Chapter 2: i havent seen u in so long!! this is great!! loving the editing stuff <3 i bet it’s gonna be hard from ot12 to ot9 cus that’s a lot to change, and you were so far in the story already! but i cant wait for it! (but please take your time this isnt to force you lmao) still gonna be excited whenever you update (*´ω｀*) hope you’re healthy and well!!!
Chapter 2: omg im happy that you decided to revamp this story. kinda sad its not ot12 anymore cuz i really love luhan in this from the previous version BUT i do agreed we gotta move on. i think i remembered something about why Lay always wear gloves,,,, if i remember it correctly. but i dont want to spoil to the new readers xD excited to see more of this new version!
Chapter 2: AAAAAAAAA OKAY!! First interactions with the boys DOWN. I love how Lina called Kyungsoo a pretty boy LOL.
ALSO, not at how he showed his full powers to her and she was still confused HAHAHAAH I LOVE HER.
Yeah… I still don’t like Byul at all. Imagine hiding your relationship from your best friend, for over A WHOLE MONTH WHATTT. I don’t know, I just can’t get myself to like her character.
Lina is such a sweet girl and the lengths she would go to make her best friend happy ( ◡‿◡ ).
AAAAAA THE MEET UP OMGMMGMG. You’re right, the amount of tension in this WHEW.
I really really really really love Lina’s character. She’s so GROUNDED and STEADY and she doesn’t let things easily sway her.
I didn’t expect Lina and Kyungsoo to talk about their meeting so quick AND INFRONT OF BYUL!! I love how she notices the spark in Kyungsoo’s eyes when he looks at her PLS. I really wonder why Kyungsoo doesn’t like Byul and acts like that towards her… I wonder if he’s the only one that feels like that.
I really like Lina’s character and how she was amused that Kyungsoo was like the first guy she’s seen that isn’t throwing himself at Byul, but she still defends her friend aaa.
THE FACT THAT HE’S OPENLY FLIRTING WITH HER LIKE THAT PLS LMAO. “What are you going to do about it.” UM???? How has Lina not succumbed to his feet yet, JUST KIDDING HEHE.
BAEKHYUN IS SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE I ACTUALLY CANNNNOOOOT LIKE HE IS SO SO CUTE PLEASE. He’s so so soft please PLS!! I CANT WAIT FOR HIS CUTENESS PLS I LOVE HIM AAAAA
AAAAAA Thank you so much for this update. I’m loving the tension and the interactions between the boys and Lina. I LOVE IT.
Chapter 2: Yooo what?! Ok, I'm highly confused right now lmao but so damn excited!! I can't understand Byul's relationship with the guys at all, but I guess the due explanation will come on the upcoming chapters, I'm just being an anxious lol
I really like the plot so far! And I'm so happy I finally made some time to read both chapters, I was very curious about this story.
Can't wait for the next update! Already whipped for Kyungsoo's savage persona and Lay's shiness *squeals* Till thennnn :D
Chapter 2: Yup, Kyungsoo had to be the savage one XD I wonder what Byul is hiding hmm with the way Junmyeon reacted about Byul not telling Lina a single thing about them, I have a feeling she wasn't supposed to keep them a secret from Lina. So far, I'm definitely enjoying Kyunsoo and Lina's little banter XD The way Baek suddenly introduced himself was so cute too, I can imagine his shy smile. Thank you so much for this update! Can't wait to read what happens next <3
Chapter 2: Kyungsoo's arrogance had me smiling and remembering the earlier version and current Lina's spitfire characteristics have me shouting "You Go Girl! Don't let him intimidate you! You are a Queen among knights! They bow down to you!"
In the earlier version, I remember there being soooooo much tension and awkardness you could feel it ooze off the chapter and it made me feel anxious while I mentally yelled at Lina to step up to Kyungsoo for being a passive-aggressive dickhead to her.
I love the change. Lina's impatience with Kyungsoo and her overall annoyance with the situation is felt and her biting sarcasm just makes me relate to her on a whole other level. I loooove it. And Baekhyun's appearance is so cute and awkward (I remembered that EXO was not friendly to him at all and he's the odd boy out. aww Sweetie, hang in there Lina'll protect you! And I remembered his puppy-like aura is what wins Lina over and same with Sehun!)
Chapter 2: I’m interested to see what other changes you’ll make! Wondering if you’ll change Byul’s personality at all, bc if I remember correctly, despite “losing” the guys, she was still supportive of lena (but also i have the memory of a gold fish so idk if thts what happened).
Chapter 2: Oh myy the tension just begin and i also feel like giddy for more between Lina and the boys. And please why Byul is sounds so great ugh i dont like her that much hahaha Lina is cooler and stronger anyway. Thank u for the update!
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