Free Fall

Description

First story Im posting after 6 years of being a member of AFF. LMAO. 

Its an output for one of my english class. I changed the names from the original fic I passed. 

The story was inspired by the new released LOSER MV by Bigbang 'cause VIP here.

 

Enjoy :)

Foreword

 

This is it, he thought. He is standing on the concrete railings of his balcony. Living in the 21th floor, the view overlooking the city always mesmerize him. The cold breeze hitting his cheeks made him smile.

 

 

“Life is really good”, he whispered in the air like a man whispering to his lover, soft and sweet. He closed his eyes trying to think a reason on why he should not do it. The more he pondered over the coldness of his existence, the more certainty overwhelms his hesitations about his plan. He lifted his right foot without any reluctance. He made his last smile clothed with pure sadness. It was then followed by his right foot.

 

And that was it, he had just made the last step of his life.

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secretseven
#1
Chapter 2: This could have been flushed out more but the premise is pretty good. I wished it was much longer though. :D but good job nevertheless
NiShiNanDeWoYiAi #2
Guess who? Ahaha, I want to be someone different here. XD
So back to the story. How do I put this...changing the names gave it a different feel. I don't know if it's the 'feel' of a fanatic but it got spicier. Like I've said, I love open-endings.
Did he die or the possibility of him still alive...things like that.
Anyway, good work!

That six years you're saying, it doesn't seem that way. Stop being lazy and let those juicy ideas spill already!