Again with the idea! Urgh!

So my first idea of a TOPHee (TOP & SoHee) Fiction is an idolAU with Sohee being amodel and TOP being a tycoon.

Now my second idea is about TOP Going to war and leaving SoHee behind. TOP is the 3rd General of Seoul and Sohee is the Army wife. They promised each other that TOP will come back safe and sound and Sohee will take care of herself and their unborn baby. 

But things aren't going as planned. TOP can't coma back for 5 more years. Recriutments and assigning the medals of duty was the first reason. But it added 2 more years because North Korea Declared war against South Kor. Sohee was devistated. She gave birth to Xiumin without TOP by her side. She saw xiumin's firts crawl withouth TOP. She heard his first words all alone and he raised Xiumin all by herself. 

Yes they get a few video calls from each other and few letters and gifts and checks from the government but Sohee wanted TOP not the money. She wanted to cry and yell and tell TOP to quit but one day, they recieved a telegram saying the government was sorry for their loss. 

TOP's group was surrounded by No Kor military and was destroyed. Savaged. 

Sohee cried and cried and cried. Xiumin grew up without TOP and he will continue to grow without really knowing his father.

Of course. That was until Xiumin was 11 and Sohee was 32 when TOP finaly came back. But he died! 

Did he?

 

ORAYT YOU IF YOU COPIED MY WORK! YOU IF YOU PLAGARIZED IT AND YOU IF I SAW THAT YOU HAVE THE SAME PLOT AS I HAD! I WILL FIND YOU IF YOU EVER TOOK THIS AWAY FROM ME! 

Now that we're all clear, please tell me if my idea is awesome and if it is, thank you. :)

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ARISxx
#1
So first you are wrong. In mine rap monster gets really sick has turns to family to get treatment. Leaving his boyfriend alone and depressed only hurting himself. Because of the mood swings rap monster cuts off all connections with kookie. Kookie then turns to his old high school boyfriend V to fix him or fill a gap that was left. But when rap monster comes back he is damaged from the treatment in a mental way and becomes abusive and controlling. Kookie looks for V again and then I'll continue from there. I can see how we both have stories were plot twist are similar, like leaving a loved one. But I couldn't have copies you if I have no clue about this blog post from you. I thought of my stories the day I updated the first chapter. I just found this and I'm sorry if it seems like I did something to make you mad. But this is my own original idea.
But I'm interested in yours and would also like to read it.
U-KissDongHo
#2
YOU BETTER BE DOING THIS FIC YOOO AND DONT LEAVE IT HANGING OR I'LL HAUNT YOU IN YOUR SLEEP