Chapter 18: Pls update soon... this is very good. Updates on ongniel pls:)

Chapter 3: Me too!! I was always confused with who is top and who is bottom for ongniel. At least I was kinda sure that Ong wears the pants in their relationship. Daniel is whipped for Ong. Really badly,too. They are just so cuteee. Their eyes always gravitate to each other

Chapter 20: This book is amazing. One of my favorites. Keep up the great work!!

Chapter 20: Sorry I haven't commented yet! This chapter was intense, hard to think of what to say. I liked Jin a lot up until this chapter. What he did was stupid but righteous and selfless. I get it . He really loves Dae it's easy to see. At least he's not at all caught up on Jihoon anymore. I hope they will realize this is a mistake and right it soon so they can all be happy again. And I hope T wakes up and is fine and can be friends with both Dae and Jin and fully support their love. Glad you are trying out angst again. You do it well. Made me shed tears like I did with Ongniel.

Chapter 20: OMGGG What with this chapter ! Too much for my poor heart !
Chaerin si completely crazy, why Seongwoo has to suffer, always ? Haechan is a true
For Jinyoung, I feel so sorry like this is so sad to given up, even if it's just for a moment, to the person you love.

Chapter 20: aaawwww..
so daehwi himself decides to break up with jinyoung??
kind of "hey, i need to settle this thing with taejoon but later, i'll come back to you.."??
sorry i do not mean to be offensive, but.. i just don't understand daehwi's way of thinking. i understand jinyoung's though, sacrificing himself to see danbi being happy seeing her bro with the magu otter... that i can relate..
so perhaps i miss something from daehwi's pov?
i don't know.. i'll try to read it again.

and Guanlin has something to do with Taejoon's operation??
I could see it coming the moment a stranger comes up to support the operation...
it's nice if it's truly Guanlin. i know he tries to help.

>> "Looking, " Seongwoo grumbled, "is also an understatement...."
i think Seongwoo here is typo? shouldn't it be daniel? since seongwoo comes between daniel-jinyoung conversation a bit later...

and even Taiyang group is infected by Seongwoo's scandal...
hmmm...
I don't know dear...
I got a mixed feeling here...

hwaiting for your update..
don't stress to much on writing, dear...
writing should be a way to relieve stress.. not to add more stress..
don't force yourself because the outcome won't satisfy you...
i guess your writing is good enough for reader to wait...
like me... i don't mind slow update... kekekekeke...

p.s. and i truly like your writing bcoz for @#$@#'s sake, my style of writing is too straightforward and i cant manage to describe things with fancy words like you do~~~ (T_T)
i'm really envious of that...

oh... and do you purposely change the font color into black instead of automatic?
because lately i prefer to use night theme on phone, so the background is dark... and black fonts are hard to read so i need to switch back to day mode...
i don't really mind though... it's up to the author to style the writing anyway...
kekeke

anyway... hwaiting~~ \(^o^)/

Chapter 19: Wow, too many moments that I can't take in this chapter! For now, this is my favorite chapter so far!

Yuejun and Woojin's random cheesy moments (with Jihoonie the thirdwheel cutie) makes me laugh a little bit especially Woojin's romantic shenanigans like hey boi I'm shookt for how many times. And I think they will be my second favorite ship (Ongniel still the number one for me), atleast Woojin dethroned himself for being a thirdwheel hehe

I didn't expect that moment between Jihoon and Guanlin, and Jihoon's "Less talking, more kissing" phrase makes me dilate my eyes even bigger, how did he learn that?!?!?!

Jin snake, Magu otter, mister bunnykins, chicken little~
Wanna One animal farm! (But I prefer Wanna Foods lmao)
Amazed by the title itself, that was brilliant!

I love Danbi-yaaaaa she's adorable! As I said this is my favorite chapter, because my heart had a soft spot to children very much, that's why I cried about her condition. It's heartbreaking. Along with his brother, they are one of the strongest character in this story

Lai Ter Chien and Jihoon's meeting. Wow... Jihoon you deserve an award for protecting Guanlin! That was intense actually. Hoping for Mr. Lai to support his son in the end

The chapters are getting interesting! Keep it up authornim!

Chapter 20: I'm heart broken, author nim... JINHWI ㅠㅡㅠ I cant wait for the next chapter though. Hwaiting~~

A new update! And still can't read Jihoon's chapter... need to catch up!

Chapter 18: IT'S ONGNIEL CHAPTER~ AND HERE I AM, MAKING MY WHOLE EXISTENCE BLESSED WITH THESE SCIENTIFICALLY HANDSOME BOYS ㅋㅋㅋ

Okay first of all, ONG IS DOMINANT OVER DANIEL, I'm so shookt to their short steamy session (Damn you Wooseok) like Ong had a skill here than I thought (most of the Ongniel fanfic that I've read was Daniel is dominant as always) I can't explain properly, oh me (mind me from cursing out hehe)

Well, I salute you authornim for fullfiling all Ongniel shippers out there a random...y...stuffs for every chapter, that's all we need to stay living

Congratulations to them, I knew they will make it. I think that Go Haechan has to do something about their places (just a guess since I don't trust that guy) and I hope that Taejoon was telling the truth to Daehwi, well goodluck to him if a certain Bae Jinyoung will knock him off again

I can't contain my overflowing feels when Ong said "Be my boyfriend". I bet Daniel would die because of that. (If Ong said the same thing to me, I might drag him inside the church and get married instantly, right, my fantasies went out of the line again XD)

Chaerin was incredibly insane. She's freaking obssesed in so many levels. I felt chills in my bones when Seongwoo tell everything about her in a detailed way. I like the way you describe the psychopatic Chaerin hoho. I bet my co-readers was being terrified too

I remember their setting in Wanna One Go: Zero Base, their cheesy little date with a beautiful scenery featuring bugs (lmao). Heol, I didn't expect that this is too romantic to handle. I knew at the very start that Ong was aware that Daniel and Euigyeon was the same person, just like the heavens won't give him a perfect time to spill everything.

I think this is my favorite Ongniel so far, too many happenings in one chapter that I can't explain bit by bit (but I won't forget that "last" part, I think my blood went up splaterring my whole face, I'm just thankful that I read that part exactly at 2am) and pardon me from reading and dropping my comment at this time because I'm too busy since the gates of adulting keeps on pulling my poor body to find a decent job lmao

PS. Oh my ghad I forgot to stop myself from commenting an essay type HAHAHA. Pardon me again chingu. Anyways, fighting~