Chapter 27: This story tickles me so much. I'm on the edge of my seat for the next chapter.
I'm way ahead of myself, but this storyline has me wondering what the future will hold for the rest of Chen's pack. Like, what if the alpha or any other of the wolves ended up meeting their mate as a result of society allowing them to intermingle slightly (if still with prejudice) with humans?
Chapter 27: I know it's been a couple of months since you last updated, but I wanted to say that I truly enjoyed reading this story. Chen and Jordan's relationship isn't rushed or romanticized in any way, their silent communication took time and was completely endearing. I especially loved how Jordan wasn't just a headstrong or stereotypically weak character, she was complex and well thought out. Chen was as intricate as Jordan despite the fact of his lack of language, but he was also just an adorable little puppy ;-;
I hope you continue writing! Whether it be for this story or another, you're really good. <3
Chapter 27: I can't believe i discovered this story so late!! I LOVED IT❤️I love the characters i love the story i love your writing style i love everything about this story!!! Chen is SO FLUFFYYYYY i can'ttt, his moments with Jordan makes me so warm and fuzzzyyy!! I'm really scared about what he'll do when they take her away from him :((((( and thank you so much for such a great story ❤️❤️
Chapter 1: I almost didn't read this and I'm so glad I gave it a try. The first chapter seems interested, different from the usual fanfics that uses this troupe
Chapter 27: Okay here is the actual comments...
So, I personally wished this experiment to having an end with all of the Variants being set free to the nature and if there's any attachment they had with the human object, should they be granted a blessings.
And although the researchers has stated that it's biologically impossible for her to bear a werewolf gene and actually give birth to a werewolf hybrid, but I think an odd occasion might just happening when you least expected it. I mean, their experiment about this human x werewolf penetration had all been doing in artificial environment which is although close to human nature, but still is nothing but a tech. Who knows what wonder human's body might bring?
Anyways, I guess those IU and YG's president is a good match made from hell. They're both cunning an pretty disturbing. I wonder why don't Jordan gang up on them once again and hack all of their system now that she is having the access....
Remembering the fact that her action on hacking YG's server alone had made IU gone crazy, a bit more push will definitely sent her to verge of wanting to kill herself out of frustration.
I really hate betrayal, and character like IU should seriously being torn apart.
So now I assume YG had been taking his action with all the soldier things, isn't he?
This is not a good sign though... If Chen were to attack the intruder, chance of media spreading the false rumor about Variants are indeed a monstrous being would spread like a plague. But if they were to surrender and obey, I think they will do all their might to separate those two love birds apart from each other; indirectly killing the werewolf.
Sigh. Some human and their disgusting nature. This is hypocrite, I am a human too, but I can't help but to agree with some of the statements here in this story. It is us who always started s and blaming it on other beings.
If human dislike their life to be intruded; to be disturbed, then what makes them thinks that it's right to mess on other beings life?
It's really funny how YG exploits the tranquil live of all Variants, making them his research objects with fortune as his motives and still got the comfortable life and high respect. Meanwhile Jordan who tried to balance out things between Human and Variants got sentenced for a crime and has to rot in jail for the rest of her life. Where did all the humanity goes? It is sick to think that power, money, and reputation outnumbered humans moral compasses... Sigh. By the way, great story there.... Indeed worth to be featured as a gem...
Chapter 27: Beautiful! The way you write is breathtaking. I find myself being absolutely moved by the pure emotion embedded within your words. I love how well you're able to intelligently carve and mold each of your characters into real people. I was so engrossed in Experiment 11 that I had to binge read it within this short 24 hours. What a fantastic read! Keep up the good work!
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