Review for "Should've Said No"

Title : Should've Said No
Author : baboracoon
Chapters : 8 [Completed]
Reveiwer : MinKee58

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             

 

Title: 5/5
Nice title! It suits the story really well. Although it looks like it lacks originality, it suits the story really well!

Language: 18/20
Great job here! There are very little mistakes. Some typos here and there.


Characters : 20/25
The characters are described okay.

Plot: 18/30
The story is boring and there are no cliff hangers or any points in your story to let readers anticipate.

Story Flow: 9/10
The flow is okay. It is not too rushed.

Organization: 5/5
The organization of the story is good! It is not messy.


Overall Enjoyment: 3/5
I did not really enjoy reading the story. It is not very interesting to me. Like it's just going on and on without any .



Total: 78/100

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