Hello everyone! (If there is someone)

I would like to write a lot of stories. There is a big problem. My english is too lame. Or to my thinking. I need more time to improve it to the level I can write. My stories in my native language are good. People likes it. Like really, I beg them to be honest with me. With my objective opinion, I can write better, but I need more time. I wish one day I will be active popular author. 

But, the point.

I read random SeKai story at this site. I will not adress it. I left a comment saying I'm dissapointed. I just can't believe these all people were like "Sequel!!" "I fell in love with your story!!" "How could this happen, author-nim you messed my mind!" 

How? It was written like - life is easy. She described Kai as a biggest abusive . He did really bad things to Sehun. He even him and he got pregnant. He was living with him after 5 years of marriage and having their son. But Kai didn't love Sehun but his boyfrieng Kyungsoo. Okay... as a SEKAI tagged story, you would expect Jongin will change his mind and will somehow become a good person loving Sehun. Right? These stories are about this. BIG NO! It ended up as a Taohun. Even after giving rate M it has almost no reason to be rated! Like nothing happened. Everything was only slighty mentoned. "I was . He was abusive. He did." Nothing like describtion of the exact act. Even Tao's children was and he was able to laugh after 2 montns. please! And then, when it came to divorce, they got joint custody? After all the abuse?? What? The court would never allow that. And people beg for sequel only because Jongin's and Sehun's son attempted to commit suicide. After 10 years skip. How could all the poeple be satisfied with this lame story? I don't blame the author. I even told her (i guess it's girl and even very young) that I wish her good improvement in future. But...the satisfaction of readers shocks me. It's me who is demanding or the people doesn't need proper story to read. Just EXO members put in the story.

Help me please