Please read: DOLDRUMS

Please please please read my story Doldrums.
I kind of failed on advertising my story, so please read it if you have time.
I'm really really hungry for constructive criticism.

Anyway, here's some info. I hope they got you curious and interested.
Starring: Choi Danji (OC), Bang Yongguk, the rest of B.A.P and EXO
Click the poster to get redirected to the story. ^^v

Doldrums by cupcakeparadise
Genres: abuse, torture, tragedy, psychological, , slightmorbid

Description:

Torture; an act of deliberately inflicting severe physical and psychological pain, and possibly,
injuries to a person, usually to one who is physically restrained under the torturer's control.
Yup. I guess we all know that? But have you ever experienced it?

Resistance; an act or power of resisting, opposing, or withstanding.
The base word 'resist' meaning to be able to take a stand; in other words, to 'withstand'.
Sounds easy, right? Well, in some point in our lives, I know that we somehow resisted to something.
But the question is... for how long can you resist something as strong as torture?

Surrender; an act of relinquishing a possession or control of to another because of demand or compulsion.
Someone would always tell you that if you fall behind, run faster.
Someone would tell you to never give up, to never surrender, and to rise up against the odds.
Someone would tell you that the harder you try, the harder it is to surrender.
But that's too easy for them to say. At some point, we will think of surrendering, yes,
and that's one of the reasons why most people fall into torture. But the question is...
for how long will it take you before you wourself decide to surrender?

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wonpokemon
#1
ohhh this sounds really nice.
i like the words that explained in the description.
it really got to me...
and i usually shy away from dark genres because i get too attach and feel sympathetic. lol
but it's too good to pass it and feel like there may be some hope... or not. =]
good luck! will read~