Awkward

Annyeong~

I don't usually blog but I just had to say something about the last chapter I wrote for 'Second Chances'.

That is by the far the most awkward piece of work I've ever done. I am of course refering to the ty parts. It's not like I've never written ty scenes before, but this just feels plain awkward. I realized how bad it is after I had posted it. I wanted to delete the whole chapter but I made it my policy to never remove a posted chapter - be it good or bad. At least if it's bad, I'd get peple to tell me it's bad.

So, mian. I'm truly sorry for the crappy chapter. I will try to redeem myself in the next chapter. But I'd still love to hear what you think about it. I appreciate your honest feedback and comments.

Thanks.

The embarassed one,

-N-

Comments

You must be logged in to comment

ChocoTiger #1 Nov 26, 2012 15:41:29

Haha, I understand what you mean.
The scene seemed a bit obligatory and routined (Is that a word? But you know what I mean). I still liked it though, since apart from that it was your usual style of writing.
One thing that happened was that after I had finished reading for some time already, I suddenly realized that the whole chapter was Yoochun's POV. I was sitting on the toilet, thinking "What about Arisa?" (Sorry, probably tmi.) Although I guess her POV will come in the last chapter..? :)