My Poem of the day

Ever felt the sudden emptiness crawling inside your heart? what comes through your head? if you ask me, i turn it into a poem or i just don't know

 

"Emptiness"

by: UknowMi

 

Day by day breathing turns hard, it’s as if you’re breathing through straw

You turn mute to everything, except for the beating of your heart

Feeling the pain inside, needles poking and passing through it

Leaving a hole, making you feel empty

Living you lifeless, with no care

And the only thing in your mind is to be free

 

But you couldn’t do much, as you were tied on the railings of your death bed

Trapped, with no one but yourself

The ghost of your past and present hunts you, making things hard for you to see your future

You feel like your slowly dying, and no one as in no one hears your call for help

Is this your life forever? Forever trapped in darkness? All alone?

 

In people’s perspective life is really amazing

But to people who looks through one soul, life is not as amazing people thought

Not unless there are people who will try to listen to you

Not unless there are people who will guide you, in the phase where your nothing but confused

Not unless there are people who will show you the thing that you’ve been looking for;

And that is ____.......

 

 

What about you guys? and can you guys fill in the blank, i want to know if you guys guessed what this poem is looking for ^-^ thankies for your time and have a nice day all ^-^

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143yunjaeAKTF
#1
freedom,
love,
affection,
or inner peace??
but all of these can lead to happiness isn't it? XD
Park_RaeJoon
#2
is it food ?
6002theyong
#3
and that is love
MynnieYumi
#4
Friendship.
A true friend will help you through your ups and downs in life.
kpopluvr27 #5
You really like these kind of things, don't you? XD