My Stories :/

Okay, so I'm feeling very insecure about my two stories. I feel like they're just not coming out right and I pretty much think they :/ I'm actually feeling like I should just give up on them. One is a ToDae one which I already completed, but the other is an ongoing GDYB, GTop one. It would mean the world to me if some of you could check them out and tell me what you think about them. I wanna hear it all: the good, the bad, and the ugly. 

Thanks in advanced for your support!

 

Let's Be Alone Together 
(ToDae)

 

The Masquerade
(GTop/GDYB)

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Cheon_Sa
#1
I was already convinced by The Masquerade, but since you asked I went and read Let's Be Alone Together, and I'm not disappointed! The funny parts are especially well written, some characters are bit caricatural but it's for the sake of humor, so I'm fine with it!
There's much less to laugh about in The Masquerade, but you're dealing very well with the change of kind. Keep it up!
villirh
#2
i havent exactly read The Masquerade but i did read Let's Be Alone Together and i think the only thing you can improve is character development and/or story flow.
from the people commenting here i think The Masquerade is probably very interesting and ill set aside some time so i can read it too! :D
as for Let's Be Alone Together, i mentioned earlier in a comment on the story that Seunghyun's behavior was unrealistic, and i did get a feeling that things took turns that were a bit sudden, but i still really liked the story because you have a pleasant writing style that you, as a writer, know how to work with.

lol, im sorry for sounding like im the best writer in the world when my stories are , i just wanted to be like an objective reader ~~
i seriously should take my own advice u_u

anyway, dont feel insecure about your stories because as is obvious to the eye, a load of people like them, including me. :D
BehnazYB
#3
are you crazy?! what the hell is this, your stories are one of best stories i had ever read, have some faith on yourself. i told you before i really love "The Masquerade" its really good shaped and exciting,it make me feel alot of diffrent emotion, i know i always sound rude in my comments but its cuz i feel, i dont know, comfortable?!! with you and your story.it has enough detailes, enough dialoges, enough scenes descripation? XD i love how things gose on, how things happen, how Jiyong struggle with his past,his feeling, i love them all. so dont say its not good its good enough for me so dont you dare feel down again >:/ update soon and i love you ok?!!! :)
SunnyKid #4
NO! I love "The Masquerade" so much! I've never read your ToDae, but I'll check it out. I do admit to being a bit of a silent reader, but I'll comment more often from now on.
ZelihaCaluk #5
I always read your stories and they are great!! \(^o^)/Don't give up and your strories are far from stories that !!! (^_−)−☆
IndigoGrey #6
LBAT is a lovely fic, it's definitely under my "Favorites" tag. I'm currently reading Masquerade, but I don't enjoy ual abuse themes, so I'm struggling with it. Despite that, write what you want, there are readers out there that enjoy certain themes.
musicismyworld #7
Your stories are very good!!Please don't give up!!!!
miroyaaaxx #8
i seriously loved your story let's be alone together. i was always waiting for u to update and i is seriously one off the best todae story's i've ever read :)
when i saw your new story the masquerade i immediately subscribed i really love this story to!!
so don't say they because they really don't :D
Hatsumomo #9
I understand what kind of feeling you are feeling right now but I am being very honest withnyou when I say that your stories don't at all! As a gdyb fan, I have read the Masquerade only and I immediately subscribed because your way of expressing things is very much to my liking! You don't get stuck on unimportant things but you focus on conveying the most important things - that is what I like the most. Somehow, you manage to combine sadness, tragedy with happiness and funny moments , that's pretty hard & still you manage it well!

I would be sad if you dropped your story, it's actually very good! :)
DoingCrackWithExo
#10
I've only read The Masquerade, but it's a really good story so far. The plot seems pretty solid, and it's interesting to see where it goes. You shouldn't feel insecure about your writing as it's very good.
captain_braddy
#11
Well I have read the masquerade and I have to say it is my favorite gtop I have ever read. Don't doubt yourself
cass92
#12
Pabo boy >.<
Your stories are awesome! Stop saying that they !
You're cool