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kateun #1
Chapter 1: this is freaking weird... i don't know where this is going. this is like.... pass the borders of arranged marriages ...
cupcakemuffin
#2
Hello~ I was requested to add your story in the library of recommendations at my review shop, MMP Beta Reading. I'd like to ask for your permission before posting! :) Thank you ^^

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hamsterboo
#3
Chapter 43: JUST CAUGHT UP ON ALL 43 CHAPTERS AND GOING THROUGH IMMEDIATE WITHDRAWALS. I NEED TO READ MOREE.
hamsterboo
#4
Chapter 39: Tears. I CRY.
I've been really silent again (I thought I posted a comment 10 chapters ago but I guess it didn't go thro or something bc I don't see it in the comments section) but OMG THIS SO FREAKING GOOD. I have been reading this non stop every moment I get <3
armyofhope
#5
Chapter 43: wow... omg I can't take it, everything is just so heavy... poor Zoey...

and aah... my heart hurt when Namjoon got all impassioned talking about Hobi!! I really hope they can get out! I know it's just a story but I keep trying to imagine how both he and Jungkook are dealing, alone, back in Korea...

I can't believe I've finally finished reading this! lol. I'm just a tight little ball of emotion. You've really made me feel for these characters! I went and voted, btw <3

I'll be waiting on the edge of my seat for new updates!!
armyofhope
#6
Chapter 39: omg the book!!! and his letter to her!!! T.T aaah... when he said she better be sad and miss him... haha, I love it. I feel like it's really something he would say <3 grumpy grampa Suga... omg, what am I gonna do when I catch up to this story and actually have to WAIT for chapters?!? I'm gonna die...
Me_Mei
#7
Chapter 43: Oh my... you genius make me swoon over your story every time I read a new chapter!
Even if I wouldn't want to I would have to love your story! ;D
And this chapter... and this ending... AHHHHHHHHHH! Why did it end like this?! I was so captured by reading that I clicked on the spot with "Next>>", feeling dump later after looking and seeing that there isn't a next chapter right now... ^ ^'
I mean... THEY'RE GOING TO LIE AND I WANT TO READ THE REACTION BY THE BOYS!!!
Ah... and there's something bothering me... is Tae in love with Hobie or not? I mean... Hobie seemed to be in love with Tae... but I'm not sure about Tae? Because I'm not against him being in love with Kookie (such a fan.. *.*). Okay, and he could be straight too... hmm...
Oh, and reading about removing Jungkook made me have an idea about an exchange.. Zoey for Jungkook... for drama-reasons...
I only have to figure out why Zoey... and what could be the advantage for "korea" in this so it would make any sense... but I had the idea! ^ ^'
Bye! : )
armyofhope
#8
Chapter 36: Ok i gotta say, I'm not sure how I feel about the whole K-Pop harem thing (though let's be real, I would love to live there, lol) but I am glued to this story! I need to know what's going to happen!! and oh my god, it's 4am...
armyofhope
#9
Chapter 31: oh my god, oh my god... what happened?!? I was gonna go to bed after this but I just can't now!

And NamJin's kiss just broke my heart so much!!! aaaah... well done for the beautiful dramatic writing!!
armyofhope
#10
Chapter 29: aaaaahh... bless their little moment at the end!!! i'm swooning like a schoolgirl.
armyofhope
#11
Chapter 27: Aaaaaahhh.....!!!!

Oh my heart broke a million times reading this... When Yoongi comes to see her in the room... Oooh my heart... I think you and I like the same type of dramatic tension. I'm just sorry she had to suffer so much... Zoey is strong... I can't help but wonder when she's gonna break...
armyofhope
#12
Chapter 26: Omg this chapter.., I almost cried and I got goosebumps all over!!
armyofhope
#13
Chapter 21: Aaaaahhh!!! Yoongi coming to check on her at the end broke my heart! that was so ing sweet!! T.T
armyofhope
#14
Chapter 19: I like that through the whole edupedness (that's a word, right?) of the situation, her falling in love with Yoongi is still so cute and innocent, because she's never experienced anything like it before <3

Although with the way they're all acting, if it was me, I'd probably have fallen for all 6 of them already, hahaha... XD
armyofhope
#15
Chapter 11: aaaah... it's nearly 1am and i think i have to force myself to stop reading!!

The scene where Tae regains his voice was really touching for some reason.

I am really, really, loving this so much. I'm so glad I found it.
armyofhope
#16
Chapter 9: I loved the whole spiel about Yoongi's smiles <3
armyofhope
#17
Chapter 7: This is my favorite chapter so far. I really enjoyed it. I'm seriously so glad I found your fic. I really liked how Hobie introduced them as being BTS too. It felt natural, and not fake or thrown in there just for show. I am seriously loving everything so far... but aaaah... my poor Hobi... sterilized!!! who would do such a thing?!? *criesallthetears*
armyofhope
#18
Chapter 3: This. Is. So. Good.
I'm giddy.

Also, Min Yoongi "I'm in charge of fixing broken things." <3
bless my heart...
armyofhope
#19
Chapter 1: Wow, I actually found a good story!!

To be honest I don't read very many fics... I get upset with bad writing or ridiculous plots quite easily... but your writing is good, fresh, and you have an interesting concept, so it definitely makes me wan to read more! I'll keep on reading and let you know what I think! I'm excited! ^.^