Keep on the Road

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Description

"Sleep well, Jongin."

Foreword

Title: Keep on the Road
Pairing: Kaisoo
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance, Tragedy, Slightangst, Psychological, Slice of Life
Length: Threeshot (3/3)
Summary: Jongin is his favourite hello, and his hardest goodbye.

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real-iu
#1
Chapter 3: I want to ask you how long did it take you to write this fanfic? and where did you come up with the idea?
queenof-hearts
#2
Chapter 2: this chapter has so many hidden clues about kyungsoo and jongin. firstly, their syntax and vocabulary is vast so it's either they're high achievers of english or is just naturally born with a mature encephalon. secondly, the way jongin is fickle yet careful with his words. he knows when to joke and when there's a solemn situation, and he treats kyungsoo as if some sort of glass. thirdly, the seconds and hours of each message sent strictly corresponds to the event and makes actual sense. it's as if you know where to place each time. fourthly, though jongin and kyungsoo are both males, they inherit different personalties. i've picked up that jongin is more carefree, kind and overly self-obsessed and kyungsoo is rather reserved, calm but sarcastic. it really hit me hard to see how identical yet different both these characters are, and i'm almost certain you spent days on drafting for this fanfic. lastly, the links of hospitals informed me that kyungsoo was a sufferer of mental health issues and he was emotionally unstable. i was a bit disappointed on how the story ended so abruptly, but then i realised that maybe you intended it to end like so because (perhaps) you were trying to reference it with life. as the comment below me states that life is unexpected, thus we need to be prepared for it.
nonetheless, good job. i'll be watching you carefully so goodluck for your future fanfics!
eeeeeeeee #3
Chapter 3: It was a bad choice to read this at night. I cried for a good hour and now my eyes are puffy. When I first read this fanfic, I was sort of confused about a lot of things until I read it two more times. It's so tragic. Not because Kyungsoo killed himself because he thought Jongin died, but because the pair of them never got to tell eachother how much they loved one another. It's the words unsaid that hit me most. I've learnt to never leave things to the last minute and to always say what I want to say. Life's unexpected and we need to prepare for the unexpected instead of waiting for it to happen. I guess a part of me was attached to this fanfic so that's the reason I cried so much and thought about it all day. It really is a good fanfic and worth my time. Thank you for writing this.
mybabykris #4
Chapter 2: for every 'this message has been deleted," i wonder what Kyungsoo or Jongin wanted to say to eachother
audreyyyy #5
Chapter 3: omg THIS IS SO SAD WTF :'((((
jypnationn #6
Chapter 3: my question: why would you do that?
myderpchanyeol
#7
Chapter 3: ok let me gather my thoughts
whAT IN THE ACTUAL F*UCK
OMG THIS CANNOT BE REAL
I AM SO ANGRY AND SAD AND CRYING MY EYES OUT
SO KYUNGSOO THOUGHT JONGIN DIED?? AND HE DIDNT??
AND WHAT THE HECK MAN I GOT SO MANY FEELS LIKE WHAT
I WAS SAD IN CHAPTER ONE, LAUGHING AND GIGGLING LIKE A MAD PERSON IN CHAPTER 2 THEN CRYING LIKE A BABY IN CHAPTER THREE
I CANT EVEN DESCRIBE HOW I FEEL
I AM DONE
ok sorry for that just had so many feels man i want a sequel this nEEDS A SEQUEL IM TELLING YOU
ChrisChocoholicThing
#8
Chapter 3: Wow, I just read this and lord, I cried. At first, I was giggling with Jongin's king obsession and Kyungsoo's oh-so-wonderful sass and then bam, the inevidable happened. Man, I shouldn't be having all those feels at 3am but damn, this fic was so worth reading.
And I loved how the main part was mostly skype messages because I have tons on friends that live far away and this whole situation seemed awfully familiar, I could just relate to the whole thing.
Great job!
tumblah
#9
Chapter 3: -SPOILER AHEAD-
This is what I think the story is about:
In the initial chapter, the messages Kyungsoo was supposedly writing is for Jongin who isn't there.
In the second chapter, it goes back to when they first met. It starts with a conversation then becomes more than just that. The extra paragraphs at the end of (nearly) every dialogue belongs to Kyungsoo. Most of their talks mention some sort of health concern, therefore, I'm guessing that something's wrong with Kyungsoo. Perhaps a mental condition? At the end of the chapter, Kyungsoo kills himself by taking an overdose.
In the final chapter, it forwards to the future where Jongin tells his and Kyungsoo's story to 'their' adopted child.
I'm actually digging this whole thing. It must of taken so long to write. Good job! I'm looking forward to your next story!