Meeting her for the first time

If I could go back In Time...

 It was Christmas that day. Snow Fell everywhere. Anywhere you look, you can see nothing but a white Christmas. I was still 7 yrs. old at that time. We always go to our grandparents for the holidays. I tried to tell them I don't want to come but somehow they always make to come with them.

It was year 2000, we landed at America and as usual our grandparents' driver is already there waiting for us. I Looked at the window and amazed of what I saw!!! Snow covers everything Buildings, playgrounds and even the towers. But the most amazing I saw is A girl. A girl that resembles what I describe as an angel but then "Hey Aaron! Come on! Were here" Wang zi my twin brother interrupted. I suddenly woke up from my sudden dream but still I act like I don't really heard him. "Hey!!! Are you coming or what?!?" He shouted at me. "I'll Be there just wait." I answered rudely. When I turned again, she's gone. I felt very lonely.

As I entered the halls of our grandparent's mansion, I saw my father talking to someone I don't. He introduced as to them and i learned that they where my father's friends.

The next day, my dad asked me to wear my special shirt cuz' he's friend's daughter is coming that could be my type. A few minutes later they came... I was going outside when someone hold my arm and heard a beautiful voice. "Where are you going? May I come?" I turned and saw her the one on the park yesterday. With her beautiful golden and hair and a face the looks like an angel from above but when I was going to ask her name I suddenly fainted but one thing is on my mind Who is She???

As I wake up, I saw someone staring at me. I was surprised seeing her there."Who are you? Why are you here?" the first words that came out of my mouth. She didn't reply but instead she smiled at me. I was annoyed that in spite of my questions, she just smile at me. I ask her again the same question. This time, she spoke "You're cute while sleeping. Hi! I'm Gui Gui. My parents sent me here so you will have someone with you here while they are out"."Oh, so what do you want to do Gui Gui?"I asked her. "Well, why don't we play outside?" she replied. I agreed to what she suggested. We played outside. Everyday for many days our friendship grow stronger and stronger. "Gui Gui, My Very Best Friend" the what best describe Gui Gui.

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NomightyCopYCaT
#1
Hello there, a new reader here. The story seems interesting so please update more often. :)
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-atelophobia
#3
awww so cute, they finally met again! you got to update soon, finally all those years they have finally met each other! (:<br />
Support GuiLun always and ForeveR<33<br />
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chibimisaki
#4
Haha. =] my first time to read this..
vyce01
#5
Update!
yan_yan02
#6
wew!s0 deep,hey i'm dr0wning!hahah,..hmm..haixt!wat d0 u think of me a translat0r??i cant understand!just say it...tsk3
Bubble
#7
Update Sooooooooooooooooooon<br />
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mystery_me #8
Hanep sa description...
Bubble
#9
Gahh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!<br />
I have been missing your update so freaking much xD<br />
You gotta update soon and don't make me wait tooo long OK!
-atelophobia
#10
aww you updated!<3 aww they met again? that is so cute, i am glad hehe thanks for updating hehe..update soon! (:<br />
Support GuiLun always and ForeveR<33<br />
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