I need help with a story title.

Alright people, I need help with a story title for my fanfic that I will be uploading later on in the next month or so? I've been writing it for a year and I'm waiting for it to be finished till I upload it. Anyways back to my point, I'm going to give you all a little snippet and hopefully you all can comment down below what you think the title should be.

 

Snippet:

As we neared the office we saw my father sitting in the middle overlooking the table with the tv's remote held in his hand as he waited. Mr. Christensen and Hayden sat across from each other as well, I felt a weight on my shoulders entering the office. "Take a seat you two." My father said not looking at us, his eyes plastered to the glass table. Hina and I sat close to each other a seat away from Hayden. "Would anyone like to explain to me what happened last night after dinner?" My father spoke up looking at the three of us. I looked around and saw Hayden rubbing his bruised jaw and Hina looking around puffing her cheeks. "Well since you're looking around why don't you explain to me what happened, Rikki."
"We took Hayden around like you asked." I said.
"Is this what you call a tour?!" He clicked the tv on and the article showed on the screen. All three of us looked up at it quietly.

"TOPSTARNEWS: 'With graduation ticking down seems as though these popular teens are finding love' During one of the most hippest parties in the gangnam region these group of high school seniors got together to party hard. To the point where they knocked out in the backseat of a car (see picture of Bang Minsoo future CEO of Korea's prestigious hotels and Park Rikki also future CEO of 'Adonis' malls.) Or to being so drunk your friends have to take you home (Hayden Christensen a future CEO sophomore in college being carried by Rikki, Hina her sister, and Gongchan Korea's top star model.) check out some videos our news men caught at 3:00 in the morning of Korea's newest love birds Minsoo and Rikki and also Hayden's stumbling antics at the 'Hales Arc Resort and Hotel.'"

My father looked at us and clicked on another article playing the video. I looked down noticing it was the video of cap and I saying goodbye to each other wrapped in each other's arms. The next video was Hayden being carried out of gongchan's car and into the hotel stumbling over the stairs.

"Oh and one more that would just be the cherry on top for this whole situation." My father clicked onto another video of a TMZ video.

"Seems like the coachella and EDC bad boy has found a girl who can probably hold him down?" One of the men joked around and laughed. "So apparently they're graduating in a few weeks and are going to start filling in for their future companies, I mean if you want the companies to turn into a MMA fighting ring. Get it because of that dude that fought at coachella." My father turned off the tv and set the remote down rather harshly. He leaned back and set his hands on the armrests staring us down, "Mr. Christensen would you like to ask them anything?"
"I don't think it's my place to say anything to your children. But I want to know how my son got a bruise on his jaw?" He looked at Hina and I. My eyes lowered and side eyed Hina and saw her staring right back at me.
"I fell down tripping over the stairs and my jaw landed onto the railing." Hayden said rubbing his yellow bruise.
"Is this true?" My father looked at us.
"Yeah that's when we were helping him walk." Hina said nodding.
"I trusted you two and you brought Hayden to a party filled with your friends? Just so you could get out of showing him around your own home country." My father shook his head, "I'm really upset and disappointed at you two. Not only this but you made the tabloids in your new profound love life with cap." He looked at me, "after all these times I've told you that you shouldn't be caught around him cause his reputation will cause trouble for us as well."
"us." I scoffed smiling in disbelief, "wow."
"Excuse me?" His voice turned dark, "is there something you have to say?"
"Us this and us that. Cap and I don't involve us- it involves him and I. If you can't except the fact that him and I are together then you best get used to it." My fathers face turned red with rage and he held his tongue taking another breath before saying anything else. He raised his finger to me, "you are seriously walking on a thin line Rikki. I'm telling you now when it becomes too much in my eyes, I already have a plan B set for you. Let me tell you, you won't have a say in it in any type of way." His eyes dark with anger and his teeth seethed threats. "If I have to enforce it soon I will."

 

Let me know of a title you thought of from this snippet thing. Thank you! Yall are helping me a lot.

 

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http://www.be-a-better-writer.com/punctuate-dialogue.html
(There are punctuation errors in this fic, so be careful of that!)

Some possible titles name could be:

"The ____ World (ex. Corporate, Red, etc)"

"Problems of a Future CEO"

"How to Fix a Scandal 101"

Sorry, these titles sound really childish now that I think about it. I'll wish you some luck for finding a cool title, haha.