Chapter 2: I love both ending..the first just so painful & heartbreaking but beautiful..the second so sweet & lovely but still beautiful..
The story just amazing..
Chapter 2: I really love both ending i can't decide which is better :3
The first is so real and painful but also beautiful and the second is so cute and lovely ♡
Chapter 2: First of all how dare you? This is so well written and I'm crying so much and I don't know which ending I like more, the realness of the first ending or the alternate ending for indulging my ship, ugh you need an award this is so damn beautiful
Chapter 2: This is so them that it hurts. Ugh. Alternative endings. We have a love hate relationship. I find why self crying and going, "NOPE!! You can't just rewind!!! TTATT" but then my mind decides to go, "But....But...B.A.P did it in One Shot QAQ Why cant I have a different ending as well...." But honestly for the first official chapter I was hoping Hanbin would start dating Jinhwan (love him) and then...maybe...accidentally....Bobby would get HELLA jealous. That would be wonderful. Not say Hanbin would be using Jinhwan. Like Jinhwan would tell him how he feels, B would talk a SUPER leap of faith, pray about it, say yes after thinking, be happy like he deserves and be able to move on!! :D Annnnnd Bobby would see them being cute and perfect and get jealous. Yay. I'm evil I know. But this is how my brain works. But I love the alternative ending. This is hella canon to me. Loving like they hate. Ugh. So them. So rough and raw yet safe and scared of loss. Wonderful. Thank you for my feels XD
Chapter 1: Awwww!! Noooooooooo. Hanbin's aren't allowed to be broken by Bobby's T~T This was painful and beautiful though. B.I with his tattoos and always being poetic and his prayers and needing the strength that he's lost but is getting back slowly as time goes on. It's perfect. He's perfect as always. The part in the club with the random girl that was able to read him was wonderful. Oh my god. I will forever remember that scene. I was prepared to throw knives at this woman and she looked in his eyes and saw YEARS of longing that she had felt herself. I just...so beautiful. From one kiss. Ugh. My heart.
Chapter 2: First of all... it's 3am and I wish I could write a long comment to show you how much I appreciate this, but I can barely keep my eyes open. (this is basically my bedtime story for tonight and I feel like I'm going to have sweet dreams.) anyways I love this. I love how it's written with all the little details, and I can't tell you how it amazes me how well I can identify myself with Hanbin. I have never been in his position before, but the way you write about his feelings it's just so... sincere, that when I read about them I feel like those are my own. Well, and I like the second ending more (fan of happy endings), but both were beautiful in their own ways. thank you for giving your readers the chance to "choose" what they like better. and thank you for the beautiful story, of course.
Chapter 2: The alternate ending is great. I would love for this to have happened because I want Hanbin to be happy and you wrote it in a way where you can feel the emotions.
But even so, I do think that both endings do you story justice based on the fact that they both seem as if they could have happened.
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