The Little Yellow Flower :)

OMO-na! It's been a while since I've last posted an entry >.< Anyways, this is a homework I've made for our free writing in English. And I just received my paper today after being checked and I can't believe that my teacher gave me a *gasps* 21/30 score. Well, I have to admit that I really expected a score which is something like 27 but 21??! D: She told us to make a poem out of a certain social issue and I picked discrimination (and well, if you noticed, in the poem there's also ion x3) I was totally speechless when I saw my score and what made me feel down even more was when I saw her comment below the paper, "Where did you get this?" So, does that mean that I copied my own poem in the internet? What the.. I was on the verge of crying but hopefully no tears came.. phewww.

Anyways, I went to the faculty room and asked her about her comment and with the score. And I was right, she really did thought that I copied my poem on the net *wails around* :L So, I told her this and that and really did convince her that I made the poem. I even said that I could show her my draft. Good thing in the end, she believed me which really made me sooo happy *victory dance* =D. And she took my paper back for re-checking.

I can't really blame her though if she gets suspicious and no, I don't hate her. Well, ok, when she first arrived I hated her guts. But this past few days she's been really nice to us and she's smiling already sooooo I TOTALLY LIK HER NOW :))

And here's the poem before I get tooooo carried away and start blabbing nonsense XD.

 

The Little Yellow Flower

 

*****

In the middle of spring

A season where you bring

Love, happiness and a new beginning

Is when a little yellow flower bloomed

 

Around her, birds sing, trees sway

And loomed

Everything’s bubbly and the

Cloud was never gray

She love nature and she was part of it

The little yellow flower wanted it to remain that way

 

Many days passed and she noticed

That the same kind of flowers but in

Different colors grew

Some were pink, others white and

The rest, like the color of honey dew

 

And the little yellow flower with her looks was teased

The pink flower beside her wasn’t pleased

“You look sickly and weak” she said

“Don’t you come near me. You’re ugly” she even added

 

The little yellow flower remained silent and

Willed herself not to cry

She wished that right there and then she’d rot and die

“Look she even lacks a petal” the white flower observed

The orange flower agreed and said,  “ She’s a hideous flower.

That, she only deserves”

 

The little yellow flower bowed her head in shame

She pretended she can’t hear and can’t see anything

And that she’s lame

 

Then one day, a blue butterfly came around

And the dazzling flowers in the field he found

With enthusiasm, he went up to them and said hi

The pretty flowers giggled first before letting out

A dreamy sigh

 

“Who do you think is the prettiest among us?”

Asked the white flower

The butterfly replied, “That, I can’t tell since you all differ”

“By tasting our nectar will that help you decide?”

The orange flower inquired

“Well, I guess so” the blue butterfly shrugged and complied

 

One by one, he tasted the nectar each flower possessed

And he thought, they all taste the same

Therefore, the prettiest he could never guess

 

But his eyes landed on the little yellow flower who kept silent

The entire time

And noticed how humble looking she was and she

Smelled like lime

 

“You” the butterfly began, “is the prettiest flower I’ve ever seen”

The three of other flowers were petrified and together they screamed,

“Why her?!” they demand

She wasn’t even part of the plan

 

The blue butterfly circled around the yellow flower

He touched her soft petals and they were soft like a feather

The yellow flower blushed and looked away

The butterfly smiled and he thought of something to say

 

“She knows where she stands

And she knows who she is.

She never demands

And she’s not a beast”

 

“She sits in silence

And appreciate everything around her

Though she lacks confidence

She manages to pull herself together”

 

“And the three of you

Be ashamed of what you’ve done

You all have the beauty but

You could never be as beautiful as this one”

 

And with that said

The blue butterfly kissed the yellow flower goodbye

“Thank you” the flower whispered

“It’s nothing. And remember what I said, they weren’t lies”

 

After that incident, the yellow flower spent her days lovingly

With the other flowers towards her being too friendly

Then came the day where she had to leave

And the other flowers refused to believe

 

And as the yellow flower started to wilt and fade away

With a smile on her lips

She closed her eyes

And remembered what the blue butterfly had to say.

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jeniscool100 #1
Awwwwwwwww! I absolutely love your poem! :D <br />
It's soooooo creative and beautiful! <br />
I can see why your teacher thought it was taken from somewhere else - <br />
The imagery was just overflowing! <br />
You did a really great job! I hope your teacher give you the grade you deserve! (: <3333