Please Help Me

Okay, I've been writing this new fic, and my subbies are saying that I need to elaborate more. But the problem is, I don't knwo how to. I want my subbies to enjoy the story more and I told them to give me pointers and I apreciate the feeback, but I don't know how to eborate on it. And one said that she feels I don't finish scenes sometimes. Which I rekon is kindka true.

SO PLEASE HELP ME!!!!

PLEASE GIVE ME WAYS TO ELBORATE MORE!!!!! AND MAKE IT MORE INTERESTING!!!!!

And remember, if you're one of my subbies and you're reading this. I LUBE U!!!!! And thanks so much for the feedback. i just don't knwo how to elaborate! So don't think I'm ratting on u's. :)

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miiiaw #1 Mar 1, 2012 00:35:59

Put yourself in the characters' positions; feel what they feel, think what they think, say what they say (in the story of course, lol. Don't do these things in reality). And use those thingsto say exactly what you want to happen.
I often feel the same about my scenes, and I just think, "What would I feel/think/do?"

TofuCow #2 Mar 1, 2012 00:33:00

usually i play the events of my story through my head (like a movie) and i describe what i see. also try to picture yourself going through the same situations and think about how you would react. i actually end up spending more time thinking then writing xD

holdthekeys #3 Feb 29, 2012 22:52:49

well what i think you could do is, make it sound like your telling someone something, but your exaggerated. like if your telling someone about the eyes of a boy. you would go "those brown eyes, were beautiful like if the sky had shine for the first time like if this life had a meaning now, they were beautiful and they were perfect"