Chapter 3: Me too!! I was always confused with who is top and who is bottom for ongniel. At least I was kinda sure that Ong wears the pants in their relationship. Daniel is whipped for Ong. Really badly,too. They are just so cuteee. Their eyes always gravitate to each other
Chapter 20: Sorry I haven't commented yet! This chapter was intense, hard to think of what to say. I liked Jin a lot up until this chapter. What he did was stupid but righteous and selfless. I get it . He really loves Dae it's easy to see. At least he's not at all caught up on Jihoon anymore. I hope they will realize this is a mistake and right it soon so they can all be happy again. And I hope T wakes up and is fine and can be friends with both Dae and Jin and fully support their love. Glad you are trying out angst again. You do it well. Made me shed tears like I did with Ongniel.
Chapter 20: OMGGG What with this chapter ! Too much for my poor heart !
Chaerin si completely crazy, why Seongwoo has to suffer, always ? Haechan is a true
For Jinyoung, I feel so sorry like this is so sad to given up, even if it's just for a moment, to the person you love.
Chapter 20: aaawwww..
so daehwi himself decides to break up with jinyoung??
kind of "hey, i need to settle this thing with taejoon but later, i'll come back to you.."??
sorry i do not mean to be offensive, but.. i just don't understand daehwi's way of thinking. i understand jinyoung's though, sacrificing himself to see danbi being happy seeing her bro with the magu otter... that i can relate..
so perhaps i miss something from daehwi's pov?
i don't know.. i'll try to read it again.
and Guanlin has something to do with Taejoon's operation??
I could see it coming the moment a stranger comes up to support the operation...
it's nice if it's truly Guanlin. i know he tries to help.
>> "Looking, " Seongwoo grumbled, "is also an understatement...."
i think Seongwoo here is typo? shouldn't it be daniel? since seongwoo comes between daniel-jinyoung conversation a bit later...
and even Taiyang group is infected by Seongwoo's scandal...
hmmm...
I don't know dear...
I got a mixed feeling here...
hwaiting for your update..
don't stress to much on writing, dear...
writing should be a way to relieve stress.. not to add more stress..
don't force yourself because the outcome won't satisfy you...
i guess your writing is good enough for reader to wait...
like me... i don't mind slow update... kekekekeke...
p.s. and i truly like your writing bcoz for @#$@#'s sake, my style of writing is too straightforward and i cant manage to describe things with fancy words like you do~~~ (T_T)
i'm really envious of that...
oh... and do you purposely change the font color into black instead of automatic?
because lately i prefer to use night theme on phone, so the background is dark... and black fonts are hard to read so i need to switch back to day mode...
i don't really mind though... it's up to the author to style the writing anyway...
kekeke
Chapter 19: Wow, too many moments that I can't take in this chapter! For now, this is my favorite chapter so far!
Yuejun and Woojin's random cheesy moments (with Jihoonie the thirdwheel cutie) makes me laugh a little bit especially Woojin's romantic shenanigans like hey boi I'm shookt for how many times. And I think they will be my second favorite ship (Ongniel still the number one for me), atleast Woojin dethroned himself for being a thirdwheel hehe
I didn't expect that moment between Jihoon and Guanlin, and Jihoon's "Less talking, more kissing" phrase makes me dilate my eyes even bigger, how did he learn that?!?!?!
Jin snake, Magu otter, mister bunnykins, chicken little~
Wanna One animal farm! (But I prefer Wanna Foods lmao)
Amazed by the title itself, that was brilliant!
I love Danbi-yaaaaa she's adorable! As I said this is my favorite chapter, because my heart had a soft spot to children very much, that's why I cried about her condition. It's heartbreaking. Along with his brother, they are one of the strongest character in this story
Lai Ter Chien and Jihoon's meeting. Wow... Jihoon you deserve an award for protecting Guanlin! That was intense actually. Hoping for Mr. Lai to support his son in the end
The chapters are getting interesting! Keep it up authornim!
Chapter 18: IT'S ONGNIEL CHAPTER~ AND HERE I AM, MAKING MY WHOLE EXISTENCE BLESSED WITH THESE SCIENTIFICALLY HANDSOME BOYS ㅋㅋㅋ
Okay first of all, ONG IS DOMINANT OVER DANIEL, I'm so shookt to their short steamy session (Damn you Wooseok) like Ong had a skill here than I thought (most of the Ongniel fanfic that I've read was Daniel is dominant as always) I can't explain properly, oh me (mind me from cursing out hehe)
Well, I salute you authornim for fullfiling all Ongniel shippers out there a random...y...stuffs for every chapter, that's all we need to stay living
Congratulations to them, I knew they will make it. I think that Go Haechan has to do something about their places (just a guess since I don't trust that guy) and I hope that Taejoon was telling the truth to Daehwi, well goodluck to him if a certain Bae Jinyoung will knock him off again
I can't contain my overflowing feels when Ong said "Be my boyfriend". I bet Daniel would die because of that. (If Ong said the same thing to me, I might drag him inside the church and get married instantly, right, my fantasies went out of the line again XD)
Chaerin was incredibly insane. She's freaking obssesed in so many levels. I felt chills in my bones when Seongwoo tell everything about her in a detailed way. I like the way you describe the psychopatic Chaerin hoho. I bet my co-readers was being terrified too
I remember their setting in Wanna One Go: Zero Base, their cheesy little date with a beautiful scenery featuring bugs (lmao). Heol, I didn't expect that this is too romantic to handle. I knew at the very start that Ong was aware that Daniel and Euigyeon was the same person, just like the heavens won't give him a perfect time to spill everything.
I think this is my favorite Ongniel so far, too many happenings in one chapter that I can't explain bit by bit (but I won't forget that "last" part, I think my blood went up splaterring my whole face, I'm just thankful that I read that part exactly at 2am) and pardon me from reading and dropping my comment at this time because I'm too busy since the gates of adulting keeps on pulling my poor body to find a decent job lmao
PS. Oh my ghad I forgot to stop myself from commenting an essay type HAHAHA. Pardon me again chingu. Anyways, fighting~
Chapter 19: Well this chapter was sure angsty and thrilling. The little girl, Taejoon, and Lin's father. I find the little girl sweet. Sort of surprised you dislike kids because it seems like the opposite in your story to be honest. She reminds me exactly of one of these silly sweet little girls I teach. Um anyways, my fav part was Jihoon confessing and the kissing scenes and standing up defending hisbf like a champ. I was proud of how Jihoon handled that. It was very classy and it's quite clear to his father now that Jihoon is good for him and that he clearly loves him. As for TJ, we that really . he is the only villian I feel for in this story. He just got obsessed with Daehiw but I do think that his feelings were sincere. Too bad that Jin came in the picture for him otherwise things may have turned out differentky because Dae seemed to care about him too. I wonder what the next chapter will be hmm~ but I was sort of wondering why it doesn't feel like there are as many couple moments with panwink in their chapters the last half of this story? Kind of interesting since I consider them the main of this story and they are your main ship. In comparison the other couples seem to have more moments. hmm maybe i would feel different if I re read. Just wondering if you were running into a block with them? I hope that before the story ends we can see some more panwink moments if you wouldn't mind because I just love reading about them, but mainly Lin though
Chapter 19: sooooo....
taejoon does have this certain reason behind his actions....
aigooo.... i love that little girl already.... but she was terminally ill???
waewaewaewaewaewaewae~~~~~
and jihoon go savage af to fave that mr lai....
kekekekek
oh come one sweet daddy.... let see how much you love your son...
hohoho...
can i ask for special episode for woojin-yuejun???
kekekeke...
woojin is just hilarious here in his super confident bad boy mode....
i wish him happily ever after with yuejun so guanlin could go happily ever after with jihoon too~~~ \(^o^)/
Chapter 19: Jihoon is so...sweet huhuhu he’s really risking it all for Guanlin. I hope Guanlin’s father would go and see his son perform!
And Danbi is so cute huhuhu save her unnie! Magu Otter and his animal friends huhuhu it’s so cute! I feel so devastated for Taejoon...he’s been through a lot...I hope Danbi will be safe...
AND UNNIE SAVE JINHWI PLEASE SAVE MY HEART HUHUHU I WILL CRY FOR MONTHS IF THEY END UP NOT TOGETHER
Chapter 18: Okayy...
I finally manage to find the way back here...
I was waiting for weekend so I can read this long chapter leisurely, as I dont like to read 'part-by-part' (I love to read in one go as much as I can do..)
But last weekend I literally passed out after touch down in my comfy bed...so here I am now...
I LOVE how sungwoo actually know it all along about daniel's identity.. And how he stopped him everytime he's trying to confess..
And after reading too much characterization of daniel as the top/dom (i myself made him to be one in my fic xD),, I REALLY ENJOYED his character here where he's the opposite.. He's a sweet sub...
I wonder what happen to taejoon.. What health problem he has...
And I really dont like this chaerin character...
Unless you're making a plot twist where all she said were actually true..
Don't know..
But I bet she's a true liar...
It's okay that you have to deal with ur real life...
Fanfics are supposed to be entertainment.. Not burden...
And reader.. Or at least me, would prefer to read stories where the authors enjoy writing it....
Dont make it a pressure otherwise your story wont turn out to be good.
Good luck with your life...
Dont rush yourself if you dont feel like it... XD
Chapter 18: It was really pretty. Their story is really my favorite, it's so poetic and exhaling at the same time . There is so much actions, you're never thirty !
Seongwooi s such a lovely boy, he went trough so much, how can he bears that ?He's so strong and brave. And I'm happy he found someone like Daniel. Daniel is such a cool character, you directly attract to him. He has this kind of aura.
Anyway this chapter was incredible thank you
Chapter 18: That was lovely. Intense and informative and sweet and touching and the slightest hint of amusing. And I do classify that as my dear, but the more making love poeric sort with a ton of euphemisms. Congrats, you finally did it. Don't say you can't because that was pretty hot. And made me think for the first time in my life that reading can be y haha.
Thank you for this mature chapter. It's so sweet and emotional. I really felt they got closer than ever. They are so perfect for each other and I really feel the love.
Can we talk about my amazing Ong for a second? How sneaky fox of him to have known about Dan this whole time! I think he was interrupting Dan when he tried just for the heck of it or he was waiting for the right moment. That explains so much in the past chapters and makes me question lotshe has said or done. This minx. God I love him~~ I loved seeing his playful side, then his fierce protective side, then his marshmallow side, then his y side. He just has sooooo many layers(Danwould be second I think). It makes him attractive, I love how unpredictable this character is. It makes me jelly of Dan honestly. But go Dan getting those Ong goodies~~ more than once too, impulsive kitty just taking the puppy wherever he pleases and Dan not even trying to stop him because he knows when it comes to their attraction Ong always wins out muahaha. That bathroom stuff was hot by the way.
Now about Chaerin. Seriously that b**** be cray cray! She needs mental help clearly. I wanna hurt her for doing that to my baby Ong. I hope Dan takes it out on her because Ong can't do anything with the blackmail and his cuz and all. It's complicated. Kind of scared to see what she's up to next, I'm guessing it's far from over.
I'm wondering how long this story will be by the way?
This chapter was wonderful. I want to read the emotional and fluffy parts again with just the two of them not related to Chaerin stuff. That's where the gold was that I really wanted. It was great to see them Interacting. I really missed them.
That's awesome you're busy with interviews. I hope you get lots of options to choose from before you even graduate. Actually you are starting early so I applaud you that. I bet you're scared to have a full time job! Can't wait to read your new story~ good luck with everything, love you, see you in another month I guess then haha
Chapter 18: OMG welcome back! Don‘g worry about your updating schedule cause we totally understand^^
And yes! OMG they already sorted it out! Seongwoo finally figured out about Daniel‘s true persona^^ I was actually waiting for them to clear it out and all I can say is,you really wrote their characters well and with an impact! I love how Seongwoo didn’t get (aggressive) mad at Daniel,instead he tried to understand his side more. I am really looking forward at Chaerin‘s character and also how my blood boils everytime I read her name hahahaha and I am deeply impressed by Seongwoo‘s acting skills too! It‘s superb^^
Now,I‘m also worried and at the same time weirded out by Taejoon...like,he changed completely! I hope he isn’t planning something baaaad huhuhu
And I‘m also thrilled about PanWink‘s relationship now hahahaha Seonho-ah,better watch out hahahaha ;)
I also wish you Congratulations for your upcoming Graduation!!!<3 You endured well^^
And yup! I followed you on Twitter already hahaha I‘m glad you made one! We can spazz there together!^^
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