Title (-/5) : 3.5. I read the story and found out that it has nothing to do with the title. (Sorry for being so harsh)

Description and Foreword (-/5) : 3.5. It's okay, just some minor errors. Like:

Example: Known as 'Ice Princess'

Correction: Known as the 'Ice Princess'

Spelling and Grammar (-/10) : 6. Just some minor errors. But the most errors are at the foreword.

Plot line (-/15) : 13/15. Your plot line was original, although I saw 2 other fanfics with this plot line.

Flow (-/5) : 4. Sometimes fast, somtimes slow.

Enjoyable-ness.  (-/5) : 3.5. Didn't really get me perked up. But it's very good! I kind of enjoyed it!

Bonus (-/5) : 4.  Okay, I subtracted 1 mark/point from this because of your poster and background! They are too blurry! But the blending are quite good. (Except for Jessica)

Total: (-/50): 36.5. Hope my review helped! I wasn't in a good mood when I was reading your story but I didn't deduct marks from my mood LOL