroraRia
#11
AHHH KAI! LUHAN WAKE UPPPPP!!

Okay, need to chill.... I'm sorry, Kai, but I'm pretty sure Luhan will only remember things Sehun likes. Well... You have Kyungsoo, that's okay right.

Update sooon~
cheerioslee #12
who was that?!?! was it jino and baekhyun?!?! did they finally escape from whoever?!? where's lay when u need him?!!? everyone's HURT!!! >.<
Kironstree #13
Loving the krisyeol and lukai!
ja_chan12
#14
Yes, I will. HAHAHA. I kinda do ship Kai/DO but I don't mind Kai/Suho as well. :">

I need more. I need to know what's happening to the others and if Beakhyun is alright(my bias). Update as soon as you get a rest, k? :>
nicute24
#15
SAnd part2.
It made Luhan worried! Don't you know that head enough problems with Hunnieeeeee?(lol over biased)
Okay.
Kai I know that u like Luhan but u know very well that he still luvvs Sehunnie and for him everything only(reminds him of him.get it?)
And why do you have to ask on what u will change into? Didn't you see that Luhan has a, 'plain grey shirt' on his hands?
Blah blah moving on
Who is that barely breathing bloodied man on the back of the minion(wow I suddenly remembered despicable me) of evil. It's not BACON OR JINO RIGHT? TELLL MEEE! ㅠㅅㅠ
*Sigh*
Kai, don't die. Han would be worried and guilty and sad.
Han, don't die. Hun+ all of us would mourn for years.
okay I'm finally done.
Wow, I said that I don't think I'll write that long but I wrote even longer. Oh, meh. Whatchever. Tell me what your faced looked like. LOL JK.
Okay. Over and out.
;D
nicute24
#16
Once again glad to be of service. I don't think I'll be able to write that long again, though.
Okay.
So just as I predicted, Krunchy, P.F.o.C.'s sidekick-er-familiar(Oh no I slipped) is a lazy Moody dragon who according to our one and only P.F.o.C.(cause pyromaniatic fairy on crack is too damn long) has hibernate for two thousand years.
I feel that P.F.o.C.a.k.a.E.Y.(cause I forgot to add it ⇧⇧⇧there)'s dreams(cause every P.F.o.C. has one)of burning down all the libraries on the whole EXOPLANET has been slowly diminished for poor Krunchy the lazy Moody dragon cannot breathe fire.(So since you can't breathe fire, does that mean that you're only some sort of flying reptile that looks like a dragon, can fly(i did say flying reptile, right?), and puffs smoke out of your nose when you snore(oh and you snore so noisily y'know. Don't scare the survivors away)?)
Eh. Whatever. I'm sprouting random things again.
So two survivors. One week, two towns. Mr Lee Soo Man, just how damn big was that bag that you can fit a weeks worth of dry food(and chicken. Hmm, no bacon? P.F.o.C.a.k.a.E.Y.(it's so effin long!) must be suffering.) and water? Oh, and a tent too. Just how many people can fit in there?-.-'
Whenever I'm commenting on this story I suddenly get an influx of questions and ideas....
Krunchy, stop being such a lazy familiar(there, I said it right)! Kreeespy is the father,right(I suddenly LOLed at this)? Discipline your child!(who is older that you by centuries..-.-)
...
I need an update on our chemically modified glow in the dark pulsating red Bacon! And the other groups! Have they come across Lay the amazing healing unicorn(okay, maybe not unicorn. We'll leave turning into that to shapeshifter Jino)?
...
To Kai and Luhan..
So basically they teleported around, eh? And got injured. Okay. Here goes my rant.
I HAAATEEE YUUU SHUFID FORCES OF EEEEVVVVVVEEEEELLLL!!! HDY BRUISE LUHANNIE'S BEAUTIFUL SKIN? HDYYYUUUUUU?AAAARRRGGGHHHHH. oh, and you guys hurt kai too. And onto part2.
cheerioslee #17
lol~ ^^ this chapter was sooo adorbs.. my favorite part? Sehuneo and Luhaniet. and Kris talking about Gossip Girl.. >.<