Chapter 1: Definitely can see a bit of maturity about Lina this time around -- but she still my moody Powered-Up Queen. Minus the extra angst.
Byul still pisses me off ( ಠ_ಠ) I mean what Best Friend would tell other people their Best Friend's secret?!?!?! Seriously, like who???? I didn't like Byul the first time, and I still don't like her now. ...but that's okay, that's her character flaw. She's like that friend that is nice on the surface, but is really, really selfish underneath that shiny veneer. Which, sadly, many of us do happen to friend once or twice in our lives, especially when we're young. And what do authors use them for?? Conflict & Character Growth!!! (P.S. Byul does not deserve to be forgiven for telling people Lina's secret. I don't care if she says "iTs BeCaUsE i ThInK yOuR PoWeRs MaKe YoU LiKe YoU'rE a SuPeRhERo!" Besties don't go blabbing to the whole school about that stuff, they keep secrets like a good wingwoman supposed to because it's not their secret to tell, unless they have permission to do so.)
Urgh, her mother, I just remembered why her mother was an ugly sourpuss towards Lina...anyway this time around I noticed that there is less angst especially between Lina and her mom. Its like Lina knows how to swerve her mom's icy glares & obvious favortism. Her mom still a b-tch tho.
And Jimmy ...you are the weakest Link. Goodbye!
First Chapt was pretty good!!! I am ready for more!
Chapter 1: Finished the first chapter! Love it! When her dad winked at her like he's proud makes me feel proud too :') But, little Byul still makes me annoyed, I mean come on, girl - secrets are called secrets for a fudging reason (っ=﹏=c) Thank you author-nim for the chapter o(￣▽￣)ｄ
Chapter 1: I’m a new reader and I never read the original version but so far I like it! Lina’s powers are really interesting and I feel bad for her that she’s treated as an outcast like by the whole school.
I literally squeal when i saw you made an update!! You have no idea how glad I am that you decided to continue this story ヾ(≧▽≦*)o cuz I really like it the first time I read it. Like that you made the decision to make this an ot9 instead cuz yes, we miss them but they're happy with their own success now so let's be sensible here. I'm so excited to read more ٩(●ᴗ●)۶
Chapter 1: So, it was this story I was on about when I first spoke to you on your old account. After reading Twelve Majestic, I had read this and I couldn't remember the name then (when I had left a long a** comment on your wall), since you had deleted it after a while. But it was this oc that I had related to, so much. I'm so glad you've brought it back, though, I can only remember bits and pieces of the previous version.
Hmmmm so in the previous version, had she removed Jimmy's memories? Idk if that had happened, I can't seem to remember that part. Also, byul, I really don't like her. :( I know she's her friend but Lina deserves a better one. I remember, she annoyed me in the previous version too. How can she just spread lina's secret like that?! And her saying she can't keep secrets?! That's such bullsh*t!!! She kept the exo boys as a seceret and never told Lina about them. So she can keep secrets! It honestly makes me wonder if she knew that they were here because of Lina and not because of her. And that's why she kept asking for energy boosts from Lina. I know they eventually end up finding out she's not who they're looking for but it annoys me that she's in the way. :/ I can already remember byul crying in the previous version because she had to let them go. It honestly makes me want to roll my eyes! :/
Anyways, from the previous version, I remember them moving to different/special school and byul had went there when she wasn't meant to go there. And she was also popular there. But once the truth comes out everyone starts disliking Lina since they thought she stole them from byul. :( That part had honestly hurt my heart. Idk if I'm mixing up this or not but didn't some of the boys not like byul and thought she wasn't their mate?
I'm exicted to read more!! I hope this time around, the oc won't be too sad; having negative thoughts all the time. I honestly wanted to give her a hug that time. :"((( I'm looking forward to how you'll write the story this time and how the characters will be like. ❤️
Chapter 1: Wasn't Luhan one of her main adversaries in the first go around? I admit I am going to enjoy reading this again because I loved it the first time. Luna seems more powerful with the update.
Chapter 1: Wow this is amazinggggg. I swear you write the most unique stories I have ever read! Too bad I haven't read the original version :( either way, I know this revamped one will be a masterpiece as well <3
Chapter 1: OHHH MYYYYYY GOOOADSJFDKLFKLADFKLASDFLANDFNADFNADVNVJSDVNDVNDVNJDVNSDJSDV OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG NO WAYYYYYYY NO WAY
I'm SCREAMING. When I saw this notification, I ACTUALLY THOUGHT I was dreaming or something omg omg. I LOVE PAPER THIN SO SO SO SO MUCH. It was always my favourite to read and I'm so so so happy and proud of you that you'd come back to this story ( ᴜ ω ᴜ ). I just think you're amazing for this.
I like the change from OT12 to OT9, and it makes sense!!! I remember being so upset at Luhan’s character because he was so mean BUT I still loved him in the story. AND I hope the tiny crush that Lina developed for Kris because of his powers and how it made her feel free will still be here, but for someone else!!! I’M SO EXCITED FOR THIS OMG. I was reading back to my comments and I loved Baekhyun so so much in this story he was so so cute and I’m so excited for him to comeback again!!!
NOW ON TO THE FIRST CHAPTER AAAAAA
I really Really love the change with Lina and how she deals with her mother’s unfairness. AND I love her dad winking at her for doing that. Right now, I dislike Byul aaaaaa. I feel like she’s a little selfish and she should’ve kept Lina’s secret because this is such a huge deal for her and I feel so bad for Lina（；へ：）.
I love Lina LOOOOL, “the nightmare of your dreams”, bye Jimmy :). I think the reason I don’t like Byul is that she’s inconsiderate of her friend’s feelings and she doesn’t even TRY to understand.
Okay, you already know I love this so much. I’m really happy that you decided to give this a try and I don’t think ANYONE would ever dislike your writing because it’s THAT good. Thank you so much for this!! <3
Thank u for this..
I remember.. the first ur fic i ever read are paper thin..
And coz this fic i am become ur fan.. and read all ur fic.. yes.. we should move on.. i agree with u.. and iya been a long time after 3 member left..
Thank u so much..
So glad you are back, though am gonna missed others it's but like you said we gonna move on. Welcome back authornim and I will be waiting for your update
I’m so glad it’s back I remember when you were debating on deleting it and I was like no save it !hopefully one day you will come back and it was worth the wait!!!! Thank you for picking the story back up and can’t wait to read the 0t9 version
Chapter 1: Woah glad to see this remake! I actually just remember faintly about this story went before but since i also a fan of ur reverseharem story, will look forward for this ;) Lina looks badass and strong girl and i love her already
PS : thanks to deciding to make this story ot9. I feel we should move on and believe however exo stay like now. Eventho i'm a fan of one of the Ex-member, i think we should support exo9 and them each separately right?
I'm happy to see this story back again! I can't wait to see what you do with it this time around! All the best with your writing, and if you would ever like a little company in editing or some help, you can reach out!
THANK GOODNESS YOU ARE BACK TO EDITING THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!
This was one of those stories where it kept coming back to me in my head! I KNEW MY PATIENCE WOULD FRICKIN PAY OFF!!!!!!!
Sorry, I have no chill, I am just soooooo excited. In fact, I'm sure I won't mind the changes fyi and I totally agree with you on the change from OT12 to OT9.
Good luck!!!! You can do this! I believe in you!
oh and ....Thank you!ThankYou!ThankYou!ThankYou!ThankYou!!! I am legit crying atm ....happy tears tho!
Chapter 1: Jep as expected still in love :) looming forward to the next chapter and especially the part when the boys find out, that is is lina and not byul, it was something like that right? Anyways see you soon :)
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