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SadisticReborn #1
Ohhhh it was a preview.... I don't feel so guilty now :p ummmm was Luhan turned back into a kid? As he called the other guy (who is PROBABLY Kai) ahjusshi...

I hope you don't wanna brick me for all my questions and assumptions :p but yeah, I really adore this story and can't wait for the 26th! :DD tmr's my last exam so I understand your pain :p wish you the best of luck in your exams as well! :DD I shall be stalking this fic later :D
SadisticReborn #2
Argggh I can't believe I have to split my comment in half, but yeah, I've gotten too excited :p

(cont. From before) ummm Luhan is alone, MinAh is driving....

Arghhh n I've just realised you've updated again - - *sigh* i am sooooo slow - - but I actually SHOULDN'T be online right now, I've got exams tmr - - but I'll stop here to read the next chapter :p
nicute24
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Ittt'ss fiiinnneee.... at least this way I can pull off my long commenting here only once a week. Jk.
Don't worry we'll be waiting! Oh, and I read that. >.<
B-b-but... three chapters? Not that I'm complaining but...
COULD YOU IMAGINE HOW LONG MY COMMENTS WOULD BE? LOL
good luck on your exams! I can feel with you on the topic of exams, but having exams on this time of the year? (I'm on summer vacation~~~ O(∩_∩)O)
See yu soon!
SadisticReborn #4
Ohhh it's completely ok, mayve it was just me who got it wrong :p *munches on cookie* but it does maje sense being Lay, I mean only HE cld have survived that injury :p

*sprays out cookie crumbs* Oh Sehun WHY are you sooooo goddamn shmexay?!?! HREALLY! You'd do that for me?!?! *hugs n smooches* the problem is..... You asked for my bias, and I haven t decided yet!!!! I mean theu are alllllllll so lovable xDDD I THINK it's either Luhan (he's waaaaaaaaay too cute for me to resist), Sehun (thus u made my day with those gifs xDD), Kai (arggghhhhhh just gotta LOVE him), Tao (I have a thing for guys who appear strong but are actually sensitive n cry, so no worries about you being sensitive, I am too :p), le breakfast couple (Bacon and Eggs xDD (I refer to them as breakfast :p but srsly, they r just too asgfhagfagagakagjk to not love), Kreeeeeeease (ohhhh just love him too much).... Damn... If i continue down this path I shall be listing all twelve... (Exo, Y you so lovable?!?! All twelve of you?!?!) Coz i love all members... Anyway, I'm gonna be a greedy and say all are my biases.... I mean everytime i decide on one, another does sth that makes me squeal n destroys my bias list again - - so I'd be happy with any of them... (I have a weakness for cute things tho :p)

Anyways, I have gazzillion questions right now :p How come this Hybrid could recognize Sehun as Kyuhyun's reincarnation immediately? They obviously don't know it themselves, so how did he know? Um was the Hybrid still controlled when attacking Sehunnie and Tao? If he (or the controller, if le Hybrid was controlled) recognized Sehun as who he was BEFORE on the spot, is it possible that he also recognized Baekhyun? Was THAT another reason why they tested everything on Bacon (and seemingly not on Jino, tho I have no idea if true or not :p)? To see how a reincarnation would do against a Hybrid?

Anyways, now Tao is taken away, Luhan knows Lay, Xiumin has feelings for Chen, Lay was tied up by somebody...
bubbleees
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i wont give up xDD and once a week is fine a lot of other writers do that too :)

:O LUHAN LOST HIS MEMORY ? amnesia !? NOOOOO YOU GOTTA REMEMBER KAI
ForeverCellist
#6
Psh, I wouldn't give up this story! XD Silly. You update far more often than most of my subscriptions. :3 And I myself only update once a week or two weeks. XD
nicute24
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PART 3
Oh, and Xiumin, how were you sure that Suho was the one who tied Lay up? was there a trademark knot or was it a rope that belongs to Suho(LOL Suho why would you have one(here's a thought, the rope had 'property of Suho written on it LOL))?
*sigh* and to reply on your reply(hey, what would it be called?if a reply to a message is called a reply, then what would you call a reply to a reply? HUH.)
Y du I have anticipaateee? CANT I GUESSSSS?? is that an order? for me to anticipate only?*raise eyebrow*
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I wanna see P.F.o.C.a.k.a.E.Y.(i actually memorized it) soon...
and Father and Son duo Krispy and Krunchy(Kreme)..
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And some update on the sobbing Hannie too, please! :D(P.F.o.C.a.k.a.E.Y.'s grin)
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Oh, and MinAh may compete with the person aforementioned above, but she can never win(because there can only be one P.F.o.C.a.k.a.E.Y. in EXOPLANET).
Oh, and she doesn't have any talent? just a regular human? I never thought that was possible.
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OVER! BRAIN MODE:AFK
nicute24
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HYBRID V3.01 HDY BLIND OUR SEHUNNIEE!(and why do you call Kyuhyun KyuhyunNIE? Are you CLOSE? HU ARE YU?(hangeng?)*shrug*) DU YU KNOW HOW MUCH LUHAN WOULD BE DEVASTATEEEDDDD??? HE WUUDDD DDIIEEE OOFFF WORRYING ABOUT SEHUNNIE !!HE ALREADY HAS ENOUGH PROBLEMS WITH KAI AND THEIR(Sehun and Luhan's) BROKEN RELATIONSHIP, (author-nim, do you really want Luhan to die?*glares-with-a-creepy-smile*) WAAAAAAAAAHH! AND TAO, WHY DID YU TAKE HIM-oh, yeah, i read this part. Because big -evil-(young) boss wanted him....
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And Hybrid v3.01 let out a flash of concentrated white LIGHT? DID YU TAKE BACON's LIGHT? HDYU! ARRRGHHHHH!!!! YOU THIIIIEEEFFFF!!
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So Sehun told her to drive recklessly(oh, and you spelled it wRECKLESSLY), DESTROY A BUILDING, go beyond speed limit, as long as you guys get there alive ASAP.
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SEHUN, IF YOU DESTROY A BUILDING USING A RV, HOW DU YU DO IT? BY CRASHING IN TO IT, AND THE BUILDING WON'T EVEN GET DESTROYED. DU YU KNOW HOW BIG BUILDINGS ARE(well, it was phrased as building, not a house or whatever other architecture)? IF YU HIT ONE, DU YU THINK YU'LL EVEN MAKE IT TO THE STADIUM ALIVE? WHAT DO YOU THINK YOUR RV IS, INDESTRUCTIBLE? IF SO, YU SHOULD'VE JUST HIT HYBRID V3.01 AND HAVE IT OVER WITH!(LOL i'm ranting.)
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Xiumin, making a statue of chen UNCONCIOUSLY huh? is this the start of Chenmin? keke.
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And so, the mystery mutilated-ehem-, bloodied, barely recognizable, former weak pulsed man that was supposed to be dead but was not was LAY. SO THAT'S WHY WE DIDN'T HEAR FROM HIM FOR ABOUT 7 CHAPTERS! SO THE REASON WHY LUHAN WAS SHOCKED(and emotional and crying and as phrased, was why he "lost it") because it was LAY(maybe they are friends.. maybe LAY was part of the Ying family who are friends with Luhan's family)...
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PART 3 because the rest won't fitt~~
nicute24
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I'm not in the mood for reading for some reason(curse you gaming mood) so I'll try to.... maintain this comment.
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YAY our Chemically modifies glow in the dark pulsating red(though not anymore, Jino must be really glad.) BACON and our shapeshifter J13.4 who can turn into whatchever animals(is it really animals only..? If anything is possible in EXOPLANET, then can Jino turn into some super hybrid (monster)ehem, being that can overthrow those ugly something,someone evil minions? HOHOHO..(I wish. -..-)
Hey, here's a thought, since Jino can shape shift, can he change only one part of his body?(andd destroy the evil cuff HOHO)
(why am i laughing HOHO today?)
and, I just realized something. was the something,someone monster minion whatever the one with the tatoo? If H4.8 has a marking on it's inner arm, why does B6.2 and J13.4 have a silver whatchamacallit(oh, it's a bracelet.)?Maybe it changes on your level of evolution into something,someone.
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Oh yeah, noticed a typo. They're wearing white costs, huh. must be expensive(get it?).
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The evil force...
(has a fascination for the letter J)
I meant really. One name is Jungho. the other is Jackson. And the Secretary's name is Jirou. erkh.
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Hybrid v3.01.
What is this? Some kind of upgraded toy? LOL jk. I hate that whatchamacallit. YU BROKE BACON'S NOSSSEEEE!!! HDYU DU DAAAATTTT!! AND YU SHUFFIDDD EVIL FORCE, HDYU BRUISE BACON AND MADE HIM BE BLOODY(oh, and half-awake.) YU RUINED BACON'S (...) IMAGE(yeah, i didn't know how to say it. face?body?erk.) !!! WHAT WOULD YEOLLI(pardon me, P.F.o.C.a.k.a.E.Y.) SAY WHEN HE SEES BACON HALF OVERCOOKED AND HALF RAW(overcooked=bruised(yeah cause when a bacon's overcooked it turns brownish...yeah) raw=bloodied(cause when a bacon's raw, it's kinda pinkish, right(i dnt even know)) P.F.o.C.a.k.a.E.Y. WOULD SURELY BURRRRNNNN DAAA WHUUUULLLL PLLAAANNNEEEEEEEEETTTTTT! (maybe)
OKAY PART 2.
chippawabrike
#10
I wonder who Donghae's reincarnation is?
ja_chan12
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OMG! BAEKHYUN, what happened to you? Why are you not lighting up? Take care of yourself, please. Chanyeol needs you! Let Chanyeol burn the whole place up whereever you are. Oh, and i wish that ING Hybrid V3.01 die in a very paiful way. :>

IT WAS LAY. Oh, God what a relief(well, not really). I thought it was an assassin of some kind from the Evil. And, why did Luhan reacted that way when he was trying to clean the bloodied man who was actually Lay. I need answers and updates. HAHAHA.

Oh, another thing. Thanks for the gif, it made my day. :">
ForeverCellist
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Ah, you're my unni. :3 I was born January 20, 1997. :)
Kironstree #13
Yay i got a full cookie!! *noms* so excited for your next update!
cheerioslee #14
yep! your awesomeness makes up for everything!! >:D and now..i have no idea who that guy is....i have a list narrowed down to three >:) but yeah....i'm sure you can guess who are on that list.. :D
SadisticReborn #15
Thank God Luhan woke up in time to help Kai! :DD Oooooh Kai's got his treatment :DDD for the man that Kai saved... I took the liberty to assume that since the codes for Jino and our dear Bacon started with the first letters of their names, it would be tge case here too :p n since u've included Taeyeon, other SME groups might be involved..... So basically I'm guessing it's Heechul... *is bricked for over long explanation n randomness* but I DO hope whoever he is to be able to help them, seeing he most likely got treated by those goddamn bastards who hurt poor ol' Bacon :(

but ooooh I hope nth goes bad for Bacon!! He can only be fried by Eggyeol and Krunchy alone! Nobody else should take that from them xDD and I hope Luhan's safe alone :)

oh I totally agree with you, Hunhan is perfect (and the best, in my opinion), but I also have a LuKai shipping heart in me xDD so I don't mind the LuKai here xDD i just hope Hunhan triumphs x)))
nicute24
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PARRTTT TWOOOO!!
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Oh, Hannie, Why is you crying? Who is that mutilated(okay. maybe not. just barely alive, barely recognizable, bloodied weak pulsed man who according to future medical results is supposed to be dead but is alive.) person?
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And I thought the reason Kai didn't want to teleport was because he was injured and the wound would stretch to the direction he was heading to and he should never fully teleport? Guess what? He teleported, injured, with a passenger. Did the wound strech? (I dunno, don't ask me, stupid reflection.)
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Really, everything must be in desperation for Xiumin to hit himself in the head using the table.(Did it hurt? You should've asked them to check your head while you were in the medical tent.)
So, ChenChen, huh?(I see what you did there ;)) And you shouldn't slip much, baozi, that might be your end someday(tsk tsk)
So Taeyeon and Sunggyu, medical students, huh... Along with Suho that would make leader3 huh.
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Sheesh, Kai, did the doctor give you an all-clear already that you can go? But it's fine, I understand. After all, Luhan might be in trouble in his time of distress, huh? (Yeah, and did you even think that your stitches might open? HUH? You'll be the death of HANNIE!)
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Just who is that BIG BOSS of the evil who is young(as described)? AND B6.2? ISN'T THAT our CHEMICALLY MODIFIED GLOW IN THE DARK PULSATING RED BACON? AND WHAT DU YU MEAN EXTRACTION? DID YU EXTRACT HIS LIGHT? DID YU EXTRACT HIS HUMANITY(or rather superhumanity)WHAT DID YU EXTRACT??? T_T (memories?)
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Oh, and how is Jino? Mr. J13.4? Give us updaaatees...
Oh, and updates on the other teams too(namely the butterfly team. You know what I mean, right?)
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I can't think of anything else right now. Oh, and what is the ring? are YU gonna put bacon in an onion ring? DONT! HE'LL SMELL! JK.
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okay. My brain is officially going on a 10 minute AFK, so i'll end this comment(well, part 2 comment).
nicute24 out!
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P.S.
Just how freakin' big is that library?
aZn_sw3in #17
Omg who is this person !know they're talking about Baekhyun ...but who is this ... I don't think it's Jino since his name is .. J-something ..I am not suure ;_;
Does that mean Baek & Jino are going to turn devil and fight the rest ? D:
nicute24
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Keke.. time for my chapterly review. I won't even say that I think I can't surpass 2000 characters again cause... yeah.
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I really don't think I can't say much in this chapterly comment because P.F.o.C.a.k.a.E.Y. isn't here on this chapter(yeah. sad face. :(()
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Okay, so the EEEEVVVEEELLL minions attacked Kai, and Luhan came to ze rescue(why am I speaking like this today?) pushing ze evil(i read it as eh-veel in my mind LOL) evil err...something,someone(yeah, that's how it was phrased, right?)
Of course, there always has to be a war cry, and Luhan's was "Get off him"(kinda reminds me of Susan Pevensie's "Drop him!" on CoN:PC)
So Luhan used his super recharged telekinetic force(it's really force? not power? and so Hannie's force(cause it wasn't power) has to be recharged? Is it battery operated or something? Hannie must be very sad and envious. Everyone has limitless(seemed so) power at their disposal and Hannie's force has to be recharged(I suddenly had a thought, so when Hannie's force is low battery, it's weak or something? ^.^(wow there are a lot of parenthesis(es?)in this parenthesis))
And when the something,someone crashed into the shelf(I refuse to call it bookcase as when it fell, only the so called bookcase fell and no books toppling down something,someone's head. If there were, was it in super glue or something that it didn't fall(LOL expectant of very detailed events much?)) two other something,someones came. I thought that kai's description in the last chapter that there was only one minion, Huh, huh?
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I wonder how the evil managed to defeat the previous legends if their minions were like that: stupid and numb(hello mr. something,someone minion of evil. Your passenger has just left your back and is currently being carried away by a young man, approximately twenty-three years old.)LOL. but I guess that's good for the forces of light(what else can I call them?)
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(was supposed to write more but already 2000 chara. to PART 2!)
AlteaAuroraRia
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Omo. Who is that guy.... (LOL Ruhan.)

So Bacon and Jino's coming back next chapter? THOSE S HAD BETTER NOT DO SOMETHING TO THEM!

Update soon! I love this story! :)