Chapter 2: I am very addicted to mystery novels. Sherlock Holmes, Detective Conan...those are my all-time favorites.
Your first two chapters are so thrilling and give me butterflies of excitement~
I also thought of writing a mystery fic before, and your fic gave me inspiration~^^
Thank you for your update, author-nim~^^ I love your use of advanced vocabulary~
Please update soon~^^ my heart is craving for more~^^
I have always been intrigued by mystery stories, so I was excited when I saw the feature on the main page and clicked in. Honestly, my standard of English was never good, especially so after I have entered university and there is no subject called English language, or anything that requires a good command of English, to deal with. Reading this chapter, especially the parts at the start, required a whole lot of concentration and time from me. But the way you have strung the words was beautiful. :)
It was also enjoyable reading your A/N and the analysis of the characters, because many who tried to write, including myself, are guilty of not developing the personalities of our characters beforehand. It just goes to show how much effort you have put in to pull this story together.
Looking forward to the following chapters, and I would catch up on your other stories when I have the time. Hope your exams went well! :)
Chapter 2: First chapter! Yay!
I'm not familiar with Joongki and Jinhee's dramas so I really don't know anything about them aside from their names xD And Soohyun, too. I've only watched Dream High (I'm lame, I know) so I'm going to comment about Woobin and Jongsuk here.
Woobin's hesitancy is something new to me though, since his characters strike me as being the, hmmm brash one who does things his own way. Idk. And Jongsuk, well what else can I say? He's amazing. Haha. And his physical appearance here reminds me of his Park Hoon days with his clothes, unruly hair and all that. And the rolling his eyes part, I can totally imagine him doing that hahaha.
Overall, I liked the chapter, it makes me feel like I'm watching a K-drama.
ooh very excited to read this. These types of stories always interest me. All the characters are perfect and I am highly anticipating the different cases.
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