I've completed my first oneshot, which is in draft mdoe, at the moment, but I need someone to review it whilst it's ondraft mode, and can help me improve the oneshot before it's ready, to be shown. If you can help me or know of anyone that can, please coment below. That's all thankyou.

P.s anyone know a cure for dizzyness? I got sent home yesterday cos I nearly collapsed, but my dizzyness is coming back I think (only when I do my photograohy homework -_- - I need to do it, though! :/)

Love, and wishes Abi :)