Comments: Paper Winged {wingsandfins contest entry}

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CloudsOfCandy #1
its so good
i wonder what is written on the other paper planes
dulcee
#2
I'm going to finish this... one day. I promise. ;____;
ohmykrease
#3
Why in the world did I only come across this now?
Subscribing~
wildvampire
#4
i am totally subcribing
update soooon
DongBangHyukJae
#5
This is so poetically beautiful... I hope you update soon its really captivatingly written. I adore the way he wrote the notes directed to Jessica. Its something unexpected but truly heartbreaking...
onlykyumin
#6
i hope you can still continue this.
forchenteller
#7
Ah...it ended?

It ended?

But there will be more, right?

Kyuhyun seems like a deep character, one that is really misunderstood. But I love how you made Jessica someone who wasn't just randomly a . Like, she wasn't nice, but because she honestly thought Kyu was a bad person.

The interpretation of the contest prompt was really creative - paper wings. That's cool :)
sweetieheart2
#8
omg... this is so beautiful... ;___; especially the things that kyu wrote in the paper airplanesssss ;______;
Loveroftiny
#9
I meant are. ARE THERE GOING TO BE MORE CHAPTERS?!
Loveroftiny
#10
Aww...so sad...but YES finally SOMEBODY stood up to Jessica.

Is there going to be more chapters? I NEED MORE. :)
vypher #11
OMYGOD. this is the first entry i have read, i wanted to enter... but reading this story's foreword.. i think i'll just be a mere subscriber.. :)) Good luck with your story!
swabluu
#12
AHHHHHH
So, I was reading the entries for the wingsandfins contest, and I think I'll go and cry in a corner.
Not that I expected to win anyways.
I'll go and cry in the corner for the other people :D
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/needs to improve writing skills
/cries in a corner
cathy4reals #13
oh yeah, just punch the girl in the face...
KoreanDreamer
#14
Finally, someone who actually deals with Jessica!!
This story is amazing so far!
I haven't read a story with this kind of plot on AFF before~
It's wonderful!!! >u<
Update soon!!! ^^
pandadreams
#15
WHOA!! HELL YES SUNGMIN!! PUNCH HER!
this is amazing so far! gosh, i love it! c: update soon! promise? yaksok? :3
soofle
#16
Le gasp, he punched her in the face! O.O
whiteheron
#17
Well wasn't that just lovely... Lol beat her up, Minnie!
dulcee
#18
@whiteheron
I hate to say this, but he's dead. /shot
It was necessary... and realistic.
defyingdestiny
#19
KyuMin angst. OMG. ;~;