What do you guys think.?

The little girl behind Yifan and Chanyeol stepped slightly forward, trying to peak around the twin towers, to see the little boy clearly. When unsuccesful, she pulled both boy's arm to get their attention. "He's gonna cry." she whispered at the two boys.

"So?" both boys answered in unison, with one eyebrow raised on each of their faces, they weren't called 'twin towers' without reason.

"You guys are being mean....."  Yannie whispered-slash-whined back as she pouted at the two boys, pulling them away, so the others won't hear, though the move has no effect as the others just followed, leaving the new kid just standing there.

"No were not!" Yifan answered back, his whispered tone laced with conviction, thinking like every 6-yr-old boy who has it in his head that he's unmistakeably right.

 

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This is an excerpt of the fic i'm writing, what do you guys think.? is it something worth reading.?

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KrzyKiki
#1
I like how it written but I'm confused a bit. But thats only because you wrote it like...it was the middle of the story. Keep it up.
Red_lantern #2
A bit confusing.