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Octaviani1004AA
#1
Chapter 54: It's okay some decisions could be a dissapointment sometimes. You done your best. Thank you for your writing,writing this fic. Thank you for entertaining us readers with this fic. We truly enjoyed the ride hahahaha. I hope you had a good day:)
Astriana #2
Chapter 54: There goes my fav fic, lol. Thanks for your hard work though.
MglROZE #3
Chapter 54: Thank you for letting us know. And remember we readers will always be on your side and follow all your desicions. Take your time and if you want then start over. Its never late ro start over I guess. So good luck. And again thank you for letting us know about it.
143spirit
#4
Chapter 54: Hey, so I never really comment anymore, cause I'm just not into commenting unless I really have something to say, so here we go.
I've been on this site for a long time now, maybe almost a decade. I now hardly come on this site because the stories aren't that interesting to me. With that being said, I've read just about all your stories. I don't know what it is about your stories, but I just enjoy reading them. Now since I'm commenting right now I'm just gonna give you some constructive criticism and tips while I'm at it. You may choose to ignore them if you'd like. I know English isn't your first language, as I believe you've mentioned it before. That said I've seriously seen the grammar in your stories grow. I can tell when you are actually interested in your chapters, because your grammer and spelling is better then in ones you struggle with. However, I still believe there is room for improvement. I would recommend you possibly looking online for resources on better structuring your sentences. Now I'm only saying this because I can tell your very passionate in writing. I'm a fellow writer and I believe we can always improve ourselves. You could also get some one to edit your chapters for you who will point out your little errors and explain them to you. That might be super beneficial to you, as you'd be able to see where you went wrong. Now, I'd also like to say I wish you the best in your health. I never commented when you told us your medical issues, but I did keep you in my thoughts for a safe and healthy journey. Lastly I'd like to say it's 100% okay to have to stop a story. Sometimes we just lose our motivation or our direction. It happened, and it only helps us in the long run. We learn better methods in how to overcome those issues after we face them. I honestly believe you will comeback to this story one day. I can see the connection you have to it. You may not comeback to it this year or the next, but when your ready you will. I myself have left stories on here unfinished, that I've actually comeback to and rewrote them. Although I did not post them up again, I have finished them. Sometimes we finish stories for ourselves and not others. Always remember this, we write for ourselves first, not for others. Don't let anyone demand or force anything from you. Stay strong and healthy and don't let anyone put out your flame.
With lots of love,
Spirit ???
Insight_stv
#5
Chapter 54: Awww this has been great. It breaks my heart but I respect your decision :) thank you and you always have my support! :))))))
AstraNova #6
Chapter 54: Well the book has been amazing, anyways! I love all of your books and have bookmarked a lot of them without even knowing that they were written by the same author.... People don’t really write harem stories anymore so your existence itself is a blessing! I have noticed with these type of stories the development of relationships tend to take up a lot of chapters and you would have to end up having over 100 chapters to finish it, with your focus on relationships it may be hard to finish it. You wouldn’t be able to write in the plot twist, the villain, the , because all of your readers are craving the fluff, and at that point, you have put yourself in a very bad predicament. There are generally two ways people finish off books like this, you put in a twist that involves action. Like a villain, or whatever. Or you just develop their relationship and end it on a happy note, with maybe something that leads to a sequel. The latter is used less often and you managed to finish the exchange really well actually! My suggestion is for you to develop the relationships between characters, adding a few more bumps maybe. But the readers have liked this book for the relationships so maybe just continue developing that. You have no need to finish it soon because I would personally wait for as long as you need. You are an amazing author so you could challenge yourself and make another option. Sometimes what the reader wants is something you can’t stand. I hope you don’t feel too stressed though! Your books are amazing, and maybe with your next book start with choosing what the ending will be like. Your focuses seem to gravitate towards the beginnings, which is why the beginnings are the focal point!
baekyeol5ever
#7
Chapter 54: I hope you get well soon! I'm really saddened by this because finally after so long I found a fanfic I know I'd love just like all the other fics I've read. And this genre is also really hard to do, which was why I was really happy I saw this. But well, I guess I'd just have to finish the story on my own, inside my head. Although, I still wish you'd pick this up again. Thank you for this fic, it was my little heaven during hard times at school. I love all your fics and your writing style btw.
rosypeaches
#8
Chapter 54: Sigh.. I totally get how you feel. I'm reaching that wall with a story of mine too, honestly ;-;
pinkyaiah_07
#9
Chapter 54: It's really sad that it has come to this. I really love this story and looked forward to every single update. But I understand. I hope you don't discontinue TTOW tho huhu please don't. But most importantly, I wish you well. Recover well (health-wise) and I hope you also recover from the writing slump you are in. We are all here for you. I look forward to your future stories~ (esp rev harem ones bec harem is life huhu)

I hope someday, you find the right scenes to fill in the plot holes you think you have, and find the heart to continue this. I'll be waiting until whenever. Fighting!! <3
lovebysimiles #10
Chapter 54: I completely understand how you feel and it be hard just letting this story come to en end, but if it's giving you stress then maybe this is for the best! Don't be too hard on yourself! Writing is truly a process and you're still a really great author!! Hopefully you'll get back into the rhythm in other ways so, fighting!
exo_krisyaf
#11
Chapter 54: I actually feel a little bit disappointed..beside twelve majestic this is my second fav fanfics!! I will not unsubscribe it..cuz if you maybe thought to continue this story so it will came out to my update wall.. But I wont force you to continue so dont stress yr self okey :)) All yr story r super good..so keep writing authornim..Fighting!! I Will Alwys Support You!! FIGHTING <<<333
Jenduekie #12
Chapter 54: it was an amazing ride with this story though im disappointed of the outcome of your decision i respect that thank you for sharing this
arnarth2609 #13
im so sad to see its discontinuation
Yoorinn #14
Chapter 54: It's alright. Just don't be too hard on yourself. Just know that I'll support you from behind. From behind I mean like from this lil corner and you might didn't notice. But yeah..you are awesome. You must take care of yourself too! Know that you are my favourite author. Love you!
JadeKKeyLoveYOU
#15
Chapter 54: This is... So sad to read.. to know that this story doesn't satisfy you.. I think it's amazing and i liked Every chapter you posted.
I always waited with excitement your updates. This story but your writing in general, always made me travel with the mind, the imagination.
It's sad to read that it will be discontinued.. The plot it's very original! But nothing can be done right? I will have to accept, because in the end, your well being and health comes first! So i respect your decisions and hope for the best. Maybe one day you'll be able to write this again.
I will still be your huge fan and read your amazing stories! ^^
Stay well dear and fighting! ^^ ♥
asia_lor01 #16
Chapter 54: Awww! Don’t take it too hard on yourself; this was a really good story. I was dying to know more about Kyungsoo and Suho’s backstory. But it’s okay, if you feel like it wasn’t up to par then that is your right. You are an amazing author and don’t feel like this story was a failure in any way because it wasn’t, it was a fantastic story that made us readers want to understand the character more in a personal way. Good luck to your future endeavors!! Will definitely be supporting all the way!
KjmZzel
#17
Chapter 54: I’m extremely sad. This story had helped me get over a small rough patch of my life. I was very stressed and incredibly unsatisfied with myself and the only thing I looked forward to was a new update from you. For me, it wasn’t just about the characters and the plot anymore. I grew to really love Paper Thin in its entirety.

The first thing I did in the morning was check your account if you updated and continuously checking throughout the say and again before I slept, every single day HAHA. It was my favourite thing and I would recommend this to all my friends.
I truly think you’re amazing and how you express yourself through these stories amazes me constantly. I am extremely heart-broken that this story will no longer continue.

But, I know its for the better :’))
All I want is for your health to be better and for you to be satisfied and happy! I just wanna let you know how thankful I am for making this in the first place. I hope that you’ll find your passion again. It is bitter-sweet, but I really hope for the best for you because I think you are a great person. It’s been so so good, thank you for this. It will definitely be missed. Thank you so much, I’ll always look forward to all your stories!

<33 Thank you again
isashi
#18
Take it one step at a time! Im glad you made a proper decision to drop this story but I really do hope this doesn't disappear from your profile! As much as i love this story, your health definitely comes first and so are your decisions.. so if you feel that this story is just gonna end up like twelve majestic all over again.. Then it's best to stop I guess? Twelve majestic did have a really out of place ending and i definitely didn't want paper thin to be the same.. especially since it's already well written from the start.. anyways I'll look forward to seeing penguinsoo from your other stories and this paper thin penguinsoo will definitely be missed hahahaha
emmanuellachan98 #19
Chapter 54: Its fine really....i respect your decision and i think that every author also goes through the same thing so dont be too hard on yourself...i really appreciate that you took the time writing this beautiful story...chincha its really unique and entertaining while it last...i will also support your other stories and for more stories to come...fighting authornim...u can do it...and also thanks for letting us know