Chapter 1: i love the foreward. with the actors, it caught my eyes and it was like read me read me and so i read the prologue and it sounds pretty good.
Chapter 2: I directly remembered korean drama titled 'Gapdong'when you mentioned about song joongki's job,a profiler,and he would became my favorite one even he isn't old enough,maybe because he is a genius one,right?
Chapter 2: I can already tell that Joongki will be my favorite. Loved Luhan in the original one, too, but I personally think Joongki's portrayal of a profiler works a little better.
Chapter 2: Wow, your writing blows me away! I've never had such a rush of excitement while reading on AFF before, because this story is 100% unique! The storyline and the characters grabbed me right from the start. It'll be one hell of a ride reading about how each case progresses, along with the character development. Good luck on exams & I can't wait for the next update!
Chapter 2: I'm seriously loving your writing style, its that of an oscar winning novel lol! I'm looking foward to the future chapters and how the story develops!! Good luck on your exams!
Chapter 2: Congratulations on the feature! You certainly deserve it! This story is awesome. It's rare to have this kind of storyline here in AFF as most of the stories are a bit cliche. Thank you for writing this story!
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