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Title: AGE doesn't matter when it comes to LOVE
 
Description: This story is about LOVE which conflicts the two couple with their ages. The girl which is older than the boy in 8 years cross their paths and made the boy fall in love with the girl.. How complicated it is right?!! How awkward too but this story will prove that no matter what happens , when you fall in love you can't do anything about it even if the gaps of their ages were too big it doesn't matter so that's why 'Age doesn't matter exist.. 
 
Do you guys agree?!! So from all the girls there who fell in love with the young ones dont lose hope there still a CHANCE so AJAH?!! Hehe
 
Characters:
 
Park Chanyeol
 
                     The little boy who lost his parents by some unknown reason. Who loves Sandy so much more than his step-sister who adopted him. He only knows that Park Sandy is her name in 1 and a half year that they've been together but little did he know that Sandara Park is her real name??! The Dara that his fanboying over is only one??!!.. He ran away after the day Sandy left him. Poor baby. 
 
Yeol is the person who looks so cheerful and bright outside but sad and lonely in the inside. The person who dont give up and hates breaking a vows.
 
A talented child who knows how to play a varieties of instruments and has a talent in rapping skills. he's not that good in dancing but his voice is gorgeous enough to be an idol. 
He met Park Shin hye a middle age woman who adopted him like her own son. Who discovers Yeol's talents and help him to be a trainee. Who's working as a secretary of Lee Soo Man the owner of SM entertainment. 
 
So When he become an Idol his group is called 'EXO!' Its just a rookie group.
Do this idol thingy will helps him??!Will he and Sandy cross their paths again??! And if it did will he forgive her and continue loving her even though their s is 8 years?!!
 
Sandara Park/Park Dara
   
                         The little girl who captured Yeols heart. A girl which has a pure heart, sweet, caring and a loveable pretty girl. She is a half Korean and Half filipino. Being a mixed she has to go to philippines to meet her mother and her little brother. 
That thing broke Yeol's heart. After leaving Yeol for a year she can't find Yeol anymore. With that she started blaming herself from losing him.
 
She became an actress in the philippines and later on an idol in korea when she came back to her home land.Dara is her stage name when she becomes an idol. Her group called '2ne1' being an idol makes her really busy even forgetting thinking of Yeol . Will she able to see him again?!! And will she realize what she truly feels for Chanyeol??!
 
Do you think its just a love of a sister and brother thingy??! Lets find it out??!
 
Other 2ne1,Mblaq, EXO members and other characters will appears soon!!
 
 
PLOT:
  
               In the midnight,where the shining of the moon helps to bring lights on the dim surroundings in a dark alley where there this little boy hugging his knees, shaking whilst crying. He's crying with fear luring on his swollen and puffy eyes. The eyes that should be cheerful and bright at his young ages. This kid was surely frightened with for some unknown reason. The undefine reason that kept this child be fragiled and helpless...the innocent eyes that faded with that awful reason.
The surroundings that filled with loneliness and his sobbed.Lost for words. But what could he do he's so sad and lonely that made him can't utter even a single word but to sob.
 
Meanwhile, A car with a two passenger we're passing by in a dark alley, the little girl which I comprehend is currently in her teen ages were staring in the car's window. The window is opened which the sound of a random things could be heard, like the sounds of moving engine, the tweeting of birds, the sound of barking dogs but one thing that caught her Attention.
The little boy who's sobbing non-stop with his head low. The girl felt sad for him, she averted his gaze to her dad "Appa?! Can you stop the car?!" She uttered softly.
 
The father of the girl nodded his head and stopped the car. He then gave her daughter a questioning looks. "My lil baby girl what is wrong?!" He curiously asked her.
"Appa there is a little boy over there,*she pointed at where the boy is* can we go and help him, he looks so sad and lonely appa!" The girl mumbled in sadness.
 
Her dad smiled at the thought that her baby girl grew in such a nice and good heart. He then caress her rosy cheeks. "You're such like your mother my baby girl!" Her dad said and kissed her forehead. The girl smiled and nodd in happiness as her dad went out of the car and approach the little boy outside in a cold dark alley.
 
A hand mentally patted the head of the little boy that made him gasped and jumped a bit in shock . He was shaking "D-dont hurt m-me!" The little boy startled with his tears flowing in his baby face. 
 
The little girl's dad had taken aback by his words. He mindlessly cough and cleared his throat. He slowly bent his knees and hold the little boy's shoulder in order not to scare him. But the boy started to struggled. 
The little girl finally darted into the struggling little boy. "Get off me! Please dont hurt me!" He blurted while struggling even more.
 
The little girl look at them and shook her head. She slowly remove her appa's hand to the boy. Her dad just sighed and watched his baby girl approach the boy.
 
She gently put her hand in the little boy's cheeks
"Calm down little boy! There is no harm would hurt you. Please calm down" she said softly and sincerely. 
 
The boy jerked his head up to see the innocent and beautiful face of the little girl in front of him. He slowly calm himself and stares at her eyes. "Good boy! Now would you listen to me?" She said caressing his cheeks. 
 
The little boy froze at her sudden touch that made him mindlessly nodded his head and stayed still,the girl smiled purely "I wanted to help you, do you mind if we bring you home with us?!" The girl offered. 
 
The boy shook his head slowly and blinked for a moment. "Then I'll take that as a 'yes' " she cheerfully said with a sweet smile. "Let's go and be with us?I'll promised you will never be alone again!" She uttered genuinely. She then remove her jacket feeling the cold breeze of the air touches her bare shoulder and put it on the little boy's body. And held out her soft and small hands for him to held it back.
 
The boy stares at her hand and then at her pretty face before he mentally held her hand back.
The girl help him stand and smiled as the girl gained his trust. Suddenly the boy said "You promise that?!" He said and held his pinky up high.
 
The girl nodded happily and intertwined her pinky to his up cheerfully. "I promised I will never let you be alone again got that?!" She promised and smiled.
 
The little boy brightened up and wiped his remaining tears and let out a small but a genuine smile. "Nae thank you noona!"
The father of the girl clapped to get their attention. "I guess it settled then. So little boy mind if we ask what is your name?"he asked smiling like her daughter.
 
"I'm Park Chanyeol" the boy shyly answered him.
 
The girl smiled again."You are Park too that's nice. And nice name you got there Chanyeol. Anyway you must call me Sandy noona."She commented. The boy just nodd and smiled with his red ears.
 
"Alright Park Chanyeol. You are a part of this family now. So let's go and bring you to your new home sweet home!" Her father giggled and lead them to hop in the car.
 
The boy nodded now with his non-stop smile and follow them suit. *I promised,I will never let you be alone again got that?!* Her soft and gentle voice with her vows kept on floating on Chanyeols head while staring at the back of this girl who brightened his dim life again.*Sandy noona I'll surely remember that* he thought dazzlingly.
 
 
 
 
Here's the plot how was it??! wait---
 
-What seriously is the reason why our poor baby Chanyeol's dark past?!! 
 
-And being happy with park family now is giving a strength with him
But what if Fate played with them??! And Sandy broke the promise of not living him???
 
-Do Chanyeol can handle this??! Losing the only person who gained his trust..
 
-What if Sandy left him and go abroad??what will happened?!
-What if Yeol ran away and leave with his new life and be an Idol??! Would it be able to help him to get Sandy back??!
 
-Will they recognized each other? After a couple of years will pass??!
 
-What if Yeol found a love for an Idol too?? Will it be a conflict to his plan on getting Sandy's back??! His first love, the one who
captured his fragile heart. And the one who help him be happy again with so much love??!
 
-And What if Sandy and that girl his in love with right now is only ONE??!
Kitty here again with my new fic??! my first Chanyeol's Loves story... and of course his leading lady will be his one and only SANDARA PARK!!! So lets look forward and play with that 'what if thingy?!" ??! I shipped CHANDARA awwe i love this two so much!!
 
-Are you curious??! Then what are you waiting for click SUBSCRIBE then COMMENT and look forward to this??!! Lets find it out and go with the flow with this sweet story of an "Age doesn't matter when it comes to love!" Hihihi please do support me SARANGHAE CHINGU'S i dont see you as a reader I see you all as my Chingu and dongsaengs of mine mwuhhhhhuuuuggggsssss. Sorry for my poor english skills..
 

 

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fallenashe18
#1
I think it's interesting enough but I do hope that you will change the title. Why? I think it's too common...

But, it's your call in the end. Looking forward to reading this... :)
Filipino_Korean_Love
#2
AHHHHHHHHHHHH! No offense but I really dislike stories where the girl is older than the boy, but the PLOT was so interesting. It would be so AWSHUM if you made a story like this. ^^ HWAITING!
AerinLove
#3
Seems really interesting! Tell me when you finish the first chapter! I want to read it! :)
woobuns #4
umm...I don't want to read this whole post because ...so long @_@ and my head is aching omfg lol ..
BUT! I just want to point out a mistake. Is that alright with you? I'm saying it anyway.

You're title says "AGES doesn't matter when it comes to LOVE" ... grammar c: You used "AGES" which is clearly a plural form of AGE and used doesn't .___. Doesn't is used for singular nouns. So it should be "AGE doesn't matter when it comes to LOVE" if you want it to be singular. It's one of the basics really. So, other than that, ia seems interesting :D I would like to read it when it's published. And I suggest you don't give out too much information about the characters because it will spoil the readers.

Do you get what I'm trying to say? ;A; I'm bad at explaining! >< Forgive moi. And I hope I don't offend you with this long-a s s comment OTL ...

that's all! Good luck with your story! :DD
IWillLoveYouForever #5
I think this is a good story!! Let me know when you write the proper one!!