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CHOI HYUNJOO : SOPHOMORE : ENROLLED
YERIN OF GFRIEND. HOSEOK'S PLOTLINE. TUMBLER. THE WEIRD GIRL. MININI.
First, I'd just like to say thank you for being my first applier, it means a lot! Okay, so, Hyeon Joo seems very interesting from the start with the name 'Echo'. Lol, it's cute. If she was born in 1999, that means she's seventeen, so that checks out. Birthplace and hometown checks out too. So, she speaks 3 languages: Korean, English, and Chinese. That checks out, as well. Her fc is Yerin who I adore! And good pick as well for the backup. The apperance, is good, and so far fits with everything you have for her. She seems really refined. Her height is adorable and her weight fits now so thank you for fixing that. Her fashion sense is adorable, with all the socks lol.So that's perfect. Her personality is great, so good job. She honestly seems like such an innocent little child. And it would be so interesting seeing her trying to interact with everyone on the squad. Her background is definitely interesting, and it's nice to know how she is with both her parents and her little sister. So that checks out. (And I love the relationship between her and her sister). From what I can tell with the relationships, she's interested in wanting to be friends with the new kid, and knows Kihyun through school activities; but, other than that she doesn't know any of the other boys or Haeyoung? Okay, that's fine and it fits with her personality. Her trivia is really interesting, especially the social anxiety which could definitely be used in the future. The GPA is fine (I know the whole 4.0 scale and letter grade is confusing) so I'll just say she's an average student overall but excels in creative subjects like theater arts and design but is struggling with other subjects. Sound good? Extracurricular activities and detentions/suspensions are on point, so good job. The interview was funny, and the excuse for being in the gym is definitely a good one. And everything she says seems to fit her personality (and she hates Jooheon which is hilarious). Okay, so you've chosen Wonho's plotline which is awesome! The squad positions and reasoning is perfect, so that doesn't need to change. Defintetly didn't imagine you picking Hoseok for Hyunjoo. I thought it would be Hyungwoo because he's refined and a softy (kind of innocent) which seemed like her. But, picking Hoseok makes everything interesting! You expanded on his personality perfectly, so great job on explaining that. And, I love their story so far. Especially that it takes a while for them to become anything remotely 'romantic'. Seeing how she's kind of insecure, and he has a sort of troubled past (present) thing going on: that makes sense. And the password (though long, which I love) is on point. Great job and thank you for fixing everything! Choi Hyunjoo is accepted.
CHUNG SEUNGYEON : SOPHOMORE : ENROLLED
IRENE OF RV. JOOHEON'S PLOTLINE. TUMBLR. THE REBEL TRANSFER. JOCELYN.
Hi Jocelyn, first off thank you for applying and it's really cool that you decided to pair up with another applier! Alright, let's get started. Her quote made me laugh, and just from that I knew I already loved her. lol. Her nickname, although the backstory is kind of upsetting, is super cute. (And I could see someone like Jooheon using it in a taunting manner) Her birthdate, birthplace, and hometown all check out so good job. (And it's interesting to see that she grew up in LA). So she knows Korean, English, and French. I'm assuming that English is her native tongue, sense she's still learning Korean and only took French as a foreign language class. So that checks out as well. I absolute love that you chose Irene for her fc. And even though Irene is a lot older in real life, she has a youthful look that fits well with your character. So, I'll let it slide. Her appearance, height & weight, and her fashion sense all check out. Her fashion sense is definitely interesting, and it's funny how she doesn't like wearing the uniform to school and obviously gets in trouble with it. Which, again, fits well with her persona. Her personality is on point, I see nothing wrong with it. She seems like such a 'mean' person who might actually be a total softy inside. (And I love those types of characters). I especially love the fact that she's loyal; because, that could go a long way within the fic. Her background and family life is definitely interesting, and I love the way you connected your apps by having Seungyeon come back to Korea because of her behavior compared to Sooyeon (her cousin). It seems like she doesn't really have a solid relationship with her parents, almost like they're just there and they don't truly talk to each other. And I wonder if Seungyeon might resent them for moving her back to Korea. The relationships are all perfect, (and poor Changkyun getting no love with his new loner self lol) and it's good you included Sooyeon so I can get a jist of how Seungyeon feels about her. To say the most, they try not to be around each other which is an interesting dynamic. Her trivia is good, and I love that she dislikes aegyo despite the fact that you've chosen Jooheon as her love interest (cause, you know, aegyo king). Her interview is perfect, and I see you used one of the excuses from my list so that checks out perfectly! And it also fits well with her character. Her squad position, and reasons are perfect as well so no need for change there. On to the love interest! You've chosen Jooheon, the trouble maker. lol. His personality is fine, along with the story. It's interesting that she doesn't hate Jooheon despite the fact that she has such a tough personality. But, I think that it fits well because like I said above, she might be a total softy at heart. It's cute how Jooheon goes to the cafe she works at (and I can imagine him dragging busy Haeyoung, and annoyed Minhyuk with him). Thank you for leaving it an open ending, that allows me to expand more with their relationship if your character is chosen. And there's no need to add more. Everything seems, to be in check! So...Chung Seungyeon is accepted.
CHOI SOOYEON : SENIOR : ENROLLED
HYEJEONG OF AOA. KIHYUN'S PLOTLINE. BASE. UNINTERESTED BOOKWORM. SOUL.
Hello Soul, thank you for applying and pairing up with another applier! Well, let's get started. Right off the bat, I can tell that Sooyeon might be a type of loner (similar to Minhyuk. Even though later on you say they're not.) All of her nicknames seem to fit her persona, and describe her well. Even her Japanese name. Her D.O.B, birthdate, hometown, and ethnicity all check out. She speaks 3 languages, Korean is her fluent language, and her Japanese is just nearly fluent (which is fine because you explain why later in her background) and she took classes in middle school for English and is learning more from Seungyeon (though, it may not be the greatest part of the English language). Hyejeong is her fc, which I find perfect for Sooyeon (and I love Hyejeong). And her backup is fine too. Her appearance, height, weight, and fashion sense are perfect so no need for change there. (Can I just say that her style just fits everything you've written for her so far). Her personality, to me, is an 11 out of 10. How you managed to hit every point of her good side, fine side, and bad side it's beyond me. Everything flowed so well, and the bit about her ocd was definitely interesting. I love the fact that she's from a mixed-race couple, because not only is she a scholarship student at Daejeon; but, she's also probably one of the only students who happens to be mixed. It was cool that you included her small life in Japan, then the reasons (as sad as it is) for her family to move back to Korea. It's lovely that she's a scholarship student, you're the first person to include that! And the obvious reasons would be that Sooyeon is a genius. The connection to Seungyeon in the app, was perfect, and it's interesting that she hasn't led on to the fact that Sooyeon doesn't have any friends. All the relationships are on point (and thank you for including Haeyoung! You're the first person so far.) It's kinda cute how she's been lab partners with Hyunwoo for such a long time. Her opinion on Minhyuk, is interesting. That she feels bitter because of his indifference toward making friends while Sooyeon has no 'real' chance to make friends. So, my earlier assumption about her being like Minhyuk is obviously wrong. She doesn't want to be a loner, it's just that she kind of was forced into it because no one wants to be friends with a scholarship student. Her trivia is great, especially the point about her run for student council and the reasons she didn't run. Her interview is good, and fits her stubborn personality. And her excuse for being in the gym checks out, especially because it connects with Seungyeon. Her GPA, extracurricular activities, detentions, and suspensions all check out. It's nice that you included a few detentions, to make her more realistic (even though it was only for reading in class lol). Her squad position, and reasons, are perfect. I love that you've chosen her to be the captain (the first one so far) because it fits well with her judo training, and intelligent personality. Not only that but I could see her be the type of person to calm others down. Kihyun! Kihyun is her love interest, omg! Yes, finally. I love him the most (well, I love all of them equally but Kihyun is definitely going to be an interesting character). The way you've written him is exactly the way I pictured him so good job for that. And their love story is actually super adorable and I love the fact that it's Sooyeon who is oblivious, and Kihyun's the one who's trying to pursue her. It's like the opposite of Minhyuk and Haeyoung. I don't know what I like more about their relationship: Kihyun's perseverance or Sooyeon trying to convey the fact that if Kihyun keeps going after her he'll get the same treatment she gets. They'd be the mom & dad of the squad, the one's who take care of all the other members and when they fight everyone goes into turmoil. Adorable. Nothing needs to be changed, everything is on point. Choi Sooyeon is accepted.
Overall, you both had wonderful apps that fit well with one another.
JUNG JAENA : JUNIOR : ENROLLED
MINA OF IOI. CHANGKYUN'S PLOTLINE. BACKSPOT. THE PESKY HEAD WRITER. JIN.
Hello Jin! Thank you for applying! Alright, let's begin. (Before I do start I just want to adress your worries about Jooheon being too mean, and trust me your app portrays him just right. He's supposed to be childish, and kind of mean with the way he does things. So, there's no need for change on that.) It's defintetly interesting that you choose her to be another bullied victim of Jooheon's. And I do think that was a good choice for her too. Her nickname is saddening, and that people actually call her that. Her D.O.B, birthplace, hometown, and ethnicity are all good. She only knows Korean, which is fine so that checks out. I think Mina was a good choice for FC. I honestly love her, and TWICE's Jihyo as a backup is good too. Her appearance, height & weight, along with her fashion sense are all perfect so no need for change. I honestly like the fact that you choose to say she's a bit chubbier than the normal Korean girl. Because, not everyone in school is the same weight. Her personality is top notch. I'm not sure what I love more about her, the fact that she's obviously driven to be the best news reporter there is to be, or that she's probably too good at what she does. Her background is good as it is. It's nice to know that even though her father is busy, he still makes time for his family. It's also interesting that she's not a fan of the fact that her parents baby her. All the relationships are perfect, especially the one with Jooheon. Also, thank you for including Haeyoung. It's always nice to know how she is perceived by others. Her trivia, and interview are perfect. The reason she was in the gym in the first place is actually quite funny. (Made me laugh while reading.) The Daejeon Prep Files gossip blog was interesting, and such a good plot device. GPA, extracurricular activities, detentions, and suspensions are all good. Squad position and reasons is good, it's sad (cause Jooheon's such a meanie) but definitely goes along with who she is and how she's treated.And yeah, finally, some love for Changkyun! The poor new kid. His personality fits, which I'm surprised at how well you managed to interpret him with the very little I gave. The love story is definitely cute, and made me smile. (And of course, a fluffy and happy ending if you're picked). The password is cute (Jae noona ^^) Anyways, everything is perfect. No need for change. Jung Jaena is accepted!
KANG MIOH : FRESHMAN : ENROLLED
JIAE OF LOVELYZ. CHANGKYUN'S PLOTLINE. BACKSPOT. THE CANDY CRAZED SWEETIE. REY.
Hi Rey, thank you for applying! I absolutely adore Mioh! She's adorable! Her nicknames are both cute (even Mayo mainly because of its meaning). Her D.O.B, birthplace, and hometown all check out. She speaks 3 languages: Korean is her native tongue, and she knows English and Japanese on top of that. But she only knows the other two a little bit. I love that you used Jiae for the fc. She's one of my favorite members of Lovelyz (behind Kei) and her backup is perfect to! Appearance, height, weight, and fashion sense are all perfect. I like the fact that you kept bringing in the fact that she likes sweets when it came to her appearance. Her personality is definitely interesting, especially that she seems so nice but has this flawed side to her. It's nice to see that even though she puts others before herself, she still has tendencies to blow up and get frustrated. Her background, although a bit sad when it came to her father, it brought her more to life. But, I'm assuming she's a scholarship student? You say her parents are only workers for small companies, and that she achieved really high grades to go to a god school. But you didn't say if she was a scholarship student or not. And if that's true, I'm also assuming she doesn't have many friends because of how Daejeon Prep students feel about scholarship students. The relationship panel is good, and I find it interesting that she wants to be like Jooheon despite all of his down sides. Her trivia and interview are good. The reason for her being the gym was actually quite funny. (And when you explain it further in the love interest section, it makes more sense.) Her GPA, extracurricular activities, detentions, and suspensions Her squad position, and reasons all fit so no need for change there. Yay! Another Changkyun app! (I thought no one would apply for him because it seems that everyone likes Wonho.) Anyways, you wrote his personality well. And I apologize for not including a lot of information about him. I think the story is cute, and makes sense. I like that they're friends for a while, and then end up having mutual feelings for one another but after a while of being friends. It's realistic that way. The password is definitely cute, sweets. lol. Anyways, there's nothing to be fixed but if you could just clarify in the comments whether or not she's a scholarship student, that would be great. (Also I'm glad you're looking forward to the story). Kang Mioh is accepted!
HAN DAIYU : FRESHMAN : ENROLLED
TZUYU OF TWICE. HYUNGWON'S PLOTLINE. BACKSTOP. THE SHE-WOLF. HWATING.
First I just want to say that I'm thankful for you creating a Chinese character, and from Beijing (where I'm from). It's refreshing to see a difference in characters, just when it comes to the choice of ethnicity. The layout is beautiful, it took me a minute to get used to it; but, I can see why you chose it. Daiyu seems like such a wallflower, and introvert. One who strays away from people like Jooheon, and Hoseok. And I can get that straight away just from your description of her. From the way you described her love for the Chinese language (I'm assuming she speaks Mandarin with a Beijing dialect.) and dislikes the use of Korean. Even the way you describe her appearance, and style. It seems mellow. She seems like she doesn't want to show off or even seek unwanted attention. I like the fact that you chose Tzuyu as a face claim; but, I really love Meiqi. She's probably my favorite member of Cosmic Girls (WSJN). Her personality lives up to everything you've written about her. I understand you didn't expand on it, per say, but you described it very well in her background that I feel you don't have to go back and fix it. I find it interesting that Daiyu is protective over her brothers despite them being older. And I actually really like that. I'm the same way with my older sister; mainly because she's insecure. Her reason for being in the gym checks out, as does her GPA, extracurricular activities, detentions, suspensions, squad position, and reason. I feel as though her relationship with Hyungwon is complicated. It's kind of like he fell for her really fast (something like Romeo from Romeo and Juliet obv.) and she has too (like Juliet). And even though he want's to be with her, she feels like she isn't good enough. And seeing as how I want to deal with realistic love stories, I feel this fits amazingly well. It has a lot of depth to it despite the fact that it's only a couple paragraphs. Overall, I love Daiyu and you did a fantastic job writing it. Han Daiyu is accepted!
CHAE JIWON : SOPHOMORE : ENROLLED
JUNG CHAEYEON. HOSEOK'S PLOTLINE. FLYER. THE BOYISH BEAUTY. VIVIAN.
Hello Vivian! Thank you for applying (and as Hyungwon's younger sister)! All of her basic information is great, and I'm glad you stuck with the boyish theme when it came to her fashion sense and appearance. You even brought it into her personality too. Good job of being fluent throughout. Her personality is definitely interesting, she seems to be the exact opposite of her older brother. She's wild and fanatical while Hyungwon is laidback and nervous. Her background is also interesting, that Hyungwon is jealous of her for her parents always being worried about her. While she's jealous of Hyungwon because her mom frequently mentions him on her talk show. You managed to fit in everything I told you about their parents, so good job. The relationship section is interesting. I like how she and Hyungwon interact, and I can see how Haeyoung and her don't get along. Haeyoung is prim and proper whereas Jiwon is like let loose and be chill. It's funny that she tries to get along with Minhyuk, I think she's the fifth applicant character who's trying to do that too. (Why is he so popular? lol) And it's interesting that she wants to be like Jooheon. Does she know that he bullies Kihyun? Or does she only know that he's a prankster? It's also nice that you added in a crush character, someone that she likes outside of the boys. Her trivia, and interview are good. And the reasons for her being in the gym is obviously fine. GPA, extracurricular activities, detentions, suspensions, squad positions, and reasons are all good so need for change. I like that you chose Hoseok to be her love interest. Their love story is definitely interesting. The only thing that caught me off guard is that the quote at the bottom is supposed to be said by Hoseok (and you reference that he gets physical with Jiwon). The only reason I found this odd, is because Hoseok is really respectful to women. Seeing as he never wants his mother to be hurt, and was raised by a respectful man: and he developed the same values. He'd never threaten or disrespect a woman, even if she's done something bad to him. It's just not who he is. I'm not saying you need to fix it or anything; but, I just wanted you to know. Anyways, overall, it's a great app! Chae Jiwon is accepted!
MIN SEOYUL : JUNIOR : ENROLLED
DOYEON OF IOI. HYUNWOO'S PLOTLINE. FLYER. THE SCHOOLS-GYMNAST. LILY.
Hi, Lily! Thank you for applying, let's get started! All of her basic information is perfect, and I love that you used Doyeon as your face claim she's probably one of my favorite IOI members. It seems to me that her fashion sense is laid back and comfortable and that may be due to the fact that she has too much work between school and gymnastics. Her personality is a lot like Haeyoung; but, more sociable and open to making new friends. It also explains why she doesn't get along with people similar to Jooheon, and Hoseok. Her background is sad, but I can see how she became how she is. Why she's inconsiderate. It may be because her parents were rarely around her, and her brother never returned the love she had for him. It's also nice how you included how she became a gymnast and how it connected to her mother and her work. That was lovely. The relationship section is interesting. I like how she wants to get along with Haeyoung but can't because she's friends with Jooheon whom she hates. Also like that you made her best friends with Hyunwoo, and that she gets along with Kihyun because she feels bad for him. Oh my gosh, and another one who wants to be friends with Minhyuk but he pushes her away. Her trivia and interview are perfect, and her reasons for being in the gym are obviously good. Her GPA, extracurricular activities, detentions, suspensions, squad positions, and reasons are all great so good job. And you're the first person to choose Hyunwoo as a love interest! (I thought no one would :( but thank you!) Alright, you fit his personality perfectly, so good job. Their love story is soo cute but kind of sad seeing as Hyunwoo feels like Seoyul doesn't like him. Overall it was a wonderful app to read! Min Seoyul is accepted!
KONG SHIM : JUNIOR : ENROLLED
MIJOO OF LOVELYZ. HYUNWOO'S PLOTLINE. CAPTAIN. THE STUDENT COUNCIL VICE PRESIDENT. JACY.
Hi, Jacy, thank you for applying! I'm really glad that everything worked out on the app after what we discussed. Her basic information is great, and I love that she has a laid back style but a professional vibe. I especially love how she tries to stay business-like with her style because of the way that people precieve her. It's interesting to see that you choose her to have a weak persona despite the fact that she's the student council president and compared to the other apps as well. I defintetly like that you didn't just make her the usual weak girl; but, that she knows what to do when she is weak and tries to fix it. It's interesting that she doesn't like scholarship students and that has to do with Minki's influence on her. Her background information is interesting, I wish that you included more about Shim's mom and Hyunwoo's dad. Such as how the two feel about their parents dating each other after everything that happened with their relationship. Not to mention, are they living with each other? When you think the wedding should be? Excetra. Also, do you think her father will ever make an apperance? Was she upset when her father left? How did she feel overall? I'm not saying you need to go back and add more; but, if you can tell me in the comments that would be great. The relationships are fine though, it's not mandatory to include everyone it's just nice. And you included a good amount of information about Minki. Her GPA, extracurriculer activities, detentions, suspensions, squad position, and reasons are all good. So good job. And the love story is perfect. You got Hyunwoo's personality down perfectly, not to mention you included everything that's need to be known about their past and present relationship. So, good job. Overall it was a good app; but, if you could answer my questions it would be great. Thank you. Kong Shim is accepted!
PARK SORA : JUNIOR : ENROLLED
JINE OF OMG. HYUNGWON'S PLOTLINE. FLYER. SHIN HOSEOK'S INVISIBLE COUSIN. GEN.
Hi, Gen, thank you for applying! Your app is wonderful, I feel so happy that you put so much work into your app. I think that means you must like the story? (Thank you if you do.) Anyways, let's get started. I find it really interesting that you chose her to be Hoseok's cousin, and I applaud all the connections you made throughout the app. It's perfect. Her basic information is great, and I love the fact that you used JinE. She fits as Sora's fc. Especially because you chose to make her adorable, but have a laidback and almost plain style of appearance and fashion sense. Her personality is interesting, I like that you chose to make her more of a calm and weak-ish person. One that has to rely on others when she doesn't know how to get through a situation. But, I also like that you included she can be strong when it comes to intellect. Like, she'd be the one who'd break someone's mentality rather than physicality. Her background is great; but, the only question I have is: are the uncle & aunt she's staying with Hoseok's parents? Or are they another family member? Her fear of heights because of gymnastics is definitely realistic, I myself had a team-member (on my cheerleading team) who was deathly afraid of being thrown in the air so instead of being a flyer she transitioned into being a main-dancer/tumbler. The relationships are all good, thank you for including everyone! It's always easier to form relationships when I see the view from the creator. Her interview is perfect, along with her trivia. And her reason for being in the gym is also good--and is explained further down in the GPA section. (Also, I'm guessing the nickname 'granny' is due to the 'granny ' and was probably blessed by Jooheon?) All of the school information, and cheer position is good. So, there's no need for change. I enjoyed reading the love story between Hyungwon and Sora. You got his personality to a T. Between his fake-ness and soft personality. And thank you for including their back story, and the reasons Sora can't stand him. (Because even though she's Hoseok's cousin, there has to be other problems.) Anyways, your app was flawless, and I honestly love the details you put into it! Thank you! Park Sora is accepted!
CHOI JAEMI : FRESHMAN : ENROLLED
YERI OF RV. HOSEOK'S PLOTLINE. BASE. THE GEEKY ATHLETE. JANE.
Hi, Jane, thank you for applying! Oh my gosh, I love Jay, I just...I don't know what to say. She's such a well-rounded and cute character. Her basic information is great, and (I think) you're the first app that features a character that was raised in America. So, that's something that's new and I like that a lot. I love the fact that she has a laidback style, it seems to fit well with everyone else's characters. And Yeri as a FC was a good choice. (She's adorable and underrated.) Wow, you put a lot of work into her personality and background. I'm in awe. It's seems to me that she's such a friendly character that'll try to get along with everyone but if they rub her the wrong way, she'll definitely show off her opinion of them and won't back down from saying she doesn't like them. Her background is interesting. It's sad that she was in the accident with her mom, and that she evidently lost her mother to the accident. That her father became closed off from it, and shoved the responsibility of her siblings onto her. I see that you featured a friend from a soccer team. Sooyoung, and it's cool to see that she has friends because many of the apps don't include them. I think you're the first person to have Haeyoung as a 'friend'. Most apps tend to have her as an enemy rather than a friend, so thank you! I guess they're friends or maybe it's just a complicated relationship. Jaemi likes Haeyoung, Haeyoung is indifferent, and Jooheon is 'bleh' about her. It would be hilarious to see a scene with Minhyuk, Jaemi and Haeyoung. I can picture Jaemi sending Haeyoung looks like 'i know you like him' and Haeyoung just glaring at her while Minhyuk stares at them thinking they're a bunch of weirdos. It's also cute that she has a crush on Hyunwoo. That poor kid. Her trivia is very detailed, thank you for that. And her interview is cute, and the fact she was in the gym to see Hyunwoo lol. Adorable. All of the school, and cheer information is good as well. Man, Hoseok is getting a lot of love with these apps. (But, he is handsome so...lol) The relationship between them is definitely interesting, and you portrayed him perfectly. Especially his personality. One thing I have to ask though, is if Jaemi ever met Hyungwon? Hoseok and Hyungwon's friendship would've ended about a year before she entered Daejeon Prep. The only reason I ask this is because you state she and Hoseok were friends for four years, and if they were friends for that long I'm sure he would've introduced her to his best friend. Unless, their friendship was strictly just hanging out at each others houses because they were bored; but, the way you explain it makes me believe they're actual friends who like being in each other's company. If you could answer that in the comments, that would be wonderful! Overall, your app is great (including the ending of their love story in the comments). Choi Jaemi is accepted!
KANG SARANG : JUNIOR : ENROLLED
KRYSTAL OF FX. KIHYUN'S PLOTLINE. CAPTAIN. THE STAR SWIMMER. BLUE.
Hi,Blue! Thank you for applying! You picked her to be a swimmer, I love swimming so much! My best friend is actually a swimmer, and I've watched her comps since we were in middle school. And she's French! My foreign language in high school was French, I took it for all four years. Are you like, psychic or something? (lol) Okay, so her basic information is great, and doesn't need any change. It's good that she doesn't change her hair to crazy colors; because, the school does have a probation week for those who dye their hair to colors that aren't considered natural (ie. pink, blue, green). Also, it's improper for a swimmer, sense (over a small period of time) the dye changes color. Especially hair that's of a bright hue, like a bright pink or platinum blonde. Also her fashion sense is great, it's different from everyone else's. She's more proper rather than laid-back. As for her personality, it's great, I love it. All the traits mesh-well, and make her seem so real. I like that she seems open, and inviting (and doesn't judge others) but will ignore, and be ignorant if people dare to hurt her. Her background is sad, with her parents being ignorant to her feelings and her grandfather passing away. At least she sort of has her brother? He seems supportive, he's just not there. The relationship sections, is great, and I don't mind that you didn't include everyone. The trivia, and interview is also great. Along with the school and squad information. The love interest section is definitely adorable (and yay, another Kihyun app!!) You nailed Kihyun's personality to a T. Overall, I love your app, Sarang seems like a well-rounded character. Kang Sarang is accepted!
BAE MIYOUNG : JUNIOR : ENROLLED
HAEIN OF LABOUM. HOSEOK'S PLOTLINE. FLYER. THE HAPPY-VIRUS. ALYSSA.
Hi, Alyssa, thank you for applying! I think Miyoung would be a great addition to the characters I already have. I like that you choose her to be a bright and happy person, who's misleading to the eye. The only mistake I could spot in the basic information is you state her name to be 'Bae Miyoung' throughout the fic but in the first line where it asks for first/last name, you put 'Moon Miyoung'. It could just be a typo, but if you could reconfirm what her last name is, that would be great. :) I love that you choose Haein as a face claim, what a cutie! And she definitely fits Miyoung's, happy-virus personality. Just to note, I saw that you were worried she might be a cliched Mary Sue. I don't think you have anything to worry about. Even though she's happy go-lucky, she's had a lot go on in her life, which means she has a layer underneath that happiness. Probably bitterness, and when it comes out I'm sure it's not something anyone would want to see. Especially from happy Miyoung. Her background probably attributes to this. Between her mother leaving her at such a young age (which really isn't a good example for future her) and her father pushing her and pushing her; there's frustration probably building inside of her. And she's probably passive aggressive, which means she'll have to let off steam and one day she'll explode from it all. As for the relationships, I find it lovely that you managed to include everyone (even Haeyoung). So, she's good friends with Hyungwon but only knows little of his past friendship with Hoseok. Interesting. The trivia, and interview are fine, so no need for change. Along with the school, and squad information. Hoseok is the love interest! Man, he's soooo popular. You also explained his personality perfectly, and their love story is adorable. I will probably have to change a few things, like you said; but, for the most part it was lovely. Overall, I really enjoyed reading your app. Bae Miyoung is accepted!
KANG JIYOON : JUNIOR : ENROLLED
JEONYUL OF STELLAR. JOOHEON'S PLOTLINE. BACKSPOT. THE LAW ENFORCER. STEPH.
Hi, Steph, I'm glad you were able to get the app in before the deadline was up, and I'm incredibly happy to see another Jooheon app! I only have one so far, seeing another is so happy. (And it's not just because he's my bias wrecker lol). The basic information is great, the nicknames were interesting. I especially like 'gwisin' and can imagine certain members of the squad calling her that. I know that you picked Jeoyul as a face claim, and if I remember correctly: she's in her early twenties like twenty-one or something. I think she's okay as a face claim, thankfully she isn't too old for the age. And I do think she fits the character well. Especially style wise and of course, apperance. I like that she has a minimalistic style, it fits well with her background and personality. Can I just say, I love her personality? She seems to be the type of person I'd get along with. And even though she's strong and firm, she's flexible and friendly. People may find her to be the tough girl; but, it seems like she's actually quite a softy. Her background, specifically the way she grew up with her mom and dad: was extremely interesting. She takes more after her dad, but maybe not so much with her mother. When in actuality, I think she does take after her mother. Maybe she just doesn't see it. The relationship section is perf. I like her friendship with Hyunwoo, and Hyungwon. Even they don't hang out with each other, she hangs out with them. Also, Changkyun, what a cute relationship. And her relationship with Haeyoung is interesting. Maybe she wants to be friends; but, maybe she doesn't because of Jooheon. Is she jealous of their relationship? The trivia and interview section and perfect. Telling me bits about her past is cool. The school and squad information is great. And I think you chose a good position on the squad for her. Aw man, the relationship between Jooheon and Jiyoon is adorable and made laugh a bit. I could definitely picture him flirting to get out of a situation that she's caught him in. Overall, it was a wonderful app to read. I love Jiyoon a lot. Kang Jiyoon is accepted!
YOO HYERYUNG : JUNIOR : ENROLLED
LEE JIEUN (IU). HOSEOK'S PLOTLINE. BACKSPOT. THE SPIRITED AHJUMMA. CHAE.
Hi, Chae, I'm super happy you were able to get your lovely app in the day you said. Can I just say how happy I am with everything you included? It's all so perfect, and planned out wonderfully. (And there's so much detail it makes me cry in happiness!) Her basic information is really well done. All the nicknames, and such, are perfect. I'm glad you chose IU for her face claim (I was waiting for someone) and not just because she's beautiful and one of my favorite singers and actresses lol, no. I think she fits the role of Hyeryung well. As she's supposed to be abnormal and 'oldish' in her personality of caring and nurture but also childish in the way she acts as she's immature with jealousy. It reminds of IU's role in You are the best, Lee Soon Shin! Her appearance, and fashion sense are really well done. I especially love her eccentric looks. I think it fits her immensely well. On to her personality. It's beautifully written. My gosh! I love how you've written her as someone people assume to be awkward, and a bit weird because she's hard to talk to and get along with. In the end, she's someone who's caring, sweet, and kind to the people she cares for. I also like that she's possessive and jealous, and honestly immature. It outlines the fact that she's still just a teenager. The background is great, including how she grew up in Daejeon and Seoul with her little sister and parents. One question I do have is, did her parents move back to Daejeon? Or does she live on campus and go back home for the weekends? I think that's the only thing I could find if you did include in it. The relationship panel is great, I definitely like her relationship with Kihyun. The trivia is detailed, as well with the interview, school, and squad information. As for as I can tell: nothing needs to be changed. The love interest section made me squeal. Her and Hoseok are super cute but also angsty seeing as she and Hyungwon both work for yearbook committee and are friends? Anyways, it was a lovely app to read and I think you for applying! Yoo Hyeryung is accepted!
JO JEONGHA : SOPHOMORE : ENROLLED
SOLBIN OF LABOUM. JOOHEON'S PLOTLINE. BACKSPOT. THAT WACKY UNCLE. ALIA.
Hi, Alia! I'm glad you were able to get your app in, and also don't mind me, I wasn't upset or anything. I didn't mind waiting. Quality over quantity, right? Anyways, let's get started! I surely enjoyed reading your app, Jeongha seems exactly like a wacky young teenager. The basic information is good. Her nickname is cute, and goes along with her personality great. And you even back it up in the personality section as well, which is great. I think Solbin as a face claim is an interesting choice; and she fits well. Solbin has a lot of interesting features (specifically her 'cat-eyes' and nose) that I think fit well with the way you describe Jeongha overall. I'm not meaning with the appearance section, but more based on her personality and style. The personality section was stylized interestingly wise. Having tidbits from other classmates, students (whatever they may be) to describe her was kind of cool to see; and yet, got all the information in perfectly. Her background section, albeit sad, wasn't overly dramatic (thank you!). I'm glad it isn't a sob story, because I doubt it would fit with the way she is. (Sleep paralysis, my mom has that, she says it's scary. like you can't control your body and you're just lying there wide awake calling out for somebody to help. *shivers*) The relationship panel was fun to read. It's cute that she has a crush on Hyunwoo (yet he doesn't know she exists) and is good friends with Hoseok and Changkyun. Also, thank you for including Haeyoung in your app, it's always a pleasure to see! The trivia, interview, school, and squad information are all perfect. And the explanations for detentions was actually refreshing and funny to read. The love interest section is actually quite adorable? Haha, like, I can totally picture that kiss scene in my head and it has me cackling. The only thing that caught me off guard (but isn't a major anything really) was in the scene suggestion category. You mentioned a girl named 'Ahri' but nowhere else in the app is she mentioned. If you could just clear that up, in the comments, that would be great. Other than that, the app was wonderful! Jo Jeongha is accepted!
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