Chapter 14: GO HAECHAN GTFO AND LEAVE EM ALone oh and it's okay if ur busy and won't be able to update often :) HIghschool life is hard especially for seniors don't stress too much~
Chapter 14: OMG I ACTUALLY CHECK EVERYDAY SINCE THE LAST UPDATE AND I REALLY SCREAMED WHEN I SAW THE NEW UPDATE
I feel like,Baejin has already moved on from Jihoon but he just haven’t tealize it yet.Whenever he‘s with Jihoon,he always thinks about Daehwi and he even beat up Taejoon when he mentioned about doing something to Daehwi.I felt pity for Taejoon but it vanished quickly when he said that Baejin might have gotten Hwi‘s first kiss but he can also take the other firsts...like...,I want to beat him up too,together with Baejin!
And JinHwi‘s problem has been revealed! Baejin‘s unresolved feelings and also Taejoon,not to mention,Haechan too! Seems like Baejin has to realize his true feelings soon...ir else Daehwi would seriously be in danger huhuhu. And can i just say that Beajin +Hapkido is cool?
I really love this chapter! It was a comfort for me since JinHwi is MIA these days and I feel so sad huhuhu.Thank you for the update btw! And don‘t be pressured to update!
Chapter 14: HDJSKSKSKS SO MANY THINGS I WANNA SPAZZ REGARDING THIS CHAPTER BCS JSJSJSKS IT'S ONE OF THE BEST I GUESS???? You dunno how excited I was when the chapter begun with childish moments of PanDeep Aaaaaah my precious babies, it's nice to see Kuanlin and Jinyoung having fun annoying each other lmao. Oh god, I swear that I wanna protect my JinHwi babies so much like seriously they deserve all of the happiness in the world xhzkzkzkzks I HOPE THAT DAEHWI IS SAFEEEEEE T^T I can't chill at all while thinking at whats going to happen to my poor bby boy in the next chapter ;---; Aigooooo Kuanlinnie is so cute zhjsjsksksk HE WANTS A SHIP NAME TOO LOL I CANT BELIEVE THIS HE'S SO CUTEEEEEE AAAAH (cries) Thankyou for this update authornim, I'll be waiting for the next one for sure kekekekeke ILY, HWAITING ❤
I re-read it all again and it seems like OngNiel will have the heaviest story out of the three couples.And now that I know about PanWink’s conflict,I can’t help but think of what would be JinHwi’s plot.I’m really excited and looking forward to it! I’m the one getting anxious thinking of what would happen to the couples,especially when Seongwoo finds out about Daniel’s true identity,what would Guanlin’s father do when he finds out about PanWink and of course,what would be the progress of JinHwi.But I must say,you’re doing a really good job!
Chapter 13: Park Jihoon's "I'm nothing without you" at the end makes my inner soul to drift away because "Beautiful" suddenly played in my mind (what's wrong with me) I feel so bad for Jihoon, really, and also for Guanlin when his father sent Wooseok to wreck his relationship to Jihoon (and to other boys that seemed so horrified to his killer aura lmao)
I appreciated Minhwan and 2sung little moments, when Minhyun held Jaehwan's (probably dirty) hand XD (Oh boi, how come did he broke your toilet brush?)
And for Ongniel's everlasting teasing, damn, seriously Ong you should shut your mouth and please keep it as a secret when you did that "things" to your peach-faced lover. I can die early because of that XD
Overall, this chapter was very good! Actually my favorite part was they're celebrating when all of them made it to Idol Project, ah... Produce 101 memories flooding again
And lastly, Nothing Without You era was the best for me. I keep singing "Beautiful" everytime, everywhere! No one can express on how I love this album, more than the word Beautiful itself <3
Yeoreobun, keep on supporting Wanna One! (And to this author of the story too~)
The other night I read all the Ongniel chapters again hehe. I think I understand much more and I've got to say. I LOVE ONG SEONGWOO in this story so much!!! His character is awesome. So funny, witty, y, mysterious, and then he has this dark/sarcastic side I love and there's all these little moments where he can't control himself with Daniel and he wants to protect him. He's really head over heels for Danik. Daniel blushes so much around Seongwoo too and even though he SAYS Ong should stop and pisses him off it is clear through every moment that he doesn't want Ong to stop because he's intrigued by him and hoping that Ong will do way more. I just love their dynamic. You know I will read all the couples moments again of course and I love them all in dif ways. And I know you're a Panwink stan so they're the main focus. But I think that Ongniel kind is that side story that steals the show and attention? You know how in some dramas you end up watching more for the side characters though you like the mains and the main plotline as well? I think that's what is happening here. I'm so excited for the next chapter~~~! I only wish you got more love. It feels like people don't like commenting these days as much as a month or so ago hing~ T.T *pouts. Please don't ever stop writing because I will give you comments that make-up for all the other silent readers okay? And eventually I think people will comment more and you will get a ton of subs. Just wait~
Chapter 13: This chapter was quite a roller coaster ride since so much happened and there were a lot of couples involved as well! First, in the beginning I laughed a ton. Then, in the middle I was really worried for Jihoon and I felt like I was in the middle of a mystery and I was totally thinking there was yet another villain in this story or that Haechan appeared to wreak havec on Seongwoo's friends, thank god it wasn't. Then, I was all emotional because I feel like I started to see where Panwink was going and it made me sort of depressed because family drama always really gets me like that. I hate when families interfere but what can you do when you're an heir, right? Ugh, poor Guanlin. His fam sounds so controlling, no wonder he ran away to pursue his own life. I hope he sticks it to his dad and snaps Jihoon out of his thoughts. They really need to be on the same page and fight Guanlin's family together. I don't want anything to break them up for even a second. I thought you were going to give us their first kiss there! I was so waiting for it and then it was a kiss on the hand. Yah, Guanlin, why didn't you take that chance?! It was such a perfect moment. But then...Jihoon should get his first kiss when he's feeling happy and certain about Guanlin's feelings and their future though...I love how obvious they are being for each other these days. I can see that they really have been growing closer in that time skip. Great to see. Though I don't know why Guanlin is taking forever with the date. That seems unlike him because in this story he seems like such a forward, sure guy. Is it that he was feeling shy? Or he's showing concern for Jinyoung? Or he is unsure of Jihoon's feeling for him? Hmm...What's going on in your mind Lin Lin~
Other moments I loved were of course Minhwan and 2sung. I prefer little moments like these. Just make them fluffy and fun instead of deep and complex. It really is too much to juggle. Because all these three main relationships are quite complicated and have this plot/backstore you have to flesh out more and more. That's going to be way too much burden for you five couples. For me, I skip over Deephwi a lot so I can focus on the other four couples and flesh them out since they're complicated. Well now Ongniel isn't a concern anymore, they're just all fluffy and hot and funny here and there for now.
Other moments I loved, speaking of, OMG Ongniel in this. Oh, how I hope everything that Seongwoo said was true! But it's hard to tell with Seongwoo because he could be just saying anything to make Daniel embarassed because that sort of Daniel is the CUTEST. I love him blocking Seongwoo's mouth and Seongwoo just keeps talking about naughty things. Ah, morning cuddle time? God how I hope~ I can't wait for their part now haha. Sounds like they grew closer which is so good to see. Totally caught Daniel saying that Seongwoo was his friend, oh yes! He totally wouldn't have said that before, he would have just gone on about how he hated him. Also, Seongwoo said he didn't want to let Daniel get hurt again? So...sounds like he may now he Daniel was then? Or was that a slip up in your writing? Because I don't recall Haechan or anyone hurting Daniel in this story so far...Curious curious~
Great chapter! Love Panwink of course. So cute~ But I can't wait for their date. Aw, couple rings! That was pretty brave of Jihoon. He's really getting more comfortable expressing himself. Still such a shy fluffball though. Just be happy and say you love him already~
Chapter 13: OMG I LITERALLY SCREAMED WHEN I SAW THE UPDATE!
Thank you very much! I am very thrilled as to what would happen to Panwink's Story,like,Jihoon's mother approves Guanlin but then Guanlin's father....Goodness Gracious!
And also I love the MinHwan and 2Sung Appearances!<3
Please don't apologize for long chapters,I actually love it whenever the update is long hahahaha
Chapter 13: I almost lost my words, because this is so beautiful, moments between kuanlin and jihoon is really deep, so sweet, and so beautiful. My tears keep falling while i reading this, momens between panwink is so perfect, so sad, and so beautiful. And to make it worse i'm listening Beautiful which suits this chapter very well. I never crying because of panwink fanfictions, but you just make me did it author-nim hahahaha :') Thank you my dear friend, for always write every chapter beautifully, for make me smile, laugh, giggling, and even cry now. This chapter is beautiful, beautifully perfect
Chapter 12: I actually don't know what to feel in this chapter hahahha Should I be happy cause like,their feelings are finally revealed! Or be sad because of Ong's story huhuhu
Chapter 12: AND I THOUGHT YOU WILL GAVE US A DETAILED SCRIPT ON WHAT HAPPENED BETWEEN THOSE TWO DORKS AFTER THAT KISS. WHOA I MIGHT DIE BECAUSE OF HEART ATTACK HAHA MY POOR ONGNIEL HEART XD
Chapter 12: Oh mah gaaaaaaaaaaawd As expected authornim! This chapter is worth reading! I thank all creatures from heaven that my ojt will start next next week so I have a spare time to read this all over the day XD
You did a great job authornim. My questions about Ongniel's mysterious past was answered by this. And it's so tragic, reminding me of something similar like the events that written here..... Anyway, it's amazing that despite of horrible past of Ongniel, they're still strong to continue living and I'm happy that Daniel gave another chance to Seongwoo, I hope he will confess about his true identity soon!
Let's be serious at this point, ha, do you think I'll forget about that "intimate moment" between them? IT'S SO AWESOME SERIOUSLY, oh my, I really want to kill you for writing that scene but I want you to write that kind of "intimate moment" again, I will let you live for long XD (I'm patiently waiting for Panwink----)
Goodluck to your trip authornim! Have fun and be safe! ;)
Chapter 12: Im seriously in love with this fic... like the deep story between ongniel and light stories between the others make it so interesting... andd this chap was sooo frickinnn goodddd... i cried...i laughed....i freaked out... ohmaguy it was amazing ahahaa thank you for updating ^.^
Ah and I LOVE the scene the next morning. Daniel is so embarassed and Seongwoo wants to talk about every little detail. You made me so curious about just what they were doing that you're not fully explaining haha. I bet Daniel got excited and in the mood and took it way farther than either had planned which made Seongwoo super duper happy. So Seongwoo just can't shut up about it to Dan's mortification. I loved their interaction at this part. But hey, Dan, no cereal box throwing, Ongie could get hurt!
Wow your forward and background look really nice, extremely fancy! I'm too lazy to do that haha. I used to but now I just want to focus on writing and hope people will get interested in the plot enough to take a chance. I wonder when those quotes are ever going to come up?
This chapter was amazing. You really outdid yourself. It was incredibly emotional, intense, and sentimental. The flashbacks to their younger days were so sweet, fluffy, and funny. I could really picture how they both were and it's so starkly different from how they both are now. Just that in itself makes sense why they hadn't recognized each other. Then on top of how Dan used to look and what Seongwoo thought happened to him, it makes sense now. I was really wondering how you were going to solve that issue but you did it excellently. Though it seems that Daniel had an inkling? That must be why part of him really didn't like Seongwoo for awhile.
I understand so much about these characters now. Why Daniel has been pushing Seongwoo harshly away and why he's got this whole other character he's trying to show others and hides his other side. Gosh, the things he has gone through made him grow up so much. Why Seongwoo is such a sad, bitter boy who seems to have gone through a whole life time of depressing events and pain. I can't imagine what it's like to think you caused the love of your life to kill himself for nearly ten years, jesus...I feel for both of them so much. I think Daniel is right not to tell him the truth yet. It would complicate their current relationship. I want Seongwoo to like Daniel for who is now and then later when they're closer he can learn the truth and they can get even closer. Hopefully the reveal won't be so emotional then. But I think that Seongwoo would just feel wracked with guilt whenever he sees Daniel if he knew and they wouldn't be able to forget about what happened and just enjoy time together. So, I approve of them being friends that occasionally have some hot make-out sessions. That scene was incredible~!! Way more than I thought you would write haha. I feel like there's some of my influence in there though? Sounds like something I would have written for their first kiss in this situation.
I seriously love Ongniel's relationship in this story. It's complicated yet it's not complicated at all. They have such a messy background because of Seongwoo's stupid evil family(kind of dislike his mom, how could you let your son be abused and controlled since he was a kid, if she didn't know about it that's even more of a shame because it shows zero interest in her kid's life, Seongwoo is an amazing person for all he endured just for her 'dream's' sake). Yet despite of all the complexities surrounding them, at the heart then and even now they just naturally fit well together, they're drawn to each other, and when they are even just talking I feel like somehow they're really right for each other. They need each other in their lives big time. They can be their real selves and kind of cheer each other up when they start going down dark paths. That's what I've noticed after four chapters. Complex yet naturally beautifully simple, that's their love.
Just to note: I really loved the simple things in this chapter, like when they were talking about Super Junior and Dan thought Ong said 'i love you' haha. Or that Ong chose his alies to be 'mincheongie' and when Dan calls him the nickname later he makes a clever pun 'ongcheongie' which are both close to the real Korean word. When they have that emotional reunion on the roof in the rain and Daniel calls him an idiot and Ong jokes about it. These things make them so sweet, precious, and hilarious~!
Thank you so much for this chapter. Never been an Ongniel plot line that's better than yours. I'm deffinitely going to read this again later. There's a ton of things I could say but I think I've said the most important things.
Chapter 12: Gosh author-nim, this chapter is beautifully written, i can feel the pain, the longing, and all the feelings inside this story, damn, it's really sad, but beautiful, and sweet as well :'D and i honestly feel hurt for seongwoo, his burden is no joke T^T and go haechan, he honestly start to creeping me out because how dangerous he can be, i seriously got some chill when i read explanation about him T^T despite for all the sad things in this chapter, i honestly like it because i can see how they are growing, acceptance, and facing things. This chapter is really deep, I mean so much that you can learn and think from this chapter and that's good. Thank you for updating! I will see you again on ut newest next chapter :3
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